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By : dilemmalicious
  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on August 11, 2005
    Ah, this is my review to chappy 3: Wow! Nice! Do i ever just love a dominant Naruto! Fun with chakra! YAY!
    And you are an Illustrator! I see now where your passion for description comes from. One must be able to see in the mind's eye what one wishes to express. Or perhaps I am just rambling... In any case, you are devine and superior at writing quality blowjobs! Bravo!
    To MultifacetedTune: Sheesh! Always pointing out my flaws!! Hee hee...well, it is what i don't pay you for, isn't it?? XD
    Oddly enough, that same bastard English teacher recommended me to be a tutor, but lacking faith in my own abilities, I had to decline. And I DID learn something from his class! The fact that I don't know how to use commas properly, what a "linguist" realy is, and that a "Honey Wagon" is actually the truck that drives around to farms and cleans out the vats of hog shit! My professor said that he smelled of shit so badly all the time, his family wouldn't let him sit at the dinner table with them. O.o Why did I even bother typing that silly bit of dribble? My apologies to the author! Well I'm not going back and erasing it!! I took all that time to type it, might as well leave it there! *glomps MT*
    Back to this story: Really, you don't need a jack ass like me telling you it's good. I'm sure you know it already. That book you mentioned, I'm not familiar with it. Who is the author? I love a good book as much as I love a good blowjob! See you in chapter...5?
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  • From ANON - Kirei Kitsue on August 11, 2005
    Teehee! Nice little Omake there. It was definitely hilarious. I love your vivid descriptions and definitely your "use" of Chakra. You have a valid point that it isn't used hardly at all by most. Maybe Cecilia and I will have to take that into account in our future writings. Hmm...thanks for the food for thought. Lovely, lovely chapters! And I'm glad I helped. ^__^ Please keep writing whether it's this story or another!
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  • From ANON - Quirk on August 10, 2005
    I love it. The humor, the imagry, all of it. Please, by all means, take it further.
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  • From ANON - lo on August 10, 2005
    This is fun to read. I like how the relationship works, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - JS on August 10, 2005
    I think that YOU think far too highly of yourself, giving so-called "lessons" about how much Japanese on a fic is enough... and even daring using "fancy" words and think you're SO CLEVER because of that. Truth is, you make me sick to my stomach. You criticize too much and your fics aren't even good! What's up with that?! I'm sure you can give your opinion on how a story could be better, but wouldn't it make more sense if YOU followed your own rules? I'm sure it would. Though if you insist on criticizing, at least be a little kinder and try not to contradict yourself (saying that you don't like Japanese on fics and yet saying that "-ne", a VERY Japanese and VERY not acceptable word that isn't any better than the infamous "Aishiteru"s). I'm not saying I don't AGREE with you on certain things, such as that I particularly don't like Japanese on fics, but the WAY you expose some of your points are just... not nice.

    I think you should get a nice, clean mirror and take a very good look before saying some things about others. I'm saying the same faults you condemned on yourself, although you may NOT have spotted them yet.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    .....BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HAAAAAA!
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  • From ANON - BlueFolly10 on August 10, 2005
    Long live writers capable of maintaining a sense of humour while writing beautifully crafted (and generally very hot) smut. This was such a lovely read, and so very different from the usual fair that crops up after scouring the internet for hours in search of decent fanfiction. I think you've restored my faith in the genre. You have a fantastic economy of language, packing a world of meaning and emotion into tightly wound and expertly articulated sentences. And throughout, you maintain such a firm grasp of the world these characters inhabit. I simply can't say enough about how fond I am of the complexity and humour colouring all of the interactions between Sasuke and Naruto. The dynamics of power and lust shifting between them are also incredibly inspired. Brilliant work all around. I look forward to what's to come.
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  • From ANON - matsutake on August 10, 2005
    *laughs*

    That first chapter was fantastic. Aside from various spelling errors and some netspeak (says not "sez"), the chemistry was great and the humourous bits were well executed. I admit there was a big grin on my face. Look forward to more, and hope the characterisation stays true :)
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 10, 2005
    Oh, I forgot to mention one more thing: about DeadUchiha's comments on commas..... I'm her beta, so trust me, she speaks the truth. *shudders* That girl really IS tramatized by commas........though one would think that she would have at least learned SOMETHING by being in the class, ne? *snickers and glomps DU is she's reading this* You know I love ya', Dead! ^___~ But yeah, anywho, why do you think I put so many "........" in my reviews? Yup, learned it all from her........ *longsuffering sigh* Well, my e-mail's acting up, like always, but I'm gonna' go try again and yell at it a few times. That rarely works, but you never know............... ^___~
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 10, 2005
    Wait... I thought "nunc" was "now" in Latin........... oh, wait, that's right! I only got the chance to take Latin 1. *pouts* You, undoubtably, have far more knowledge in that area that I, so......... cool! ^^ Very neat trivia -- I, too, have amazed and comfused friends throughout the years with my pointless trivia that is interesting to me and maybe 2 other people on the face of the planet, but....... *shrugs* It's all good, ne? ^___~ I can't wait for your "real" update... Ja! *scampers off to check her e-mail ASAP* ^^
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 10, 2005
    Whoa, why did I just click that dumb "review" button?
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    Anyway, very good work! The effort you put in is very much appreciated, especially your "ninjalicious nindo." -__-;; (Yeah, I have no idea as to what you actually wrote. Something-ninja or other, up in the A/N, pertaining to how cool the Naruto world is and how we should write more about it.)

    PS: If I read one more bad fanfic in the next hour, I will swear to the Big Thing Up There that some of these writers are still in grade school. (Yes, it is your fabulous fault that I can no longer digest trash. ^^)
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 10, 2005
    Linguist. WOW.
    I used to want to be a lingust, back in middle school... But it fell apart. It fell apa-aart.
    Oh baa-by... Goodness, I'm listening to Moby again. Very sorry.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on August 10, 2005
    Don't worry about the note. I definitely understand where you're coming from, and I have trouble reading fics like that as well even if they do have a good plot. Hopefully, my own writing is getting better in that regard as well.

    As for that stupid internet speak, I hate all of that stuff also. *instert rant here*

    Looking forward to the next chapter, and thanks for the response.
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  • From ANON - Serenia on August 10, 2005
    Fantastic! Written refreshingly well, and with good humour. Very enjoyable!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 10, 2005
    *is laughing her ass off* Oh...*gasp*...my god.....ha... *still cracking up* ...give me a...haha...minute..... *dies laughing* ...... *is revived by some unknown force so that she can finish her review* OMG, that was a classic!!! I don't know what was funnier: "Putting the uke in Sasuke since… um. Well, since yesterday." or "So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?" ^0^ *still laughing* And you know, I kinda' feel sorry for the tree.......... *continues to chuckle while she grabs a tissue to wipe away her tears* Ahh......thanks, I needed a good laugh. And the fact that it's 3:30 in the morning probably has something to do with it, too, now that I think about it......... Isn't insomnia fun? ^___~ Thank you so much for the quick updates, as well as for keeping your fic consistantly entertaining and well written. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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