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Reviews for Not My Lover

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 16, 2007
    OK, gotta admit. The title was kinda corny so I was wary. But OMFG that was fricken awsome.I absolutely loved it from beginning to end. You have definately have to keep writing and keep up the good work. ill be looking for more from you.
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  • From roro237 on July 15, 2007
    MMMMMM that was really really hot (nosebleed)!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    I REALLY like this, though i kind of feel bad for Sakura, though she also deserved it for butting in. great story hope to read more of your work.
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  • From Chria on July 15, 2007
    You are a god with keeping things IC. I bow to you....
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 15, 2007
    Whoa such a serious situation and yet so figgin HOT!!!!!!!!!!

    'm not usually against Sakura but what she did was wrong and she realised it too late that what she'd done shouldn't have been done at all, she agreed to help them with the wrong intetions in mind and she just ended up hurting herself more and also intruding on pther people's intimacy - it really pissed me off - however loool the smut soo helped me feel better looooool :D so yeah. Hotness. Thanks!!! looool your 'attempts' as you put it at oneshots always seem to do the trick for me lol and everything you write with those two is sexy as hell, so yeah :D

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Kimra on July 15, 2007
    Ba ha ha. Silly Sakura. Loved the piece. Great to read. And I think you just wrote a one shot that doesn't scream for expanding on. :D It was a one shot was it not?
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  • From TFizzle on July 15, 2007
    This was a beautiful story!!!!!!
    Even tho' I am not a Sakura-basher,
    I think that she got just what a
    schemer like her should have....
    a new out-look on life!!!!!!
    I hope that you are writing something
    new,'cos I really like your style!!!!!
    It was *yaoilicious*!!!!!!
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  • From Jelp on July 15, 2007
    I'd feel sorry for Sakura, if it weren't for the fact that she was the one doing the sabatoging in the first place. Another well written fic. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on July 14, 2007
    This was pretty good. Nice one shot. I espeically like how you ended it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - kknjsidakota on July 14, 2007
    relly really great one-shot
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  • From MissMayumi on July 14, 2007
    ooh! I was looking at your other stories...Congratulations on having 1231 reviews!!...I think thats a record...anyway, i just wanted to say that I like your stories :)..and I loved this awesome smut filled oneshot! hope there'll be more like this!! :)
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  • From MissMayumi on July 14, 2007
    ha! take that Sakura! mm..Naruto and Sasuke have become voyeurists in a way, ne?..if that was me instead of Sakura..I wouldn't be just sitting there watching them..but if it was a yaoi fangirl..her dream probably came true..
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  • From ANON - Bluesake on July 14, 2007
    Didn't feel like signing in but absoluetly awesome just like the rest of your works! : D
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  • From ANON - Connie on July 14, 2007
    Awesome story. I love Sasuke's dedication to Naruto. Sakura totally deserved it. That was really brilliant how you did that. He didn't even have to trust into her to come. Thanks for that letting her get the upper hand.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 14, 2007
    wow......what you want more? sorry but that's all i can manage at this point and time. just....wow.
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