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By : OfFansAndFlames
  • From AliceWinter09 on July 21, 2013
    Congrats on being engaged now and the Europe trip ^^. Still love your story :).
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  • From AlienixX on July 14, 2013
    It's certainly one of my favourite chapters.
    Bitter and tender, with distinct feel of danger. Something's definitely coming. And Naruto's desperate attempts to capture and make *this* linger are very endearing. He has his own way to express his feelings. Will we see Sasuke finding his and putting it all into words?.. Honestly, I prefer actions to words and Naruto has learnt well enough to read Sasuke's actionspeak. Unity thru difference.
    Kabuto's a threat. But is Itachi? He's weak after all, and surely guys could cook a credible lie that would work for some time ... And couldn't Itachi be a good, understanding person, seeing his brother's emotional involvement and even help with some legal advice? Surely he wouldn't report Naruto the moment he saw him or kick him out. They'd make friends with Naruto easily and happily conspire for Sasuke's happy ending.. Am I delusional? OK, Itachi could advize something on Naruto's situation anyway, even if he knew only half of the truth about them.
    I'm very interested in the next development, Juugo's reason to take part in the crime, will Sasuke manage to talk them out of it or not, any signals from Orochimaru or Kabuto etc.
    As usual, I'm glad you're keeping it real and not too simple. Feelings mix, and mix well. No one's perfect. Security's lie; all people lie; white lie's just an illusion we need etc.
    Thank you for such a good story and wish you all the best.
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  • From Dattebayo-chan on July 11, 2013
    I'm still proud of Sasuke. He's strong and brave to stand up against Kabuto. He's smart for his age. I am a bit worried about him though because Kabuto obviously won't let him go easily. Sasuke's friends are involved too now. I hope things work out in the end though. Thank you for the update!

    Also, congratulations on your engagement! That's great news and I'm happynfor you. XD
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  • From ANON - kit on July 11, 2013
    Drama!! I'm glad that sasuke was able to stay strong and continue refusing kabutos 'orders ....but wHat does kabuto have planned?! Also want to know how he got Juugo into robbing a house. Hopefully sasuke and naruto are able to find a solution to their problem without suffering through some negative consequences.

    congrats on getting engaged!
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  • From Dattebayo-chan on June 24, 2013
    Yes, I'm proud of Sasuke this chapter! Well done! It's really great how he didn't let Kabuto control him. I have a feeling this is not the end though. Once you get into selling drugs and stuff, it's not so easy to get out. Will Orochimaru and Kabut let Sasuke go?
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  • From ANON - Rys on June 12, 2013
    I really liked the story so far but now I feel there's too much of come twisted, clumsy, crude and bluntly obvious pseudo-psycho-therapy of some kind on Naruto's side. Too many moments that lead to painful flashbacks, too many personal questions. He's really gone too far, being who he is, with his own complexes, insecurities and problems, present or impeding, on his mind, troubling him.
    I understand that it could seem necessary to the author, but to make all these flashbacks *thanks to* Naruto's constant questonning?.. Does he make that good psychotherapist figure? Has he really overcome all his problems?
    While it's true that friends lovers our nearest and dearest are our best help and support, I don't see how Naruto can take all the credit to himself and help Sasuke. It's strange he isn't get beaten on regular occasion.
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  • From Dattebayo-chan on June 11, 2013
    Poor Sasuke, what a trauma. You described his emotions, actions and thoughts in a good way. It was all very realistic which makes reading interesting. Luckily, he has Naruto by his side. The way they interacted together at the end of the chapter made me smile. Well written! XD
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  • From krissi on May 26, 2013
    Sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while. I was able to start again from the beginning and I love how the story has evolved. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so keep up the good work.
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  • From Mysticaldragon11 on March 24, 2013
    Yay for an update! I love this story and I can't wait to see what Sasuke has really gotten himself into and what will happen with Naruto and him.
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  • From ANON - cinnamon on March 10, 2013
    Oh my, there are several chapters I had to catch up on. And what a ride it had been. This story is amazing, kinda like I'm watching a TV series. It makes me hold my breath, anticipating what's to come. Like this last chapter. I hope Sasuke doesn't get in trouble for this but I have a bad feeling. With Itachi in the hospital, he shouldn't have taken risk. And what about Naruto? I wonder how he did at the labor center. This story makes me crave for more. Not to mention this is fantastically written.


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  • From ANON - AlienX on February 20, 2013
    I like your story and keep checking weekly updates. It's really good, well-balanced and quite realistic. Thank for your job.
    Sasuke has been for so long in the focus of attention and action that I feel it's time or some Naruto's 'upgrade'. He unwillingly took on a home pet role, someone "to stick around", a watcher. And he's aware of it : "Naruto had done what he could to help, keeping the house tidy and backing Sasuke up emotionally. Hell, he couldn't even cook for Sasuke. Any attempts at doing so just caused more hassle if anything. But these efforts could only go so far. It seemed so feeble".
    And now he's "taking control" , owning Sasuke. As if he could do anything for him except for satisfying his emotional and sexual needs. In Uchiha's current situation, it's clearly not enough. This "protector's" role doesn't suit Naruto a one bit. In their relationship true feelings and sincere words are mixed with unadequate means, good but unrealistic intentions. So good, so empty.
    Naruto keeps asking Sasuke about the future of their relationship. But what about his own future? Without some certainty, some perspective for himself, what can he hope for two of them?
    He's taken what can't be his to hold and protect. I think it was a mistake. What's worse, he's used the opportunity and he knew it.

    Of course, I was intrigued by these lines, a hint: "There was something more Naruto had wanted to say. Perhaps there was another way he could help. It was risky, yes, but if Sasuke was willing to go this far for his brother… He would discuss this with Sasuke later. He'd wait until Sasuke was in a less fragile state of mind before making any decisions". I wonder what this "another way" is. Hope it can be of some practical use to Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - glerb on February 15, 2013
    Tears....You have brought me to tears...also I HAD to catch up and review so I am going to be late for work....so worth it!
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  • From ANON - cinnamon on February 11, 2013
    Almost had a heart attache reading the part where they Sasuke found Itachi unconscious in the bathroom. But I'm amazed how Sasuke was able to keep it all together, remaining cool, calm and collected at such situation. I hope Itachi will be all right after the surgery. He just can't die. If he does, what will happen to Sasuke and Naruto then? I hope they can get money some other way. I don't like the thought of Sasuke relying on Kabuto's 'connections'.

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  • From ANON - Lia on February 03, 2013
    While I like your story, I'm starting to get a tad bit annoyed with Naruto. All he seems to do is eat (like a pig none the less) and play video games all day.

    I hope he will eventually help Sasuke raise money or do something more productive than be a freeloader. He knows how low on funds they are but he doesn't seem to care...

    He could easily look for a job or just help out during the paper root, he's filled out and doesn't look like an underfed homeless person anymore.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 03, 2013
    Oh no! ITACHI!!

    Good chapter. Please update!
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