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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From KageKyuura on January 17, 2016
    Hmm... this is interesting. Naruto is actually smart but still loud. Poor sasuke all those irritating leech fan girls won't leave him alone. Same goes for Naruto since he's like smoking hot! Poor Naruto. xD
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  • From ANON - Nicole on April 07, 2015
    This is the second time I have read this fanfic and I can honestly say that it is still one of my favorites!! I love everything about it! If you are a fan of NaruSasu or ItaKyu this is a fanfic for you! I recommend this to everyone out there!!
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  • From ANON - I am me on October 24, 2014
    That was such an amazing story!! Very well written. You should do a sequel to this, so we can find out what happens to naruto :)

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  • From ANON - kaizoku on February 07, 2014
    what!! where is the sequel, dammit, dont leave me hanging like this, please T_T I want to know whats gonna happen next...
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  • From ANON - Blue Neptune on December 27, 2013
    I just read TINAG and it was wonderfully written, I thought the entire story was perfectly plotted except the end. I can fully understand that it was becoming tiresome but the way you ended it was not good. Unless you had full intentions of doing a squeal. It has been about three years now, so I’m guessing it's safe to assume there will be no sequel which is a shame because I thought the story was very good and deserves a better closure then you gave it. Even if it is a short one shot. The end was a big disappointment, Just my honest opinion.
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  • From GreenUnicorn on May 13, 2013
    This was an insanely amazing story! I actually started reading it on FF.net and continued it here! You're a great writer, and although I am more than angry at where you left the story, I will eagerly await the sequel. Great job!!
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on May 07, 2013
    Please continue this story. I would like to see what happens to Naruto.
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  • From ANON - ForeverAndEver on May 07, 2013
    Have to say I'm a bit disappointed waiting so long and then it ends just like that. I'm hoping you'll have the sequel up soon, as I do enjoy your writing style.
    Hopefully you'll have some free time this summer to write and relax.
    Looking forward to your next story, please please don't take too long.
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  • From smint45 on May 07, 2013
    So now it is complete. I must say I'm really not happy with the ending... well I still hope you will post the sequal soon. See you!!!
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on May 07, 2013
    ending the story like that big cliff hanger I can say I wasn't happy but if your making a squeal to continue the story I cant wait to read it. keep up the good work
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  • From moodysavage on May 06, 2013
    meanie *pointing a finger accusingly at the computer* you... you... meanie. I kinda' feel like I did after watching the Empire Strikes Back... a great movie and they ended it THERE?! With Solo frozen? Seriously? You know... like that.

    Hope school & work ease up so that you are able to continue because I truly love these characters. Even though you are a meanie leaving Naruto open to be tortured for years while Sasuke grows up and gets trained. I just about can't bear to think about it. Please don't let it be years.
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  • From Miki-chan on February 01, 2013
    I am in love with this story.
    Simple as that.
    Just the way everything comes together and every chapter is better than the last! Geez, I just want to read them all at once and put them in a safe place where I can read them again and again!! So far this is 37 chapters of pure awesomeness. Amazing job!! ^_^
    (Ps I love the way you write this, not sure how to explain it but you had some sort of magic plot bunny or something, didn't you? Haha well, I'm looking forward to the next chapters and hopefully seeing Orochimaru dead, or physically abused maybe just a lil... Haha whatever you do with the next chapters will be great! And I am so going to read this again someday!) well that's the end of my random slightly ranting review. GOOD JOB ^_^
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  • From NekoKoi on January 17, 2013
    Can't wait for the next update! It's a good storyline =)
    I do love some action (not to much torture tho), but i'm quite the sap, so i wish for a happy ending, pretty please ^^
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  • From ANON - Yasha-baby on December 12, 2012
    Oh my god....I love this story. When will the next chapter be up?
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  • From ANON - a fann on November 10, 2012
    HOWWW COULDD YOUUUUU KILLL THEM D:
    ;w; i am sooo sad. Dx
    by the way, this is a lovely fan fiction you have created here.
    i admire you greatly. :D
    i've been meaning to review all of your chapters, but xD
    i don't know why i just never clicked the button, and for that i am super sorry. u~u
    forgive me ;o;
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