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  • From DragonMan220 on December 14, 2007
    Chapter 14 rocked! Naruto is da man, I'm surprised he was running out of energy since Kyuubi usually gives him plenty. I can't wait to see what happens next, but could you write about what happened between the sisters???? All the evidence points to a really good time I'd like to see.
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  • From DragonMan220 on December 08, 2007
    Very nice chapter, I liked it a lot, though I did dislike the changing viewpoints and would have prefered two chapters, one focusing on Sakura, Tsuande, and Shizune while the other focused on Naruto and the Hyuuga sisters.
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  • From Hiate on December 07, 2007
    Brilliant story, love the sex scenes. You going to use old characters again? cause i wouldn't mind seeing Hinata getting it on with Kiba this time instead of akamaru
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  • From UzumakiIno on December 07, 2007
    Mmmm, wonder what Hana could fear? I look forward to Sakura training Tsunade. Keep it coming.
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  • From DragonMan220 on December 02, 2007
    I'd like to see Hanabi get some action now that's she's apparently single and interested. I can't wait to see how Sakura's encounter with Tsunade goes, it will be intersting to say the least!
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  • From Unit01 on November 25, 2007
    awesome job keep it up
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  • From DragonMan220 on November 24, 2007
    Okay, will Ino get to experience the wonder of Naruko and Hinata both pleasuring her cock? I would also like to see Hinata as the filling in a blond sandwich with both lower holes nicely stuffed.
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  • From SilverGriff on November 24, 2007
    wow, talk about making it perfect to having a distraught broken tsunade to go crawling to Naruto, to beg him to look at her like that again, to be willing to give anything and everything including herself for another look and touch.
    it would also be a perfect start point to teach hana who is top dog. it would be so funny to leave her inside the cage in her own apartment
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  • From UzumakiIno on November 23, 2007
    Excellent work. Looks like Naruto taught Tsunade another thing about pleasure. I wonder, would it be possible for Hana to, when she wakes up, try to entice Naruto again and end up as his own slave? She did try to make an alliance with him, and Hinata is probably still upset at what has happened to her former sensei. Keep it coming
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  • From mbshadow88 on November 23, 2007
    good chapter but not quite as good as you're others.
    can you make hanabi naruto's third slave please.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on November 23, 2007
    I am curious as to what. Punishment is going on between Tsunade and Naruto for Ino. I would like to see Tsunade,Hana,Anko and Naruto pairing. That would be a very interesting chapter to read... 3 dominators and one some what of a dominatrix/submissive
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  • From UzumakiIno on November 19, 2007
    Man, Hana is pretty hardcore. Excellent chapter!
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  • From dest on November 19, 2007
    loving the story so far. anyway to get temari into the fun? maybe tsunade misses ino and asks suna for some kind of good will package or something and temari is sent.
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  • From DragonMan220 on November 17, 2007
    I can't wait to see what Tsunade has planned. I always pictured Anko as a mistress instead of a slave, seeing her as a higher up slave able to boss the other slaves around is an interesting contrast. If you're taking requests.... I'd like to see Naruko taking in Ino's dick while eating Hinata out.
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  • From Inigeshi on November 16, 2007
    mrow... i like how hana hadles her girls its really new, i guess she into doggie play. When i fist saw this fic i was a little iff about reading it b/c i'm not a naru/hina lover but now i'm addicted. you write well and this is really my kink i love d/s fics. i'm happy to say this is a damn good d/s fic, it seems like ever since estia every one puts d/s in the label and very few deliver tastefully done and creative stories, you happen to be one of those few so keep up the great work and i look forward to the next chapter. oh and i also have a request if it's not too much trouble to ask. i want to know if you can somehow put the sand sibs with a nice incest twist (T/G T/K) in whiich temari is the master, that ive yet to see and really would like to.

    thanks
    inigeshi---
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