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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From ANON - Mindy Dechert on October 03, 2011
    I love this story!!!! Please don't stop writing it. I log onto this story everyday waiting on a new chapter and I always read through it so fast I get a headache :) I really look forward to the next chapter. Btw I started crying when kabuto was torturing naruto, it was a really powerful scene.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 20, 2011
    OMG!! That was such distressful reading but I'm glad Naruto isn't so broken that he can't explain to Sasuke what is really going which will give Sasuke understanding n hope to hang on til their rescue. That was really good. Sasuke has shown some excellent support skills. Hopefully he won't be too scarred after this ordeal n they'll obviously be closer to one another. I hope there is no other really hurtful form of torture later on for our Hero.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on September 20, 2011
    Hey, I know all about how homework and classes can bring any form of creativity to a stand-still, so no worries. I actually thought you were having trouble writing this cause you didn't want to write the non-con, but I think you did a great job for what you had to work with. (shoves pins into a Kabuto-doll) >:) Can't wait for the next chapter, and I personally can't wait til Naruto makes good on his promise too!!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on September 19, 2011
    I am so happy to see another chapter up and as harsh and dark is was to read and how light headed it made me I am happy to see how strong both Naruto and Sasuke are even with the torture they both just went through. I can only imagine what will happen next and will cry with our two favorite guys and look forward to them pulling through it. Plus looking forward to Naruto getting topped by Sasuke is always a bonus....wicked grin!! Muwhhaaa

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  • From ANON - alex on September 19, 2011
    AAH KABUTO YOU SICK FUCK!!
    i cried.. i hate it I HATE THIS .... i love your writing lol but damn this so horrible
    waaaah naruto nooo i love u lol
    good job, get those a's before you post these new chapters and make more people cry lol
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  • From kirara32693 on September 19, 2011
    DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

    How...horrifying.. Really well-written chapter though what they have to go through is sickening. The worst part is that there actually are sick f-ks out there just like this *shivers* Hope they'll be rescued soon!
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  • From Madamdragon on September 19, 2011
    Naruto is really strong to be putting up with such a bad thing. Hope all goes well in the end. Update again soon please.
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  • From smint45 on September 19, 2011
    Oh that was terrible but in a good way ^^ I really like how you play with the emothions!!!! i can't wait for them to be rescued!!! And I totally love the pic of Kyu and Ita ^^ So sweet^^ See you soon!!!
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  • From missbri88 on September 19, 2011
    Oh how I've missed you! But I hope you're doing well in school(I feel like an aunt or something saying that).
    I wanted to cry for Naruto.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 04, 2011
    YES!! We're getting to the heart of the story. So Naruto's wanted for his expertise, eh? Is the person whose coming for Sasuke someone we know, or just some random OC? I can't wait for next week.:). Hope all's well for u lately, miss chatting with u.:3
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  • From cynaga on August 29, 2011
    [ch. 32] OMG! OMG!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 29, 2011
    I was actually scared going into this. :) Wow. As i was reading, I was totally getting swept up into the feelings, the desperation, and the anger. OMG NARUTO! I can't wait for the next chapter, but I just know I'll cry at some point. Poor, poor boys. But at least Shikamaru knows what's going on. :) I love what you did with Sasuke at the end, him screaming and all. Very cool. I can't wait to see what he'll do next. =D I really hope Naruto can get out of this. I know he's strong enough to endure whatever happens, but he has to worry about Sasuke too. Hmmm....
    I hope you update soon!
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  • From Carousel on August 28, 2011
    Oh dear me...This last chapter was so sad. D: I'm glad Shika is figuring everything out though. I want to read the torture scene only to get it over with. I just want everyone to be happy again. :/ Please update soon~
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  • From smint45 on August 28, 2011
    Oh that was fantastic!!!! I'm so happy shika finally got it!!!! otherwise they really would have a problem!!!! And next chappie the torture is about to start, I can't say finally but the faster it starts the faster its over and they will be rescued!!! I hope to see you soon!!!
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  • From missbri88 on August 28, 2011
    The Shika/Kiba scene gave us a brief comedic moment before the ugly kicks in. We've only got a peek at what's to come and I'm already prepared to cry. Even so I'm still looking for to your next chapter and more.
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