Reviews for Secrets of the Hidden LeafBy : Sessakag |
Awesome chapter I loved the Ino/Sai moment and explained their kinks and sexual lives along with Karui as well. As for Sakura and Saskue I could actually see that happen if they didn't get together in the show for Sakura she loved Saskue for long and once she finally got him she realized how emotionless he is and detached he is from her as if he has little interest in Sakura at all. But Sakura doesn't want that she wants to have a man that is understanding to her feelings and needs and also be committed to a relationship with her but sadly thanks to his rough life Saskue can't give all of the things I just said to Sakura like Saskue said Sakura wanted Saskue to be somebody he isn't.As for Saskue he wants Sakura to tend to his needs and it sounds like he likes to be rough but Sakura not like that at all she wants to go at a slow and gentle pace which cause Saskue to be sexually frustrated same with Sakura which results to the beginning of a shotty marriage for them. Also I can't wait to see people walking in on the couples that's going to be funny haha you should have Saskue walk in on Hinata and Naruto having sex and have his sharingan and rinnigan activated so he can have that image burn in his head forever haha.Though I wonder what does he want with Hinata anyway good chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
Nice chapter, complete sexual incompatibility for ss makes wield sort of sense. Sakura being even sexual repressed to the point of problems does too.
Like that ino's a complete switch, as for shikamaru and termari I'd say surprise sex would work. Both are very smart and Shika so easly board it's almost laughable. Random unexpected sex would be something the probably be a big thrill for him. Ternari though given her childhood and how trauma translates to sexual desires as adults. Being bond completely or not being comfortable being limited in movement in any form makes a lot senses to me. It kind of depends if you want to go kink or vanilla with them
For Tenten, I always thought her kind of kink would be group sex. During the show it looked like she had a thing for both Lee and Neji at different points. So maybe have her in a gangbang.
Great chapter! I wonder if Hinata will get romantic feelings for others.
Another hot chapter. Naruto catching Hinata blindfolded and masturbating was hot as hell. I liked how you portrayed all the characters as adults who live their lives. So many fics in many different fandoms have them do the same things and act like they did as children. Also are Ino and Sai swingers? If they are perhaps a threesome between Naruto/Ino/Hinata.
Fuck this one is also incredibly hot. More smut orientated than Monster but still, the sex in this is so well written that it makes me press that NEXT CHAPTER button... and get annoyed that I have to wait . :D
Oh well.... :D
More please!
This was a great chapter it looks like everyone has secrets of their own I can't wait to see the other couples because in my opinion it wouldn't hurt to have side stories along with the Naruto,Hinata and eventually saskue main story plus I love how Naruto caught Hinata in the act and the two of them got busy with each other.
Wow!!! Seriously one of the best fics I have read on this site. It's awesome and just keeps getting hotter with each chapter. I've been following your other fic "Monster" as well and both the fics are among my favourites in this site. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter of both fanfics!! By the way, could you write a chapter where Hinata begs Naruto to create a few shadow clones and gangbang her? Would love to read that!!
I hope we see Sasuke soon, its chapter 5 and still no sign of him.
Wow loved this! I can't wait until we see more of Sasuke with the other two. I'm usually not that much of a Sasuke fan, but you have me intrigued about the dynamic between the three. I'm excited about the next chapter!
any chance you can write more of this one than Monster. Not that I am saying monster is bad it’s just this one is so much better.
5/5 fucking loved it.
Well now, that was interesting. I can't wait to see Naruto and Hinata try out more toys.
Hey I'm the guest from the last review and holy shot your a girl!! I didn't know I must say you are a talented writer and as for this chapter it was great, Hinata is slowly giving her desires and what better way to spend and share her desires then with the man she loved since they were kids and your right with the sharingan plus with the rinnigan Saskue can see everything and he can't unsee it will be in his mind forever so I hope you have saskue catch Naruto and Hinata doing the deed that would be so funny to see haha anyway great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
Another hot update. I loved the spanking of Hinata. That was damned hot to have Hinata blindfolded and to spank her. I love Naruto's wild and aggressive and wild side. I always imagined he had one. At the same time though Naruto kept enough of himself not to hurt Hinata. He also realized that Hinata's trust in him and her submission were gifts no to be abused.
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