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Reviews for Damaetas

By : pellaz
  • From ANON - Absolute-- on April 17, 2005
    AAaaaaah??! This is awesome! Wow! The idea is so...*grins* I can't even put my thoughts into words! Also, your grammar and spelling: PERFECT! That makes a reading experience much more enjoyable. Good work!
    I love how Naruto is taking all of this, too. It just seems so in character, it makes me LAUGH! I could definitely see this actually happening in the real series…(Although, deep down I know it most likely won’t, but…It’s just that good.)
    Anyway, I’m off to read the next chapter! (By the way, I hope you don’t mind, but I’m going to save this story to my computer…Is that alright?)

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  • From ANON - Agacissko on April 15, 2005
    agr...im so going to kill U for such an ending................................................ XD im not after an owfull fluffy and happy thing, but now i feel damn unsatisfied, like sth's missing :P yea, "He went home and began dating women." is NOT enough and sux :P sryyyyyy, but compared to the whole fic, ending is preety lame :P
    anyway, it was one of the best described sex scenes ive ever read :D and It was..well.. impressed :D rest of the fic as well hehe You`re simply a master so write moooooooore!!! :D i wanna read more of your fics :D keep up good work! (exept endings :P yea) ^^
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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on April 11, 2005
    The FF.net version looked fine to me. Too bad it didn't get so many reviews as it SHOULD! This fic is sooo good.

    Everytime I read this fic it makes me wanna cry, because I know how it ends...

    *cries*
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  • From ANON - Stormraven on April 11, 2005
    Really enjoyed your story. Well plotted, good composition, and an engaging read. I liked how you made Naruto have his own faults, you didn't change him, just made him grow older with experience to back up his behaviour. The scene with Orochimaru gave me goose bumps! Was it his really loooooong tongue, or a normal tongue? I've bandied about this question with some other Naruto fans about Orochimaru and his attributes. They seem to be passed along to one body to another when he takes a new one. Got any ideas?
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  • From ANON - Loki on April 08, 2005
    Niiice. I like this lots - you write well, and the set up of Naruto and the current situation is really smooth. Everyone seems IC, and I like the little tadpoles so far. Looking forward to reading more, and seeing how Naturo deals with being a teacher and the poor little mights deal with it as well!
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  • From ANON - twisted on April 05, 2005
    Oooohhhh...you also posted this here! Anyway, I love this story. Are there any revisions or difference from the one in FF.net?

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  • From Kusachu on April 04, 2005
    hey! i think i read this a long time ago ar Fanfiction.net....can't remember if it was complete or not...but i'm looking forward to giving it another go (if it's what i'm thinking it is...) if not, guess i'll have to read and find out. hee hee
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  • From ANON - ST on April 04, 2005
    looking good so far.
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