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Reviews for All In

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  • From serenagold on November 07, 2009
    Oh man.. she is smooth. Twisted manipulative bitch, but damn is she good at it.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sasha on November 06, 2009
    T^T POOR NARUTO!

    I don't think the way you have the genjutsu conversations set up is confusing in any way. Though I'm really curious, is the genjutsu activated by the phrase "I will love you until the day you die"?

    Anyway, great job! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From serenagold on November 04, 2009
    Aww..


    Although I am confused. Where the words in italics conversations that actually happened or were those doubts that Sakura was putting into his head?


    Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 03, 2009
    Whoa...intense here! Great job!
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 03, 2009
    This part of the story is making me hate sakura more and more :/ she is an epic psycho
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 03, 2009
    ok i really don't like sakura in this
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 01, 2009
    Usually I read this last as I need a buffer after the heavyweight of Constellations, no more so after tonight, that wench really is unpalateable! You distracted me so much with the after action, the lessons Neji is learning re love and the price of it, Sasuke's immeasurable growth that I forgot to gripe over how easily the pink beajdef;kjadsf disposed of Itachi and is thwarting Sasuke and Naruto's suspcions.

    I'm loving both stories, already it is unbelievable they had the same beginnings. Constellations worries me greatly. There is a nakedness to it of the human psyche that is hard to leave behind after reading, which is why I oft read 'All In' afterwards. Most intriguing is the twist you have on views, reinterpreting general concensus.


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  • From kinai26 on October 31, 2009
    Sugoiiiii I begun to read "All in" first but now I´m following both stories. I must admit that I have come to hate your version of Sakura. I usually like her in the original manga.

    I like the different take on the two stories, and at the moment I prefer "constallations" because Sakura isn´t scheming. I feel bad for Naruto though, who has a much darker life than first expected. Well anyway, I´d just want to say that I love this story and will follow it till the very end XD
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 30, 2009
    Wow...you make these characters so amazing!!! And not too OOC, props to you!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on October 30, 2009
    Wow. So far so good, but your plots moving too slowly. Constellations moves way faster. Both are good.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 30, 2009
    this is sweet. well sasuke and naruto anyway. it'd be sweeter if sakura wasn't such a bitch. well im off to read the other now
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 28, 2009
    Wow! Constellations is obviously pulling me but after reading it I had to find something softer to grasp to and this in its naked need is humbling and lilting.

    Was that Sasuke at an absolute low or at his all time high? Breathtaking and now I'm crying but for a different reason :) Can't wait for more, yatta, please please ;)
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 28, 2009
    Wow....great set-off! Sakura is certainly evil, you do her justice here! And great work wih making Naruto and Sasuke very emotional, but not too angsty/emo.
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  • From serenagold on October 27, 2009
    Awwww.... All In is taking a sweet branch. Now I dread that reading Constellations will be much darker. O_O (not that I mind dark, its just, you know, I haven't read it yet and don't know what to expect.)

    Keep up the great work. I hope reading two of the same story going two different places won't be that confusing.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 27, 2009
    damn. that was really fluffy there at the end. *sniff* off to read the other
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