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Reviews for Genjutsu Gone Right

By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - Reader on December 29, 2016

    This, like all your other stories, is incredibly good. Can't wait for more! 

    Sincerely,

    Reader


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  • From Dansama92 on October 16, 2016

    Hey this story is great so far. When is the next chapter?


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  • From ANON - Helpful? on September 29, 2016

    I know this review isn't very helpful but still want to say it. 

    Post. The. Next. Chapter!

    One of the very few fics out there that doesn't make me go "durrrrrr" when I read it.  It's an exciting story about a boy who discovers a power inside of him that he can use to get whatever he wants.  And he's learning fast!

    I hope you're not getting any flames for this.  It'd be undeserved!
     

    You, sir, are a genius! :D

    UPDATE


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  • From Lavitz on September 26, 2016

    I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue it.


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  • From ANON - on September 09, 2016

    Please update soon! Really loving this story.


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  • From ANON - on August 29, 2016

    I dream of the day this story updates.


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  • From ANON - C on August 23, 2016

    love it


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  • From ANON - on August 18, 2016

    Moar please!!!


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  • From ANON - CelticMonk on August 13, 2016

    If love to see tayuya and fu theyre some of my favorites.


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  • From ANON - on August 09, 2016

    Wow, great story! Hoping for an update soon.


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  • From ANON - A Fan on August 04, 2016

    Sorry, part II here. Just wanted to throw my two cents in for who should be next. I really like the lineup in the list you posted in chapter 1, honestly. Ino then Hinata then Tenten and so on. Tenten gets surpisingly little love in these sorts of fics, usually she's tossed in midway through as authors remember she even exists, I'd really like to see you(and naruto) do her justice ;).

    Again, you do fantastic work, here's hoping you've already started on the next chapter and don't need my advice.


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  • From ANON - A Fan on August 04, 2016

    Ok. So this is officially my favorite story of yours now. I read your Kim Possible story years ago and was waiting for updates on that, but having read this I desperately hope you continue this story soon.

    You write the best erotic fiction ive ever seen, bar none.


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  • From ANON - on July 29, 2016

    PLEASE update soon this is amazing great job. :)


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  • From ANON - on July 20, 2016

    I loved this. Really hoping it gets updated soon.


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  • From Psomaster on July 13, 2016

    To start off with, I had to reset my password just to review this as I hadn't logged in in forever.

    Now as for the actual review.

     

    This is one of the best damn stories on the website hands down. I do hope you keep running with this as the story is amazing. Its well written, thought out, makes logical sense, and in general has the best writing I've read in a long time. I've read through it a few times and it still is really good. I hope you will continue to run with this plot.

     

    The fact that it's persuading  someone with genjutsu instead of with pure mind control and the like, it lets you keep people in character far better without having to mold or change them before you can have them do their part. For instance, the flashing scene with sakura, really well done in the sense that she stayed in character yet still did something against her will, so to speak, and still reacted as she should have before and after the fact. 

     

    Keep up the good work!


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