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Reviews for Chained to the Whirlpool-Reboot

By : YamiNoKami
  • From Evildragon101 on June 23, 2018

    Dude thank you for allowing me to use some of your scens i love this story and it's one of the best Naruto bondage stories I've read along with Mistress. Pleae reply back to me on my newest story Ensla i would really appreciate your help.


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  • From theimpacientone on April 11, 2016
    I hope you update soon and not leave it like that.
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  • From ANON - crimson on January 25, 2013
    ya want to know the funny thing? I randomly clicked a video on youtube(nightcore raindrops) while reading this. frickin perfect match for the beginning of the chapter
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  • From ANON - chm01 on December 07, 2012
    I like this version better, but this chapter is different than the one you had in YFF, is there a reason why?
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  • From ANON - chm01 on November 19, 2012
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on November 18, 2012
    when are you updating chapter 12?
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  • From AllisonJae on September 11, 2012
    Hey, don't stop now. I just finished reading this entire story, and I want more. I loved when Tenten went all feral and killed all those people. I just hope she doesn't do to prison. I hope you post on it again soon. I'm really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Jcogginsa on September 08, 2012
    so...are you incorporating any recent manga revelations into this rewrite
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  • From AllisonJae on September 08, 2012
    Oh, wow! I can't believe it. I made to chapter 28 of this story. Of the three girls I like Tenten the best. She seems a little more together than the other girls, and Naruto seems to have a slightly different relationship with her. I didn't think I would like a story like this, but I have to admit it is interesting.
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  • From AllisonJae on September 04, 2012
    Nice flash. Giving a hints who Sakura started as a slave.
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  • From AgentGv01 on September 03, 2012
    I think I remember the original but if I remember correctly the original didn't have any actual lemons in it which is what I was looking for. So that was kind of a letdown as it was just bondage and S&M which is fine but it gets boring if that's the only thing we see at least to me. So I'm hoping the new version has some lemons in it this time and no I don't count the ending of this as you just glazed over the good part that's the part I wanted to see. Plus if I remember some of the things really go a little too overboard later on as well.


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  • From AllisonJae on September 03, 2012
    I have to admit that this story was a little disturbing at first, but the story is good and look forward to reading more.
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  • From AllisonJae on September 03, 2012
    This story is really getting twisted. On the chapter three.
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  • From AllisonJae on September 02, 2012
    Wow! That was some first chapter. I'm not that familiar with Naruto but this was very well written and kept me on the edge. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Akaikensei on April 29, 2010
    Wow... just wow. This story is just simply amazing. I've been reading this over the last few days and all I can say is wow. This story has just the right amount of romance, action, and sex. I totally love it. From the moment Naruto mentioned the idea of bringing TenTen into his family, i've been absolutely dying to see her get brought in and you delivered! It wasnt as dramatic as it was with Ino and im a little disappointed she didnt put up a fight like Sakura and Ino, but I suppose to each their own. I love this and am eagerly awating the next chapter. I created this blasted account just so I could review lol. Do you have any plans of bringing any other kunoichi (sp?) into Naruto's family? Like Temari maybe? Damn shed be hot as Naruto's slave...

    ~Akai
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