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Reviews for Chained to the Whirlpool-Reboot

By : YamiNoKami
  • From LyeLye on February 23, 2009
    Well i gave this story a shot, i didnt want to at first but i clicked on it and read halfway down the chapter. Sakura's shitty attitude toward one of her best friends "Naruto" pissed me off to no end. So i stopped reading it. You seriously need to work on your intro's plus sakura doesnt act like that, or say things like that. Unless he was trying to grope her, or peak into the girls bathroom. I could see a reason to kick him in the stomach for that. But he didnt even do anything to her. Unless you dont show him doing anything to her, which if he didnt there is no need for the shitty attitude, thats that.
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  • From nm1716 on February 22, 2009
    I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 20, 2009
    That was a good chapter but too bad that Hinata is Anko's pet but what would be great is to see Naruto and Anko become a couple or something and share their pets with each other... That would be some great chapters that you could make a reality. Hope to see an update sometime and keep up the great chapters and write soon.
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  • From naruto86 on February 19, 2009
    Does this mean that Anko and Hinata will become Naruto is mates like Sakura and Ino since all four girls seem to love him and from the looks of it Anko's pussy will someday belong to Naruto since they care for each other right?
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  • From Yamizenchou on February 19, 2009
    Nicely done. I really do like the way this story is going. I can't wait to see the scene with Tsume-chan; no one ever uses that fine milf and her finer ass
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on February 14, 2009
    Please update really soon!!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on February 12, 2009
    Please update soon! :)
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  • From Firebullet19 on February 06, 2009
    Please update date soon I like this story.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 27, 2009
    Please update soon!!!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 21, 2009
    Please update real soon! :)
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 14, 2009
    Please update soon! :)
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  • From Tleilaxu on January 05, 2009
    VERY NICE Chapter! I cant wait to see what happens with Hinata.. as for a female Haku please dont icky.... Anyways keep up the good work, I also like the idea of Shika getting the tentacle room and maybe a ride on the horse LOL

    If I may make one small request Spare Temari from Naruto LOL.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on December 30, 2008
    I know you said that you want Tenten as the last but I was hoping that you could add Haku to it as well because I can only find one STORY with a female Haku and Naruto besides the Oneshot collections. Please e-mail me at Leaprechaun1@comcast.net and also, once again, please update soon!!!
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  • From Tleilaxu on December 22, 2008
    Holy snaps that is one of the BESt stories I have read on here in YEARS! I seriously hope you continue to keep up the excellent work when your life permits! Assuming of course the story did not end at chapter 19. A perfect ending if I may add, assuming of course that it is indeed an ending.

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  • From fenrir7139 on December 17, 2008
    This is one of the best stories on this site, and I sincerely hope you continue to write chapters.
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