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Reviews for Not My Lover

By : Zrina
  • From roro237 on August 24, 2011
    Happy Birthday!
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  • From roro237 on February 15, 2011
    Hey Z! I miss you:) I just wanted to touch base with you in 2011. ^_^
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 22, 2009
    damn that was hot tho some one needs to make sure she never gets her way
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  • From ANON - Myra on August 30, 2009
    Uh, am I the only one who thinks Naruto is so freaking sexy in this story? (Who am I kidding? He was oozing dominance and masculinity!). Holy hell, Sasuke's one lucky guy. He is! And despite all that, you still maintained this air of equality between them - which is amazing, I must say. I think that's one of the most important things in a relationship.

    Yep. I'm pretty much very satisfied with your Naruto and Sasuke. *chuckles*

    And... Sakura. Sakura, Sakura. Quite the cunning one. Clever plan, I must say, and for that, I just can't feel sorry for her. What hurt she felt, she inflicted them upon herself, yknow? Once you decide to do something, you always have to face the consequences of your actions. I CAN, however, sympathize for her a little, if only because I know despite her love for Naruto (platonic love, of course), she was truly helpless when it comes to her love for Sasuke. In the end, she made a decision, which somehow redeemed her character slightly.

    Thank you for sharing with us this brilliant story. Keep up the good work! x
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  • From roro237 on August 23, 2009
    Happy Birthday! Happy Birthday to you happy birthday dear Z happy birthday to you! Mine was last Thursday and the party was Saturday. Not as much fun as last years but nice:) You have a wonderful birthday tomorrow even if it's a Monday I know you'll have a great day ^_^
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  • From ANON - anon on July 14, 2009
    damn. Just....damn!!!!!!! that was amazing. I appreciate your gift so much. What I loved best (perhaps, so MUCH to love) was the realism. The awkward situation, an dthe exposure of the different personalities that the situation caused. And those different personalities were...perfect. Naruto! Jeez...if I had my choice of anybody...I was hooked from his first line! He is so immediate and intuitive, he just busted through all the bullshit to realize, andfurthermore, to SAY, "she wants to fuck you! How can you lie to a man with such a powerful sense of smell? Another thing I greatly appreciate is the balance between the two boys. I love how they so deeply trust each other, and are so passionate, but their sex still involves (when they want it to) the best parts of their pre-sexual relationship, the sparring. But of course, maybe that was sexual too. I love that they can take turns being dominant, and that they can fight for it, in such a wonderfully none violent way. All the passion, none of the hate. Anyway, So, so much to love here. PLEASE keep writing. PLEASE keep writing narusasu.
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  • From roro237 on February 20, 2009
    Z! I never get tired of your stories:) ~I miss you~ You know this story never gets old to me. Not that any of them do:) I still think you have their characters nailed so wonderfully in this. Naruto and Sasuke just need to look at each other to understand what the other is thinking feeling or wanting. I love how you put that into words. And Sakura needing to be hit over the head to get the message Sasuke doesn't love you like that. She hits Naruto to much. I do see alot of anime girls with hitting addiction:) Whenever I'm here I like to write you:) I'm still your self proclaim number one fan no matter what! You were my first(smile)favorite author ^_^

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  • From roro237 on November 28, 2008
    I'll never get tier of this story. It's a beauitful cold sunny day here and my first story of the day is this:) I miss you writting new stuff but I understand. I read you are going though a bit of a block right now. Hey! I believe in you and I know it will soon become crystal clear for your ideas to flow once more:) I think I'll go to Dreams and reread some chapter today to. ^_^
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  • From roro237 on October 20, 2008
    Z when I need something soft and sweet that puts a warm smile on my face and maybe alittle heat somewhere lower I come read this story. ^_^
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  • From roro237 on September 15, 2008
    Z! I'm missing you and chapter(2)two of "Dreams of Fire". I came to read this one of my all time favorite to help me make it though:) Tomorrow is Zrinaday and I'm hoping that there will be a new chapter of DOF! Please note there is no presser from your self proclaimed number one fan who by the way forgot to send you a happy b-day Aug 24th. I have a very good reason. My b-day was the 20th which was a Wed and the surprise get together was Sunday which was the 24th. Well I should have send my wishs to you earlyer because later I was (3) three sheets in the wind:) Hoping you had as much fun as I did on the 24TH ^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 12, 2008
    Love this story:) Ok! I love all your stories:) I miss you! There hasn't been a Zrinaday in along while. I'm having major withdraws:) But to help I always come back and do some rereading. I hope you didn't thing your self proclaim #1 fan would forget about you huh?!(not likly) So next I'm going to my all time favorite Sound of Dreams. Miss you ^_^
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  • From ANON - emphyrical on March 29, 2008
    I didn't want to log in (being the lazy ass that I am xD) but I just had to login to review this piece.

    Heh. Since no one else has brought it up yet, I loved that quote from Sasuke:

    “If I had never met him, I would have died inside a long time ago."

    Masterfully placed into the whole scheming of things. Hit the nail right on the head.


    Hope to see more from you you marvelous writer.
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  • From knize16 on March 17, 2008
    Damn! I have never read anything like that before. Another great work from you. Too bad it's a one shot, but you gave the fic closure. The depth of understanding between Naruto and Sasuke was wonderful to see. They compliment each other so well. Hope to read more great fics from you. Ja ne!
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  • From RyuuOokami on March 13, 2008
    Wow this was... so great. It was really cool to see these three's feelings for each other, just how complicated but yet simple you put it. You really catched me through the whole thing there! *smiles*
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  • From ANON - dokuro on March 11, 2008
    i cant tell if i like this story. i dont like the fact that there si sasusaku. i HATE that. its horrible. and i really wish sakura would have just stayed out.
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