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By : OfFansAndFlames
  • From Ayra on January 26, 2013
    Hey there, I just wanna say that I am TOTALLY and COMPLETLY addicted to your fic, you make me wish this was actually a book that I could have and carry with me to all the places *__* I reallyyyyyy love your writting and your drama and their relationship, everything's just perfect and lovely ^_^
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  • From missmurder on January 20, 2013
    I am so addicted to this story! It is soooooooo good! :D
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  • From RiswynnWarrior on January 10, 2013
    And just when the story's getting good! I hope you update alot more often! I can't wait for the next chapter.....
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  • From ANON - arianauchiha25 on January 09, 2013
    wow!! naruto took that news better than i thought he would. i cant wait to read more about what is too happen next. please hurry and update as soon as you can because i am sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation
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  • From ANON - RememberMeSoon on January 08, 2013
    Okay, I love your story and the interactions between characters. Your suspense is done well and highly addictive. I've been reading for some time (sorry, for not posting sooner).

    The only thing bugging me is about the money for the surgery. Which country is this in? If it's in US, then why do they need the money prior? You can't be denied medical treatment based on lack of insurance. Surgery can be pushed back maybe but unlikely given the rate the tumor is growing. Hospitals will make payment plans based on income during cases of high-price medical expenses. With the start of Sasuke's loan and financial aide paperwork a the remaining chunk would likely be forgiven if Itachi explained his job-situation properly. This probably only bugs me because I've messed with hospital red-tape through my job though. Most people don't know the rights and laws concerning medical. So they get lost in the system or never ask for help and end up with creditors who are less forgiving. End rant.

    Anyhoo, I love the tenderness between the two in this chapter. It seems like calm-before-the-storm. I'm guessing the drugs and Naruto will be found out with the worst of timing. Itachi will probably not care that Naruto is living there under normal circumstances. So in order to have an effect, I feel you are probably going to have him be associated with the drugs via the bad timing.

    Sorry, for my rambling thoughts. Really love this story and the realness put into each chapter. Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - arianauchiha25 on December 30, 2012
    awesome as always.... i wonder how naruto is going to react to everything.... cant wait until the next update
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  • From ANON - arianauchiha25 on December 30, 2012
    that was an awesome chapter.... i am a little sad with what is going on with itachi.... i cant wait to see how everything is going to work out for all parties invovled.... please hurry and update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - cinnamon on December 30, 2012
    Oh the feels. Itachi. Oh Itachi. He's gonna be alright. He just gotta. And Sasuke. I know desperate times calls for desperate measures, but the kid is digging his own grave. I fear for what would happen to Sasuke if he gets caught. Since Itachi is mostly at home now, is there a greater possibility naruto will get caught? Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From FromAfar on December 25, 2012
    Thanks for the chapter and hapy, merry Christmas to you! All the best, luck, love and good health to you and your family!

    This chpter seems disturbing, not only because of Itachi's problem, mostly it's all about Sasuke's determination. Is he's going to keep it secret from the two closest to him, there must be some danger or a law he's planning to break. Where and how to raise money, and quickly? Ask Kabuto.
    I'm sure none of the few people close to Sasuke can help him out or lend him the money, so... drug dealing? Burgary? Illegal fights? Anything except for prostitution, as he is not that desperate, not just now...
    I trully enjoyed all the passages with Itachi. Why did he get fired? Is it connected with his deteriorating health? Will he be spending more time indoors now, so his meeting with Naruto is inevitable?...
    Will Itachi notice any chages in Sasuke's personality, as Jyugo did before? Will he stop questioning him about the way he's going to get the money?
    Lots of questions and there're so much more.
    Till the next chapter, then. Thanks again, and good luck!
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  • From Dattebayo-chan on December 20, 2012
    That was awesome. Nice payback by Sasuke. It's so cute how Naruto is so easily scared. It's not always like that though. As soon as he thought Sasuke was in danger, he didn't hesitate to fight. That warmed my heart. Thanks for another lovely chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - arianauchiha25 on December 18, 2012
    that was awesome.... i never would have thought that naruto would be afraid of the dark, lol..... this story just keeps getting better the more that i read it.... cant wait to see what happens next... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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  • From Dattebayo-chan on December 16, 2012
    Awww, this chapter (19) was both angsty and heart-warming. I had a great time reading it. It's wonderful that Naruto and Sasuke have each other. I can't shake the feeling that this is the calm before the storm or somethig though, but time will tell. XD
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  • From mannahpierce on December 10, 2012
    I look forward to every update. I think the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto is wonderfully written. They have each been through so much and yet they are very much adolescents for whom friendship is becoming more. This chapter (19) was such a poignant mixture of horseplay and true intimacy. I don't know who is more scared: Naruto of telling Sasuke about his past or Sasuke of admitting his fears and insecurities. As I have said before, you make us readers care. Bravo!
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on December 10, 2012
    the story is awesome please keep writing it.... i cant wait to see what happens next with sasuke and naruto
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  • From ANON - zombiebabyrubberduckies on December 06, 2012
    So sweet and cute and real.

    This last chapter reminds me so much of my first boyfriend and I in high school. It seems so fast when experiencing it, but looking back, it was months of deepening friendship, discovering feelings, catching sidelong glances, and time spent together coalescing into that final and first explosion of hormones and emotions. Afterwards, the world was still a scary place, but there is no way you'd regret any of those actions.

    Thank you for that perfect view of teenage love.
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