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By : pellaz
  • From ANON - CrystalChild on May 09, 2005
    this...omg...this is absolutely beautiful. I really REALLY can't wait for more of it. I was chewing on my fingernails for that last chapter. You have an amazing style, very fluent and flowing. I think my favorite aspect of your style (and maybe this sounds kinda weird, but it's true) is how you wrap up each of the sections in the chapter. Your closing sentences are so harsh and beautiful...urg...excuse me while I bow down and worship your style a bit more. :3
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on May 09, 2005
    I think I now know why my eyes are running like this...Not only is it because your story is heartbreaking but I have a cold...My nose is running away.
    A real heart clincher this is turning out to be. Not that I mind. I like those melancholy type stories, although I do admit if you read to many of them it gets you depressed as well.
    But I still see this particular story as 'sweet', because I still remember the previous relationship Naruto and Sasuke had. (And the really odd problem I have is that whenever I read fan fictions, I'm always adding in little bits and pieces from previous reads...So sometimes I make a story more sad then it's supposed to be, or more drama-filled or even more cheerful then it was originally written.)
    Wait a moment...Now, I do know that if you're going to explain this you'll do it later, but I have yet another question to ask: Did Sasuke kill Kakashi when he was himself? Or was that Orochimaru?
    Anyhow, I'm going to finish off the last current chapter, than I'm off to Never Land! ^^
    -Peter Pan gives you a Pan Pipe.

    Yosha!
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  • From ANON - Last Try... on May 09, 2005
    *Ahem* My headache is not because of your story, no, no, no...Just from looking at the computer screen from an odd angle.
    Maybe I'm just over emotional or something, but I was tearing up again...*sighs* I just think this is a beautifully written story and I also particularly like it how you've created such humorous original characters. Normally I dislike OCs, but I quite like these three...There's just something about them that makes them seem as real as the ORIGNAL Naruto crew. Maybe it is because they have a bit of that ‘Ninja Flare’ that Masashi-san portrays nicely…And you’ve given them that too! Now, I’ve got a question: Are they based off any other characters, from other series, or solely from your imagination?
    Whahahaha, and now I am off to the next chapter!
    But first, a gift: Strawberry Strudel.
    I hope you don't mind all of the bakery goods.

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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on May 09, 2005
    Oooh, I was cut off...
    (Ouch, I have a headache...)
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on May 09, 2005
    (Ouch, I have a headache...)
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  • From ANON - 123 on May 08, 2005
    *blink blink*...You're finished? NOOOO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on May 08, 2005
    This story makes me cry so much...For some reason, whenever you write 'scenes', they're always so dramatic and emotional...And I love it. Wonderfully written, and quite tasteful, they are. At least I think so.
    I know I've been saying this in each review, but I am always so grateful for the well written chapters; your grammar and spelling are elite! (I just watch Hackers...Have you seen that movie? It's funny, and kind of corny, but over all it’s pretty good.)
    And I love this idea for a story! *Continues to watch you bloat* Keh keh keh.
    Cherry Pie! I just made one…with Mrs. Smith's help, ya.
    And you have more chapters out! I've been gone for awhile...I need to catch up on my reading... (I need to read some more of Living a Lie as well...)
    *scampers off to the next chapter*

    Ah, but first I must visit the Loo...
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 08, 2005
    So Naruto is dead? Is this the end of the fic?

    I have Mixed thoughts about this. I didn't want Naruto to die, damnit. *looks for her tissue*

    Keep up the awesome (albeit evil torterous) work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 08, 2005
    *blink* Ummm.....I should be crying, shouldn't I? And something tells me that if there is another chapter after this one (and I have a feeling that there will be, as you seem like a person who likes to wrap everything up in the end) I will be bawling my eyes out by the 3rd paragraph. ^^ But this was a great chapter -- very touching -- and if it was the end then it was a great one!!! *sigh* I said it in one of my earlier reviews, and I'll say it again: why do all of the good fics have to be sad? It's not fair!!! *pouts* Ah, well...... keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja!!!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 06, 2005
    Wow, deep and sad. So is there a Sasuke? Is there a reason to hope? If not, then Naruto is going to drive himself insaine. The chounin exams is 'Sasuke' going to make an appearance, cause I don't think he believes that Naruto is dead.

    Anyways great fic. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on May 05, 2005
    you're welcome very much, and i'll definitely keep reading this fic as long as you keep posting it... it was recommended in a forum somewhere, but i didn't actually check it out right away... i'm so glad i finally did!! tis awesome, you so rock ^__^ anyway, i really liked this chapter, especially that last scene with sakura.. a lot of emotional depth in that part and great description.. can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on May 04, 2005
    Many thanks to ladygizarme for finally finding a Narufic to share with me! lol Usually I'm the one who comes across the fics and give them to her, but yours she gave to me! ^___^ Anywho, she was right, this fic is really good. And the genin are so kawaii! At least they learned "teamwork" quicker than Nar/Sak/Sask did *smirks* Gizarme and me, we've been trying to see if you are using a pattern with the new genin compared to Team 7....but we're seeing bits of each character in the 3 OCs. Which, btw, is a good thing ^__^ Anyways, glad to see you updated so soon! Must love the fic-kas who don't keep their fans awaiting too long! ^__~ Again, good job and can't wait to read what happens next!

    Matane!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 04, 2005
    Thanks for updating!!! *gets yelled at by her parents to get off of the computer and go work on her project that is only 10% done.....and due in one more day* ^^ Hey, I can't help it, can I? Honestly, who would choose to do a supid Latin project rather than reading a wonderful fanfic? *blinks as several people raise their hands* ........freaky teacher's pets.................. *Blames her uncharacteristical procrastination (whew!) completely on her severe case of Senioritis* ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Yurikai Kurosaki on May 04, 2005
    WHAT THE HELL!!!!! This thing is AWSOME!!!
    Way to go!=) But DAMN i just so fuckin hate Orochimaru!!!Oh and please, tell me Sasuke's still alive and will come back to Konoha (actually, more likely to Naruto) But anyway.....
    PLEEEEASE make it be!!!!

    Oh and one more thing, thanks for makin your chapters long enough. I really appreciate that^___^
    Continue your good work it's just simply AMAZING....
    See ya
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on April 29, 2005
    ooooh this fic is really good so far! i'm so glad i checked it out... and naruto's genin team.. i love them!! i'm usually a little iffy about OC's, but those kids are great ^___^ i hope you update again soooooooooon!!
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