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Reviews for Not My Lover

By : Zrina
  • From llyoung on July 14, 2007
    I really do love your writing (and by the end I almost didn't hate Sakura). Thanks for the story.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on July 14, 2007
    Wow, I really liked that, to the point I almost wish it wasn't a oneshot. It wasn't till I went to review that I even bothered to see who the author was. =) As always, I loved the characters and their interactions. Really awesome!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 14, 2007
    I can only state: Wow.
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  • From Adi on July 14, 2007
    lol I knew you couldn’t keep away “Adi I don’t have a deadline till next week” pssh you cracked! XD Ok first off before I start drooling all over the smut, lets try reviewing the actual story :D I love the idea of it. A lot of authors either resort to mpreg (DIE) or they kinda skip over it “Sakura had their babies and it was happily ever after” I like that you went into depth about it. Sakura was so sneaky, and I love the excuse you thought up for her about the chakra, it’s typically her, and they wouldn’t question her too far on it since they wouldn’t know anything above basic medical stuff. It’s her because she did it cleverly and because her love for Sasuke wasn’t underestimated.

    I am seriously all hyped on how manly and dominating I see Naruto in this, I don’t understand why, you didn’t make Sasuke anything less than Naruto, maybe it’s my brain screaming “NARUSASU 4TEHWIN” at me and it’s altered my perception XD The whole thing was cleverly thought out, the part with Sakura and her cycle and Kyuubi smelling.

    When Sasuke said to get it a few more tries, it made my heart twinge a little, it’s those little gestures, rather than the declarations of undying love what I love about NaruSasu, and just yeah *dreamy sigh* Oh and I liked that Sasuke relaxed from seeing Naruto’s determination. Dammit I liked everything. I loved that it was not-Sasuke’s room. You’re not my lover It’s a simple line, but it says everything, Sakura’s not, what Naruto is. I like awkwardness between those two, one of so many reasons why they couldn’t work.

    AND NOW FOR THE SMUT!!! *passes out* lol *revives self* huh…? wha..? SMUT YEAH! *drool*

    So the kissing, the kissing was good sweet at first then passionate, then just a competition and kissing is good XD You described kissing for like half a page without repeating yourself, *goes back to la la land*

    69ing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So few fics have it, dunno why, but here it’s so good, with Sasuke displaying his sucking skills and Naruto rimming… *passes out again* sorry love… I’m gonna reread that part to make sure I fully understand what you’re trying to convey in the story XD You know the 2 paragraphs that I just adore, the cum on the belly part. O_O!

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