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Reviews for Naruto Punishment

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  • From darthme1011 on March 10, 2008
    nice
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  • From marc7028 on March 02, 2008
    ok from reading all the chapter 1-18 all i can say is nice and evn though some part have screehing thinking wut your trying 2 say oh 1 more thing whens the next part comming out
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 28, 2008
    I say yes, marriage is good! Plus, I can see naruto also ordering a sexy bride costume for the wedding night and having sex with Hinata while she wears that. I'm glad Hinata stopped Tsunade, Hanabi was definitely not ready for that level.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2008
    This story is great. There are two ideas I would like too see in the future, either Hana, Ino or Sakura being walked through the village on a leash like dogs by their respective master either under a genjutsu or not. Also I think TenTen should end up with a master since she seems too be the odd one out probably Naruto. But even if you didn't do any of these things i'm sure your story will continue to be as excellent as it has been so far.
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 31, 2008
    Very interesting chapter, I was hoping for more of Naruto's slaves though. I like Princess Hanabi, very cute! I can't wait to see what Tsunade has planned.
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  • From Intelligo on January 31, 2008
    Good chapter, although short.

    Hope you update again soon.

    Also, a teen titans punishment story sounds pretty good.
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  • From bloodlust002 on January 30, 2008
    I like your story update soon man.
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  • From iwillnotdie on January 17, 2008
    Great story... Inever thought i would like reading something like this but i have immensely
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 08, 2008
    I'm eager to see Hanabi's role in Naruto's slaves. I love Kitty Hinata, she's great. I can totally see her curled up at Naruto's feet while he does paperwork as Hokage.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on January 08, 2008
    I can't complain because ur story is just great.. I hope to see an update.. It seems u didn't get to check for any problems but ur chapter was great... I would like to do the drawing but I don't have any good pics of Hanabi yet.. Update soon
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  • From DragonMan220 on December 23, 2007
    So, Hinata is the kitty, Ino is the Lady, what is Hanabi? I can't wait to see what role the mask plays in Hanabi's initiation. I'm loving the idea of Anko taking control of Kurenai and Hana, pure genius on Naruto's part!
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  • From UzumakiIno on December 18, 2007
    Mmm, Hanabi's training leads to Hyuugacest. Nice work!
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  • From Hiate on December 15, 2007
    Loved the way Naruto 'handled' the women of konoha hehe, Hinata shouldn't of gotten Naruto mad by taking her special suit off, bet thats going to open a lot more pleaures too. Kind of felt sorry for Hanabi as she was forced to take the punishment with her sister though, can't wait to see what you write next.
    oh i would love to see Ino posses someone then get fucked whislt in their body, that would be awsome thanx
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  • From lightningplum on December 15, 2007
    Not that your that chapters haven't been great, but the fact that naruto would have sex with 6 women then shout at hinata for sleeping with her younger sister is a tiny bit to ooc for my taste.
    But on a good note your story is really good!,I might be able to draw you pic you want but bear in mind I'm not Usually a hentai artist! and it might take me a while.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on December 15, 2007
    Wow a great story. I want to know do you want them as they are or in some kind of clothing.. I need to see a pic of Hanabi when she is older and a better pic of Hinata in her late teens or so... And Hanabi would be in her early teens right... That drawing would be very interesting indeed.. But I wander how does Naruto do Ino all night. Sakura for a while then turn around and has Tsunade and Shizune all over him, Then you have Ayame I would like to see her in a better outfit or something more attractive then her apron and that on.. If you seen the show you know what I am talking about... Hope to hear from you soon..... JTB8834@aol.com
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