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Reviews for All In

By : momhuey8
  • From serenagold on December 03, 2009
    What the... could this be... a positive chapter?? I don't believe it.

    YES!!!!! Relief! Oh sweet relief! This makes me so happy you have no idea. Naruto's freak out at Sasuke and Neji seeing his past was perfectly executed. Also I loved the memory where Naruto decides to become Hokage.


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2009
    I like this chapter poor Neji having to deal with all of that by himself....I can't wait until they figure out Sakura's the one responsible for all the hurt and pain Naruto has been dealing with.
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 02, 2009
    QQ I missed this story.
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  • From Dorkchic on December 01, 2009
    Shouldn't someone be tracking Naruto's movements for the last chunk of time? If nothing else they can use it to narrow down a list of suspects to those he sees on a regular basis. Someone that has the ability and the one on one access to Naruto to perform such a delicate task. That is, of course, if the jutsu is in any way time-consuming. I am assuming that it is not something that can be done in two seconds while waiting in line at the ramen stand.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on December 01, 2009
    Incredibly intense! Great job here!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on December 01, 2009
    Y'know, this one is still really interesting. I don't know why, but I like this one more than I like Constellations. It feels like Constellations has fallen off the bandwagon of thought. I really love 'All In' though, but I wish you would stop leaving it at such cliffhangers, because it's depressing.
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  • From serenagold on December 01, 2009
    O_O

    I hope what they're doing works.
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  • From ANON - amarilis on November 29, 2009
    just wanted to say that I really like your story (both endings , actually)...
    PLEASE write again soon !!!
    :)
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on November 26, 2009
    Hooray! Another great chapter! I hope you get a chance to update soon! :)
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 25, 2009
    Those were some intense memories! Excellent work!
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  • From Sigart on November 25, 2009
    I am so, so, so glad the mind games are over now. And you're right, it's only three chapters, but it was just so disgusting, I think I really would've been sick if I had to read more of it. I still would've though XD

    Oh, I really enjoy the angst though XD Although I must admit I prefer Sasuke angst. It's sorta more... in character I guess, however the circumstances you've created -makes- this in character.
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  • From ANON - Charm and Strange on November 25, 2009
    Oh. My. God. You know, I stopped reading this story for a couple chapters because I thought Sakura's genjutsu was what Sasuke ACTUALLY DID. God. I love Sasuke, but I was going to have Orochimaru rape him if he'd really done that. Thank God Sasuke realized it.
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  • From LadyWolf on November 24, 2009
    Sakura is too good at that genjutsu but I hope somebody finds out what that bitch is doing to him!!
    I can't stand her!!!

    I almost cried when he tried to kill himself over and over again.!

    post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2009
    As I said before I'm humbled by your writing. Poor Sasuke having to explain all the craziness in Naru's head...I wonder what Neji is thinking....Can't wait until next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 24, 2009
    The emotions are worse because emotional wounds are harder to heal than physical wounds so what Sakura is doing IS worse. Since Naruto is physically so strong, it's jarring to see a damaged Sakura overcome him so effectively.
    It was disturbing (but necessary to the plot) to read how Naruto was trying to kill himself via stabbing/slashing his body in order to "free" Sasuke.
    Great chapter. Cannot wait for Tsunade to fix this and for Sakura to get what's coming to her.
    Keep going!
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