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Reviews for Not My Lover

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    The beginning is a little unclear, but I guess it’s supposed to be. . . . No, Sakura, back out now while you still can. . . . Wishful thinking, girl. . . . This is a really interesting idea, Zrina. . . . I like the background in it, how far they planned ahead. . . . I guess Sakura’s mind is really clouded in this. . . . I don’t blame you, Sasuke. By the way, Zrina, you probably have already, but have you read Teamwork and the sequels and sidestories by Asuka Kureru (aka Askerian)? . . . Boy, that was a dumb thing to say, Naruto. Kind of insensitive too, if you ask me. . . . Tough luck, Sakura. If he doesn’t want to, he doesn’t want to. . . . NUH-UH! You’re just going to feel a lot worse afterwards if you go through with this, girl!! It’s not worth it! Sex doesn’t change a man! . . . “It was probably bad form to insult your bed partner.” Yeh-heah, I would think so. ^^ . . . Wise words, Sasuke. . . . I guess that’s better than nothing, Sakura. Though it might be less painful to just move on. But then if you see him all the time . . . hmm . . . I dunno. . . . Boy, this must be hard on Sakura; she’s being pretty much ignored right now. . . . God, how can Sakura bear to watch this? I mean, it must be emotionally painful for one thing, but . . . well . . . while I don’t mind reading about it, I’d be really embarrassed to be in the same room with two guys having sex. And if I had to be, I wouldn’t want to watch. . . . I don’t blame you, Sasuke. Sakura should have just minded her own business. . . . I like it when Naruto starts growling (*cough*). . . . Wow, I’ve never read a story with such confusing emotions! 0_0 That’s enough to lead anyone to a breakdown!
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  • From Mishka on January 17, 2008
    I am actually glad she got the ultimate let down- I wad actually hoping for some ultra sensitive Naruto laying on the guilt and exposing her deviousness...but this ended well. It seems so much more...satisfying that her own machinations turned on her and shattered her illusions. I just feel that she needs to be hurt more for all that she did *shakes fist*.
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on November 13, 2007
    I thinks this has to be my favorite out of all that you have written. I can't describe how I felt after reading it the first time. Or second and fifth time either. It would be interesting to see what it would be like, in your words, for Sasuke,Naruto and Sakura when the baby is born. Thank you for sharing this.
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  • From MichiTheThird on November 04, 2007
    *waterfall tears* I loved reading this SO much. I was so glad when she realized the meaning behind what she was doing and the true gift that it would be to her two closest friends that really DID love her in their own way.
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  • From PieldeLava on September 25, 2007
    Only one word for you: Wow. Your writing style is amazing. You have the characters interaction well-written. The smut part was well-written as well. Awesome work.
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  • From Kerrisa on September 14, 2007
    That was so marvelous T_T You scared me!! For a second i thought Sakura was gonna get what she wanted X_X But yay for the unbreakable bond Sasuke and Naruto share!!!! *Dances* You're so wonderful, keep writing forever and ever and evers!!! x3 !! Tehehehe
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  • From ANON - yumemi on September 06, 2007
    I feel sorry for Sakura here despite what she did.
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  • From ANON - T on August 31, 2007
    Wow. What a powerful fanfic. Pathetic desperation would do that to a person, I guess. I really enjoyed the bittersweet feel of it. I'm not one to suggest an author to write but this CAN'T just be a one shot! Maybe a before and after of this fanfic's universe would make me heart you! ^^
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  • From roely on July 23, 2007
    this is really good maybe it could be more?
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  • From ANON - Mikra on July 20, 2007
    This was lovely. I really liked this :)
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  • From Allys on July 18, 2007
    Hello sweetheart. I finally bucked up the courage to read this. I read the summary and I just KNEW that it would piss me off. OMG and it did, stupid bitch, I hate her. I've been trying really hard not to hate her, but grrr... It's not really working :(. The boys were so Hott together, they always are, especially when you write them. You can always feel the love and they're just perfect, but she's such an ass. Why the fuck would you try to spoil it. If you really freaking love somebody, you want them to be happy. You don't try to sabotage their happiness. And I'm mad that even after the entire display she was still fucking hoping. Even if I had lost my mind for a spell and ended up in a similar position, after that i wouldn't have tried you know. I would have let him cum and then made him insert the sperm with his fingers and tell him to channel chakra through them. that would have been my excuse. it's still a part of him he still did it. But uurggh, who the fuck would want Sakura's babies anyway!!!! Pink hair :S, No. HELL NO. Grr... LOL, sorry I'm going off, but damn it... At least she fucking got to see all the ways that she could NEVER measure up. Grr... I have to stop XD. I could go on about this for a really long time, but I won't. At least she learned something in the end, but honestly I'm pissed she even got to see Sasuke in that condition, it's soo much more than she ever deserved, grr.. sorry stopping. LOL :Glomps and huggles on Zrina: It's okay, I'll be good now XD. clear clean thoughts, hmmmn, B&B booth solo scene with vibrator :drool: That fucking ultra hott scene where Sasuke goes down on Naruto in SOD with the smexy black briefs!!!! LOL, I'm so going to look that up. Ja love ;)!!
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  • From ANON - stardust&fireashes on July 17, 2007
    Great! even with Sakura in it. I love her guilt hehehehe! Maybe I'm sadistic when it comes to Sakura. I surely would love to read more of such pains lol... no... then again plain sasu/naru/sasu is good enough (plain? what am I saying? It's NEVER plain lol) Great job!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 17, 2007
    Great one-shot!! I loved the lemon between Naruto and Sasuke! :)
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  • From ANON - loki-sama on July 17, 2007
    Wow... that was great. I'm a fan of all your works on this site. You are a great writer and you update often that make you the #1 writer on this site for me. I hated how conniving sakura acted in the begining, but she got what she got what she asked for and then some. And in the long run its will be better for all three of them because once and for all she can totally give up on her obsession and move on with her life and gave up on future schemings. On a lighter note love your smute scenes, you must be really happily marry and/or have a great imagination. Looking forward to the final chapter of SOD and B&B. Keep up the great work. Thanks you.
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  • From LuthienWildglen on July 16, 2007
    Oh I liked that, I liked that a lot. It was hot, yet tender. Sensual, and yet so very erotic. I think you portrayed Sakura perfectly, showing how truley obsessive she is, and yet redeeming her in the end to show that she is just a lonely girl who is very confused. A truely excellent one-shot. My best wishes for you and your writing.
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