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By : momhuey8
  • From uchihasanyuu on November 16, 2009
    I really get so excited when you update this story but I really REALLY hate Sakura. Everytime I see how much she's hurting Naruto I just wanna stab her!! I sure hope you kill her off soon or something. heehee great story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2009
    ok. I have to say I've been loving this story since you started, I read every update and I can't get enough. BUT, can we be done with crazy naruto now? It seems like it's been going on forever. I know you need to set the stage and cement the major character shifts but I get it already. still love your plot though.

    much love,
    Dvice.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 16, 2009
    It's scary so twisted Naruto's getting because of Sakura. You have amazing writing skills. Great chapter!
    Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 15, 2009
    I can't breathe! You are seriously killing me, I know it's only a story but the pure menace in this is suffocating! How intricate and delicate the face of evil. Even Sasuke armed to the hilt against Sakura's claims on him is pulled in on the wisps of affection and confusion. Naruto with all his strength cannot stand up to her. It's almost hopeless. You play on our inadequacies, insecurities and all those good intentions that go astray. It's so hard to read, I feel like I've already been there or am currently wallowing in it, yes, I skimmed some of that in italics because it is unbearable - it isn't just Naruto breaking...

    I've started saving this story and am even on a borrowed pc to catch up, looking forward to the updates most especially to her comeuppance because I'm a firm believer in reaping what we sow!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 13, 2009
    huh. sounds like poor naru is in some major shit
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 12, 2009
    You are very adept with how you write out the transitions between characters!
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  • From ANON - jne on November 11, 2009
    Sakura is making my blood boil. I can't wait for Sasuke to find out. I hope she gets what she deserves.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 11, 2009
    Holy shit. Sasuke better go get Tsunade before it's too late. The way Sakura is manipulating tears at my heart and gives me the chills. This is crazy good writing. I can't stand the anticipation!
    Keep going!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 08, 2009
    *cuddles chibi Sasuke and Naruto*

    Sakura = EVIL!!!

    Great work!
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  • From GudenMulle on November 08, 2009
    I've just written a review for "Constellations" as well, but this is fantastic as well!
    I got a bit carried away in the first review, so I think this will be a bit.. saner XD.
    I really love this fic, and I love the concept of having TWO different stories begin from a common starting-point. I know what it feels like to sit there and go 'I could do this .. bt I could also do that ... or this ... or this weird fourth option...', but nice work that you're actually writing it! It also shows how different a story can develop depending on the writer.
    Sakura is psychotic in this! Holy crap, she makes me want to look over my shoulder from time to time.
    I really hope you write more to this, because this is just too sad to leave like this! Some kind of closure must come. Whether it's a happy one or a sad one is up to you, but you've got a habbit of just letting the ending thread hang and I really want to know how this ends!
    LOVE IT! :D
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  • From ANON - Tamara on November 08, 2009
    That's interesting. Sakura let something slip and Sasuke didn't catch it. He said he checked and Naru's been sleeping day and night, yet Sakura says he's been up all night doing guard duty which is why he's tired. Why would she think he's doing guard duty if he's been sleeping and what bout those headaches, will he get Tsunade to check him before he kicks him out of the house?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 08, 2009
    bitch.sakura not you
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 07, 2009
    omg I hate that little pink haired thing.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 07, 2009
    Man, Sakura's really getting to them with this latest tactic....
    Keep going!
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  • From kinai26 on November 07, 2009
    By Kami how I want to kill her for hurting both of them. How could she! Such a bitch #growls#

    See, you bring out the emotions in me XD I simply love this story even though I wish that Sakura will end up in hell for hurting my favorite Naruto guys. I can barely wait till the next update X3
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