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Reviews for Weapons Check.

By : dilemmalicious
  • From ANON - vixen on August 10, 2005
    I am at a loss for words. I do not know what to say, but wow. I mean it I am going to put this on a lj group I post at.
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  • From ANON - Sasuke on August 09, 2005
    Hot tamales. Always a pleasure to read from an author with proper vocabulary and grammar. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - marya on August 09, 2005
    more please?
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 09, 2005
    man i love this, you are definately doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work and update A.S.A.P.
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on August 09, 2005
    Wha ha ha ha! Only Naruto would think to hide weapons up there. Sasuke never stood a chance.
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  • From ANON - Kai on August 09, 2005
    "So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?"

    That's the best line EVER!!!! Go Naruto, it's your birthday, not for real real, just for play play
    Please keep writing!! I LOVE YOUR NINJA WAY!!!!
    LOVE YA!!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - chem chick on August 09, 2005
    This is fantastic! I love this story! Very funny, very passionate, and really great to read! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lo on August 09, 2005
    this is very good. I like what you did with the whole power theme, that was hot!! I hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 09, 2005
    I am thoroughly enjoying your firm grip on the awe inspiring possibilities of chalkra,demon power ,the boys et al.Fuck I am giggling like fiend, right f'n on! This is so incindiary.I love it.I want so much more.Please.....and thank you.
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on August 09, 2005
    Haha, that was great smut.. I really liked the way you described their actions near the beginning with the individual words. Good job, looking forward to the next. :)
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on August 09, 2005
    That was some of the best Naruto smut I've ever read. I like the idea of them showing off their weapons. And I think that if any would could make Sasuke submit it would be Naruto. Very nicely done. If there is more to come then I can't wait. :) Good job and thanks for writing this.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 09, 2005
    *chuckles* Yeah, I would recommend that they move those "knives" and such before they go any further... unless they intend to say pressed up against that tree, that is. Or they could just go inside... that would work too, ne? ^___~ I'm sorry that you have insomnia, but your readers aren't TOO upset, trust me. And thanks so much for the quick update! Again, great characterization of the two "boys", and excellent descriptions. You also have a nice balance between your use of text and dialogue, and it makes the story much more engaging and easy to follow. ^^ I have to go now (ahh, college stuff -- fun, ne?) but I look forward with eager anticipation to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 09, 2005
    *ROWR* BABY. MORE I NEED MORE. THIS IS FRICKEN AWSOME, YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE AND I MEAN SOON!!! PLEASE HURRY AND UUUUPPPPDDDDAAAATTTTEEEEE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Terry on August 09, 2005
    Whoa! Five alarm fire! Very hot, the anticipation is killing me! Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on August 09, 2005
    Well, chapter 2 was very nice. Short, but nice. I like the warm fuzzyness. You are doing a good job with the relationship aspects of the pair. Looking forward to the next chapter! Are you planning this to be ongoing, or is it just going to be a few chapters? gah...my brain is empty so I'll stop babbling... Good luck with chapter 3!
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