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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2009
    Thank you for a new chapter...I was hoping that Sasuke would have seen through the genjutsu and found out the pink headed wench was trying to kill his love and end up killing her...I love that Sasuke is so mature and willing to love Naruto at all cost in this fiction. You don't get a Sasuke that is unselfish very often.. I love it can't wait to see how this story ends
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  • From arabuzumaki on October 27, 2009
    after reading this one I realized that i did not think about sakura at all while I was reading the new chap of constellation >.>
    I wonder of neji will find his someone, he's too hot t o not have a boyfriend of his own ^_^ and it's nice to see sasuke being humble.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 25, 2009
    damn man. poor naru!
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  • From ANON - Burandei on October 25, 2009
    >_< >_< >_< As much as I can kind of see where Sakura's mind is going with all of her pain and agony (emotional and physical) I FUCKING HATE HER. I don't know if that's your intention or anything like that, but I swear to god, if I saw her right now and she was lying in that hospital bed, I'd cut her fucking head off. Slowly. BUT, aside from that intense need to vent, your story is AMAZING. Absolutely amazing. I love your character development and I love your plot lines. Keep doing what you do! ^_^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 25, 2009
    Crazy cliffhanger! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2009
    OH man I almost cried when Naruto was hanging and mouthed "I'm sorry" and 'Suke wanting to slash his wrist to join him..AWWW you're killing me..I knew that psychotic wench was going to try to off Naruto and what a sneaky way to do it use the villagers to do it for her...I hope she gets her just deserts in the next chapters..and I thought I'd let you in on me little secrete..I read both stories even though they are the same...yep I'm liking this story so a double read is good...Thanks for sharing.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 22, 2009
    i hate the council. i do love sasuke's idea about the prison though
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 18, 2009
    I freaking love this story. I love how you wrote this last chapter - so amazing.
    Keepgoing!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 17, 2009
    awww awesomeness
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 14, 2009
    lmao good grief!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 03, 2009
    lol. i loved it! very funny!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on October 02, 2009
    There were a lot of typos in this chapter. However,

    No fucking the villagers. No fucking the villagers. No fucking the villagers.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 01, 2009
    lol last line is the best! i was gonna wait to review till it started to change but i just had to say that! and good grief! naruto's language!
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  • From jordash00 on September 30, 2009
    I forgat to review before but I nearly peed in my pants about Kyuubi and Naruto's testicle. That was hilarious! Really.

    I always like a softer Sasuke and this tatooed Naruto is Sexy!!!!
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  • From vanessaclarke on September 29, 2009
    This is wicked! I love it. Not many writers consider the possibility that Sasuke could simply mature and change his mind. I found it interesting how Orochimaru's actual downfall was his inability to understand others on an emotional level. That bit about Sasuke having always followed his heart was quite original. Most people take the perspective that Sasuke has always ignored his heart but now that you bring it up, most of his decisions have certainly not been based on logic. His path has been anything but reasonable. He really has been emotionally driven. It's a rare thing to see that acknowledged in such a way.

    And it's really great to have Naruto's vulnerability recognized without turning him into a whiny sobbing little uke. I love your powerful, foul mouthed Naruto. ^^ It's so great to me that he behaves as a real ninja too, that he doesn't shy away from killing an enemy. I also think this take on his reaction to Sasuke really suits his personality. Plus, wonder of wonders, you didn't ignore the issue of Sakura's crush, and yet she doesn't come off as a completely obsessive psycho... Not yet at least.

    Anyway I'm enjoying your multidimensional point of view in this story so far and I can't wait to see more. Great work!!
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