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Reviews for Genjutsu Gone Right

By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - on July 12, 2016

    I really enjoyed this, not many people on here actually bother to expand on the story's background. I can't waiting to see how you move the plot along, or how Naruto "deals" with Mebuki. Keep up the good work. :) 


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  • From ANON - on July 04, 2016

    Holy shit! Finally an author who managed the right balance between smut and plot! This is brilliant! Bravo sir!


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  • From BitterNTR on June 28, 2016

    Absolutely loved it. Fantastic writing all around save for some spelling errors, which are to be expected seeing as how many words you had in this single chapter. I wish I could write such amazing smut like you do. 

    Here's hoping to more!


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  • From ANON - on June 25, 2016
    Very different than what I was expecting. Pleasantly surprised, great read looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ragnar Blackmane on June 10, 2016
    I don't think I have EVER read a better smut focused Naruto fanfiction.

    Your writing is superb, the story flows excellently and the smut is detailed and fantastically well done.

    Great job, truly!

    I hope we get to see more of your work. If every story on this website was of the quality you write, it would be a much, much better place.
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  • From Dansama92 on May 23, 2016
    While kinda sad Anko won't be in it, I'll get over it. Any idea when next chapter will be out?
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  • From Dansama92 on May 23, 2016
    Hey this story is great ( I can't wait for the third chapter. Btw for Konoha girls were you going to add Anko too?
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  • From ANON - Mason on May 12, 2016
    Dude, I'm loving the story so far. The concept is rarely seen, and the scenes are written exquisitely. Can't wait to see more of this story in the near future.
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  • From ANON - Waldo on May 11, 2016
    This plot is amazing. I come for the porn, but stay for the plot. So glad you updated.
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  • From ANON - Megatronus89 on May 10, 2016
    Stick with plot-lemons, it makes reading much more enjoyable, And pulls the reader in letting us know and feel what the characters feel. Though if this turns out to be a Harem fiction, can you stick with Naru-Saku as the main theme? Since so far it seems Sakura is unknowingly developing Stockholm syndrome with naruto out side of the genjutsu. I would like to see a few more chapter with just those two until the chunin exams.
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  • From ANON - Greenp on May 09, 2016
    Amazing story, with real quality writing. A few spelling errors here and there, but other than that the writing is just incredible.

    It's hard to write something that's both sweet and hot, both innocent and kinky, but you do a real good job of it. The characterisations are also pretty much spot on (even though Kurenai seemed a bit off with how she ran away), so I can't wait to see what you do with other characters.

    Your list of women you want to include is pretty long, so I hope you don't drown in them like most harem stories tend to do or start to ignore girls like sakura along the way, cause that would be a shame. Personally not too interested in the mothers (just not fleshed out enough in the show) but seeing how you weren't afraid to shoot down other suggestions in favour of a coherent story, I've got hopes that you do something good with them.

    Keep up the good work and looking forward to read more from you!
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  • From ANON - asd on May 08, 2016
    i dont know what anybody else think, but i really like this story
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  • From ANON - raidenuzumaki on May 08, 2016
    fantastic yet again. seriously, you have a gift. one thing im wondering is if you will ever write in naruto influencing ppl to tell him about his past and maybe influencing ppl to teach him(he could get kakashi to talk casually about himself and maybe kakashi could actually teach naruto and sakura a little, maybe even teach naruto rasengan? since kakashi knows it?) anyway, food for thought. he could learn so much with this from so many. and with shadow clones you can just send them away to train if you don't want to go in depth with it.
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  • From ANON - hmmm on May 07, 2016
    moooorrrrreee
    hope for sakuras mother
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  • From ANON - martin on May 07, 2016
    this story is absolutely amazing. please keep adding more chapters I would hate to see this story die out like so many others.
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