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Reviews for Naruto Punishment

By : devil
  • From 1505627 on October 09, 2008
    it is spelled byakugan.and can you do some scat?
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  • From Intelligo on September 02, 2008
    Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more. Have you considered analingus between sisters? Perhaps after Naruto fills one up with cream? Just a nasty suggestion.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 14, 2008
    I love it that Naruto and Hinata are going to be married and I can't wait for the wedding.... I also can't wait for the honeymoon as well. I wonder who is going to be the wedding present for them? My choice would be Tsunade for Naruto and Kurenai for Hinata so that a very wild time for both of them. (Hey guys side with me on this!) Any way I'm looking forward and hoping you liked my idea for the next chapters.
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  • From Chronostorm on July 24, 2008
    Well i can say it was interesting but here is a question will Naruto draft more slaves and what is going to happen to Konohamaru and if Naruto does draft more slaves i put up Shion (from the Shippuden movie) as one
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2008
    Great chapter I'm curious as too how Ino and Haniba will be involved in the wedding and about what's going too happen too konohomaru. Plus though it may not be relevant too the story what would happen too Sakura and Shizune if Tsunade died or just got too old would they go on by themselves or give themselves too another master or masters, e.g Sakura-Naruto, Shizune-Anko. Still this is a great story and I can't wait for your next update
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  • From DragonMan220 on July 24, 2008
    Bring on the reason for Hanabi attacking Konohamaru. If it's good I suggest she gets to punish Konohamaru's Sexy no Jutsu form.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on July 23, 2008
    Hello... I would like to say that your story is really, really, and I mean it, really good. I think the way you have Naruto act is very exciting. Please keep up the great work and I hope you get your computer working soon. P.S. I was wondering when you might have Naruto do a Kage Bushin Orgy with the girls in one of your chapters?
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  • From carlos20dgm on June 29, 2008
    good history
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  • From GhostwriterMO on June 28, 2008
    Whoa... thanks for coming back... and... whoa.... ao anybody can do a guest fic?.... cool... I'm seriously looking forward to more action so I hope you update soon... Whoa!!!
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  • From DragonMan220 on June 26, 2008
    I thought Naruto had to give permission to Tsunade, Sakura, and others to touch his girls???? Does this mean he'll be punishing Sakura when he recovers????
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  • From Chronostorm on June 20, 2008
    Well that was definately a good chap found the whole role playing part interesting but i think that Hinata's role would be to dominate for her genral but it works out very well in the end
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  • From DragonMan220 on June 19, 2008
    So... whose birthdays was it???? I liked the chapter, very nice and it totally made up for the last one!!!
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  • From Chronostorm on June 18, 2008
    Well i certainly love this story and how its going about the only i would ask to have included is Shion (from shippuuden movie) being Naruto's slave other then that i am good but ya i love how you went about everything hard to find good ones like this
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  • From devil on April 14, 2008
    Not bad, could use a little more detail and stretched out a little more if you as me personally. The nipple ring was a nice idea and i'm glad people are taking up the chance to add a chapter to my fic, lord knows i'm having enough trouble writing my own.
    hope you write a fic and place it in your name
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  • From darthme1011 on March 10, 2008
    nice and i would also like Koyuki(princess from the Naruto movie) in narutos harem?
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