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Reviews for Genjutsu Gone Right

By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - LoneVisored on May 04, 2016
    Very good stuff. I have been waiting for the next chapter of this story and I am pleased to say it was well worth it. I do enjoy that you are focusing on an actual plot line instead of just smut. The sex scene between Naruto and Sakura says a lot about both characters without obviously stating it.
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  • From ANON - Blargh 2 on May 04, 2016
    Ignore all the people asking for smut this . This right here is quality work. Best story/sex fic in this site thats is as far as i know on going. This is great. All i sk is that while depraity isll nice and good. Keep the promise yea? Lso yoy should tottaly mae naruto forget hehaspower and bechaed out of the house XD.also hile i do them sex thetory is hat rally maks the sex more meaningful than just well smutni guess. Hat im trying tonsay is that this right hre i thehigh Class ecort to the street hockerstha is mos of this ste tories. Keup the good ork. Srry for splling keyboard broken.
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  • From enifoot on May 03, 2016
    Really good writing. The development is going at a believable rate and I'm curious to see how much of future chapters will be story and how much will be smut. I do love Sakura's reactions and I'm looking forward to see how Naruto embraces or seeks to control his new powers.
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  • From ANON - chachu on May 03, 2016
    Very nice chapter...good Characterization of both Naruto and Sakura, Very nice to see some good narusaku fiction on here.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2016
    is Natsu Hyuuga Hinata’s mom? Can you add Hanabi? Female Jinchuriki’s? FemSasuke or femGaara? Tayuya and maybe Karin? Konan (she would be in the same or younger age ranges as the other women)

    Wouldn’t Mikoto break the plot in a worse way than Kushina being alive?
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  • From ANON - Adam Ouellette on May 03, 2016
    Haku or Tsunami?
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  • From Pete91888 on May 03, 2016
    I just want to say that this is a great story it's very hard to find a gem on this site. That being said I'd like to ask you to update more often. I know there is real life to attend to but 3 months between updates seems pretty long for the amount of content per chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2016
    Could use some more proofreading, noticed maybe a dozen obvious typos, which is a dozen too many
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  • From ANON - brandon on April 23, 2016
    nice story when are you going to add a second chapter.
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  • From ANON - Duder on April 15, 2016
    If Kin is on here why not Tayuya aswell?
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  • From ANON - TREANTDEU on March 22, 2016
    Its a literal crime if this does not continue. its legit brilliant and SOOOOOO well written. keep this slow pace please as well.
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 18, 2016
    Arr, not yet?! Come on,give to us more! There's too little completed fics this superb!
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  • From ANON - Blargh on March 14, 2016
    Meh i would suggest that you stay with cannon characters that are alive for now. No reason to completely ignore the plot, unless ur idea of her being alive is somewhat realistic, or interesting. so far i like the idea it very interesting. Girl wise i think ino should be next ;D
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  • From ANON - fanatic1123 on March 06, 2016
    this chapter was awesome! just the perfect level of revenge without feeling creepy
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 03, 2016
    *Sigh* Still nothing? I've becoming restless..
    By the way, do you have this fic on FF.Net as well? Can you? It'd be really great if you do, 'coz there's really convenient android reader that makes following fics easy. And portable. And stuff.
    ... I'm not ever sure what that means, but eh, whatever. Update sooner! Before I gone mad.

    Ah, one more thing. Kinda personal request. NaruIno is my most favorite pairing, and is you could focus on it just a bit more than on rest pairings, I'll be really glad!
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