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Reviews for Weapons Check.

By : dilemmalicious
  • From ANON - Shez on August 08, 2005
    Yay, a fellow grammar-nazi. =3 I'll help you HULK SMASH! the idiots who confuse "its" and "it's", I will. It's on my list of Top Ten Piss-Offs, along with people using "ur" in scanlations/subtitles/fanfictions and small yapping dogs.

    Anyway, moving on. Awesome fanfic so far. The beginning was especially intriguing. I'm very excited for the next chapter, with Seme!Naruto. Poor Naruto is usually suck on the bottom. Now Sasuke can finally feel what it's like. =P

    I'll keep checking back, so please post the next chapter when you can. ^^ I won't threaten you for an update, since I know we all (er, most of us) have those life things to attend to, but do write when you can, 'kay? ^^
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  • From on August 08, 2005
    You have my adoration and whatever the hell else you can and want to claim, seriously.

    Secondly, and more importantly, thank you so very, very much for writing a NaruxSasu fic. It's just so hard to find a decent Naruto topper these days. Then again, I suppose I can't blame anyone; the general consensus is SasuxNaru. Either way, you just made me adore you even more.

    Hm... what else, what else. Erm, well I love the whole thing, totally and absolutely. The ending... the weapons up his behind -- I thought you'd like to know I sputtered rather comically. Almost choked, almost. I honestly haven't found something so interesting in a while.

    I'll be looking forward to your updates. So write more soon, please and thank you!
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  • From ANON - WolfPilot06 on August 08, 2005
    *grins* I really, really enjoyed that. First, I was impressed by how well-written it was. Second, I absolutely loved the concept. A weapons check? For a moment, when I was reading the summary, I thought that it was a euphemism for Other Things and braced myself for a shoddily written fic with a shaky basis for smut. Therefore, I was completely and totally taken by surprise by the great characterization, the completely in-character (as possible for a timeskip/future fic) weapons check between Sasuke and Naruto, and the general hilarity of Naruto's last weapon cache. I adored Sasuke's last reaction and his thoughts - it was sweet, in a way, and very cute. =)

    *laughs* And perhaps it's just me, but after reading that bit about Naruto's hidden weapon cache, I'd think he'd be a Bottom rather than a Top. ^_~ But then, this is me waving my SasuNaru flag, as opposed to my NaruSasu one. XD

    Excellently written. Thank you for sharing!

    (Are you posting this on ff.net, too?)

    **Wolf**
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