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By : pellaz

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From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 05, 2006
Wow, I just finished reading this on zettai hentai and wanted to review because it was freaking amazing. Those last two chapters were unbelievable! I love how you tied in some of Naruto's memories just before the battle with Oro and how you described the sealing was so great. And for a second I thought it was going to be happy, happy, but then when Naruto was like bring him here. I was like aaah. But I think that was awesome the way it happened. And the scene in the last chap with the memorial and how he looks up at the sky. Oh gosh. This was just cool. I've never read anything like it and its ending. Man, there are so many things I still want to know about Sasuke. I'd kill for like a follow up, but that would probably ruin the whole feeling of the story, huh.

What's strange is at the end I wasn't... traumatized. I cried and all, but I think Naruto would be happy, and Sasuke... *wails* Who knows what will took place after the story ended... gosh I feel all emotional now. I wonder if that could ever happen in the manga. Your Jiraiya was really good too btw. It was all great. Gosh, those kids were right when they were always talking about how being a ninja isn't all fun in games. Anyway, thank you for an amazing fic!
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From ANON - chickenwire on September 19, 2006
I love your writing style, and I must also say that this is one of the best Naruto fics I've ever read. :) The only thing that bothered me was that the ending felt abrupt and forced, but the over all feeling you were going for came across I think. Excellent. Thanks for the read.
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From ANON - pepperminT-T on September 18, 2005
I love your fanfic! Its very different from your standard SasuNaru. Can I draw a fanart for your fanfiction? http://peppermint-t.deviantart.com in case you want to know my art style.
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From ANON - kisei tenshi on July 15, 2005
Wow... This is a really nice story. It made me cry a few times (haha, maybe I'm just too emotional).
It's easy to understand and doesn't use much of those flashy, chimp words either. I like the way you manage to mix humor and angst together. Good work!!
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From ANON - MindGames5150 on July 03, 2005
I'm still crying...huh...
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From ANON - ladygizarme on June 16, 2005
waaaaaaaah!! *cries* it's over already? i was really hoping you'd go more into what happened to sasuke after... what his thoughts and feelings were... did he stay in konoha? did he feel anything for naruto?? damn, kinda unfulfilling ending, but i'm glad you at least kinda closed out the story for naruto's genin team... you could soooo do a follow up fic though.. even if only a few chapters... *pleads on hands and knees* pleeeeeeaaaaaasssseeee *ahem* ok well despite my wanting more than this, the story was still awesome.... *goes to wait for future fics* ja ne, lg
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From ANON - Iris Anthe on May 19, 2005
A well thought out, well written, and engaging story. You did a fantastic job of bringing this all to life and not just getting lost in PWP land or even in "I have five too many plots going at once" land. I bookmarked this so I could keep checking every week for an update! Really one of the best in the Naruto fan fiction world I've read. I will seek out your other work. I'm a fan. ^_^

PS I especially enjoyed the politics of renegade nin and how they are regulated. Nicely fleshed out there.
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From ANON - Agacissko on May 17, 2005
T______________________________________________T so saaad..!! i didnt expect them to end up like this...(the biggest advantage of your fic! its not predictable :D) but yea, i like the ending..its so complete, noting more, nothing less to add. naruto gave up his life for sasu, and it seems..dunno, right? like their destination :D i really enjoyed reading, i liked nagi, hikaru, kaiki, and now its hard to say godbay :P my FAVOURITE fic ever! YAAY! what can i do to make u write another? :D plzz! ^^
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 16, 2005
Very nice ending -- I liked the feel of "conclusion" and "peace" that you gave it (for lack of a better description). I'm glad that I got to read a fic as well written and deep as this one, even if it was sad. ^___^ Keep up the good work, and thanks for the experience!!!
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From ANON - LtF on May 16, 2005
I love your writing and your ideas and such.. but.. ;__; this story is so sad~~ TT______________TT
Please write another story that is happier!!!
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From ANON - ST on May 15, 2005
this is a wonderful story. definitely something i'll need to bookmark so i can read it again X3
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From ANON - questofdreams on May 14, 2005
Wow....just. Wow. I read the first paragraph of the first chapter and knew right away that this would be a fic I'd like ^^ And in fact, I LOVE it. Gosh, I hope that wasn't the ending!! gah! hehe...but wow...I've never read a fic where Orochimaru took over Naruto's body and so it was really interesting and I just love love how you worked it out and carry the story along. Just..WOW. I am so very impressed with how you've written the story and the complications of it all...I even find myself fond of Naruto's genin team and I almost never like oc's haha. I'm so glad you didn't make the three kids like Team 7 was b/c too many fics have that parallel. But I really liked the kids...Kaiki is a smart one ^^

And I really like your characterization of Sasuke...b/c I do believe that when the time comes, he will give his body to Orochimaru and then Naruto will have to deal with that (in the manga, I mean). Well, this was just so well written...I loved it. Hope to see an update soon! ^^
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From ANON - ladygizarme on May 10, 2005
ai yi yi!! omgoddess!! another great chapter, though i'd expect nothing less ^___^ veeeeeeeeeeeeery well-written, all the interaction between kaiki, nagi and hikaru... so great! you really do those kids justice as OCs, taking the time to develop their characters a lil rather than just throwin' em in for the hell of it.., the flashbacks giving a bit more history and a bit of foreshadowing, the description of the shiki fuujin... ahh, sooo great... but, damn, really pullin' on the heartstrings here, too... so now if naru's really dead, but perhaps also sealed within sasuke .. hmm.. *ponders what'll happen next* and also, did the shinigami take the kyuubi in exchange for their contract??? ah, well hopefully i'll find out next time, ne? hope it doesn't take too long!!! *gives her coveted strawberry pocky as incentive* ^___~
~matane
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From ANON - Houseki on May 09, 2005
Dooooooooood!! ahhh!!! There was no '~End~' or '~Fin~' or "~TBC~" gaaah!! lol So you better be continuing this! OMGODDESS!! ahhh ok breathe...wow. seriously, just wow! And ok, so Oroch is now in Naruto's body? And Naruto is going into Sasuke's body? So that leaves...Kyuubi and Oroch in Naru's body...aiee! I hope I'm thinking way too much into that cuz that would be oohhhh so bad lol gah! I dunno how you're gonna pull this one off! There must be some REAL Sask/Naru!!! *whimpers* This fic is soooo good and yes I still love the OCs! It's kind of funny, cuz at first w/ all the contact you were havin the kids do i was thinking, 'damn girl! you naughty naughty girl!' lol but then i started to think about how most 12 yr olds act and was thinkin of my neph and his best friend and they do get all close like that so you do a pretty good job w/ that ^____^ But yeah, anyways, another great chap and I beg that this will continue for many more chaps! Feel free to email me and let me know so I don't have to worry until the next up'd! ^___~

~Matane
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