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Reviews for Genjutsu Gone Right

By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - Jimbo Jones on March 02, 2016
    I am wondering just how the Genjustu is set. Like is it set in Konoha, or does it radiate a certain distance from Naruto? If the second, it could be possible to to include some of the filler characters, movie characters and non-Konoha women.

    As for preference, I would love to see Fu. Though, it would be a bit humorous if it turned out that she was immune or easily broke the effects on her and she just wanted to fuck Naruto.
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 02, 2016
    dammit, I can't stop rereading chapter. Please, uodate sooner!
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  • From JLDavenport on March 02, 2016
    Actually went in a direction I wasn't expecting, seeing Naruto so clueless and Sakura so angry was a lott'a fun. Wondering if Naruto'll catch on soon though.

    Either way, looking forward to more for sure! As for the women: Gender bending (Haku and Gaara especially) and FemKyubei are basically cliches at this point, I'd prefer not to see them. The big ones I'd look forward to seeing are Hinata, Hanabi (seperate and together) and Shizune.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2016
    Please, don't genderbend anyone permanently. There's Oiroke jutsu. And Naruto entirely too willing to use it.
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on March 01, 2016
    If you can, please don't involve already dead girls. Namely, Mikoto and Hinata's mother. And Kin, if this is post-invasion.
    If you really must, at least use something like Edo Tensei (Ressurection technique). Bringing people back alive randomly rarely do any good to fic; I have yet to see good one. And this story so far is quite interesting and logical, it would be shame if fic becomes one of those.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 29, 2016
    i thought it was great.
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  • From Hiti67 on February 26, 2016
    First, love this story. Premise is great and you can make the genjutsu on Konoha a permanent thing by saying some bullshit like 'the jutsu bonded with the barrier surrounding the village, affecting all who enter even once'. That being said, Anko NEEDS to be in this. You can use pretty much any Konoha girl as well as any who visit. The chunin exams sounds like it will be fun. Kushina (or at least her chakra) is currently sealed in Naruto so you don't have to go too far out of your way to get her. Also, Tsunade is HOT. Old or not, though that is your preference. Use the wiki and take this story to its full potential! May the wiki be with you!
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  • From hibeef01 on February 26, 2016
    Yeah, this played out a great deal better than I was anticipating. I can dig it, awaiting future chapters.
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  • From TheBossMan on February 25, 2016
    Do the girls have to be from Konoha? Because I'd like to see Koyuki in this.
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  • From ANON - MaitreLoup on February 25, 2016
    Very nice as a begining.
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  • From ANON - neoslucius on February 25, 2016
    very good. I really like the idea of this. I'm wondering how the girls are included or how long it will take for Naruto to realize that the genjutsu worked. The genjustu uses commands and not he probably wont say suck my dick or something along these lines so often to other girls.

    I like to see you continuing this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2016
    Kurenai but no anko that's a first
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  • From ANON - Jax on February 24, 2016
    Pretty good stuff. I am surprised you managed to keep the characters true to their canon personality and still told a interesting and arousing story. I definitly want to see where this one goes.
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  • From ANON - Anon E. Moose on February 24, 2016
    Hm. Interesting start, has even space for a, *gasp*, real plot, too.
    I mean that sincerely by the way.

    There are some grammar spelling mistakes though that tripped me up while reading.
    E. g.: "still an impressive feet"; feet -> feat

    Concerning the girls/women: I'm not sure about Mikoto, including makes it more AU and thus harder to write well. I don't know who Natsu Hyuuga is. Ino's mother is a non-entity in canon, see Mikoto what to do.
    Personally, I'm a fan of fem!Haku, but that might be overdone.
    So I'm suggesting Tayuya, including her is most often a plus :P
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  • From ANON - RaidenUzumaki on February 24, 2016
    That's the best story I've read in a very long time. Please update quickly. also if at some point you could include moegi and hanabi. but please do more sakura. i need her to have to go all the way with him.
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