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Reviews for Weapons Check.

By : dilemmalicious
  • From ANON - WaterShadow on November 05, 2005
    All I can really say is that this story did a most thorough job of revving my motor. Holy. Freaking. Crap. If you do keep this story up I'm going to have to invest in a lot of ice...though given your style of writing, I think that's a sacrifice I would be okay making.

    WS (gathering the bathtub of coldness)
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  • From Stranj100 on November 03, 2005
    Greatest Naruto lemon ever.
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  • From ANON - lanier on November 01, 2005
    that was a totally awesome story, every chapter was incredible. I am so jealous that you lived and studied in japan. It is my dream to do that. May I inquire as to why you studied paper making? Anyway if you add to the story that would be great and if not, it was a wonderful read.
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  • From shifox on November 01, 2005
    i'll admit, i just about fell outta my chair laughing the first time i read this through. i enjoy your sense of humour deeply! shared it with my writing friend and she had a good giggle over the erm...last weapon location. ^_^ i also liked the little touches such as "The famed speed of the Konoha ninjas, honed by perverts." and naruto's bad joke about the tree falling. AND the image of kakashi handing tsunade the photos. whether or not you write that out further, the idea is just funny. a picture worth a thousand yen, indeed! MUCH fun, all around. plus...the hot kinky chakra sex was damned fine! *happy hentai purring* the world NEEDS more ninjalicious hot kinky chakra sex! *nodnodnod*
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 01, 2005
    lol, you have definately got to continue this. its fricken hilarious.
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  • From ANON - di on August 25, 2005
    This...this is brilliant. This is so freaking brilliant perfect I do not have *words* to describe it. Seriously. I'm just reduced to o_o "guhbibble". I've drifted away from the fandom not by lack of interest, but by frustration and pissed-off-ness at the poor writing and characterizations--and then by sheer chance I follow a link to this. And it's *perfect*. Hot dang, someone's finally given me a 'way it could be' that really leaves me feeling good about my favorite pair and their chances for someday fixing things. Yeah. I so have to save this when I get home so I can reread without it someday disappearing off the web. I can't believe I could have missed something this good. What a perfect combination of humor and hotness, of rivalry and the just-right way of these two acknowledging how they feel for each other. Gah, I'm rambling. But wow, I was *so* happy with this. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on August 20, 2005
    "So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?"

    Falls of her chair laughing and bruises her very abused butt. You're amazing, you know that? I liked the imagery, the realness, of the fic. Looking extremely forward to reading more. *Camps in front of your doorstep, waiting.....*
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on August 15, 2005
    I think you could end it safely...but you could also coninue with it if you wanted, either is good.
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 12, 2005
    Haha, tree. Souveneir. Ah haha...
    You should definetely expand on this, but maybe they should go to the onsen. I have no idea how they would get rid of all the cum though. (thinks) Huh. Maybe they should just go to Sasuke's house after all...
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on August 12, 2005
    That was awesome! I mean really! The imagery was fantastic and absolutely incendiary. I loved every moment. I think the only typo I spotted was you wrote 'sez' instead of 'says' right at the beginning. One woops is very good. I'm impressed you don't have a beta. I do! :) I am going to go see if you have other works now. Nice work and a lovely read.
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  • From Sami065 on August 12, 2005
    i like the idea... new! i'm going to go read the rest.

    P.S. if you want to read my fic named Red Walkways please do! ONLY READ THAT ONE IF YOU LOOK FOR ME ON FF.NET! my other fics are the result of a missguided youth... sigh. on this site thats the only fic i have. i update on firdays and and working with a new beta so will be fixing mistakes (there are some), also many of my chapter are prewritten so the results of a new beta will be lagging untill i get back to editing chapter 1-4. wow... i rambled... sorry.

    i'll go read now...

    Sami
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on August 12, 2005
    Great job. You've obviously read enough lemons to pull it off correctly, and they still held true to their characters.

    The only point I'd like to make is that it is highly unpleasant if the loosening fingers have long finger nails. I can only imagine what it woulf feel like with claws. Just for future reference.

    Continue it or stop it, I'm still looking forward to your next work.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 11, 2005
    Absolutely smashing, my dear. Fantabulistically wonderlicious. I loved it. ...........and no, I haven't gotten much sleep lately, in case you're wondering. ^___~ My e-mail service is still acting up, so although I got your e-mail I was only able to read half of it before my computer gave me one of these annoying "problem pop-ups" and then crashed. Such fun, let me tell you. >.< But anyways, I'll reply to your e-mail ASAP, and I really do appreciate the fact that you sent me one in the first place. It's nice knowing that my reviews are actually read, much less given any thought. ^^ I really liked the "chapter preview/snippit" thing at the end of the page -- I agree that this would be a suitable ending, but I hope that you choose to continue the story, none-the-less. As always, the chapter was quite well done, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, regardless of whether it's part of this story or not. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 11, 2005
    Huge grin.Blissful reading that was.Great fun.Sooo I want to read more of your pairing but whether its in this story or another is your call.I'm good either way.Tsundae is so a pervert,inspite of the mammeries I do not find her a bit maternal so the bet is a given as far as i am concerned, good call.
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  • From ANON - faith on August 11, 2005
    kyaaaaaa!!~

    that was tooooo BLOODY HOTT!!! XQ____ _ _

    I love uke sasuke !!!XD he's soooo cute !!! also your right not much (naruto seme sasUKE) fics on the net nowadays which sucks i dislike naruto uke with PASSION
    ! >___< uke sasuke uke sasuke uke sasuke!!!!!!!

    please write more write more you will right !?!

    you # fangirl faith----

    p.s i love you write more
    pp.s vive uke sasuke the most ukiest uke eva
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