Reviews for Secrets of the Hidden LeafBy : Sessakag |
i like this story as long as Naruto gets to get all of Hinata firsts. includiong boobjob and anal.
This is amazingly well written, perhaps the best written fanfic I've ever read, I'm certainly a new fan of yours. :)
One thing I will say though, I really hope there's no Sasunaru in it, that would completely turn me off the story, which would be a shame because you're an exceptional writer.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :-D
Absolutely love this! It was freaking hot as hell and I like how Naruto is a lot more mature and sure of himself. Pretty awesome how it take place after the war, I feel like people don't really write fanfic for that time period much. not sure why though. Anyway this was really well written and the description awas soooo good and detailed. I hope you dedicate some time to this cause I really want to read more and I'm a fan of the Naruto/Hinta/Sasuke pair. Don't worry about the haters. For some reason a lot of the fans of Naruto are so sensitve and like to bitch moan and whine when they don't get stuff the want or when people write stuff that doesn't follow what they think it should. Really stupid since the point of fanfiction is to use characters from a series to tell a DIFFERENT story. Fucking gets on my nerves when I look for reviews to see if I wantt to read the fic and its just a bunch of crybabies.
Sorry, got off topic a little bit. I loved the chapter and can't wait to read more when you get the time!
You lost me as a fan with this one good luck with your future works
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