Click Here!

Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From arianauchiha23451 on July 26, 2011
    awesome chapter once again.... i loved everything about it.... now i cant wait to see what happens when sasuke and naruto are taken back to Orochimaru.... please update as soon as you can
    Report Review

  • From missbri88 on July 26, 2011
    I was screaming at Sasuke by the end of this chapter.

    I greatly look forward to your collaboration. You and AngelTailon are great authors, and I can't wait to see what you two churn out.
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2011
    Oh Boy!! I liked everything about this chapter. I like how Itachi knows what kyu n Naru really are and still loves them both. I love that he also knows of Gaara's real status. I love how this is the beginning of the darkness of the story. I am so scared for what is about to happen to S'uke and Naru. Will any of the other agents get hurt or killed? I can't wait to find out Orochimaru's reason for wanting Sasuke and if Kisame's really gonna get Itachi like he thinks. I hate that Sasuke was almost rescued then he decides he'd follow Naruto's instructions only to turn around n follow his own instinct, what a doof.:d
    Report Review

  • From Mya416 on July 25, 2011
    You left me hanging! :) Can't wait to read what happens next!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - destiny on July 25, 2011
    oh hell no kyuubi is soooooo gonna enjoy killin kisama or however u spell his name. blah name its time 4 some ass kickin time!!!!
    Report Review

  • From smint45 on July 25, 2011
    That was just amazing!!!! I so can't wait for more!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!! I want MORE!!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
    P.S. Itachi took the truth really good ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on July 25, 2011
    Whoa, can you NOT do anal penetration as a form of torture? Because that basically means rape. I wasn't aware of this poll. Can you do an Author's Note (as a separate chapter so it shows up of the Latest Stories list) with all the options in the poll so people can take it? Because I would definitely vote NO to anal penetration as a form of torture.

    Other than that, good chapter. Interesting to see how you resolve the statutory rape since it's a very serious offense - regardless that Naruto and Sasuke are in love with each other.
    Report Review

  • From arianauchiha23451 on July 23, 2011
    awesome chapter as always.... i just hope that naruto can get sasuke off the school roof without anything happening to either of them... please hurry and update as soon as you can
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on July 20, 2011
    WOW!! Gaara standing up to the henchmen was scary!! I just KNEW he'd get blasted or at the very least maimed. I finally caught what Neji said about Naruto's hair being blonde. I can't Wait for the elder brothers to get to Headquarters n Itachi finds out the story on the Uzumaki Bros. Such a good chapter.:)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - silverfox on July 19, 2011
    shi--stuff will really hit the fan now, huh? I'm totally in the 'scream' pose (hands on my cheeks, mouth wide open) and I'm totally screaming. ACK! And it's even worse that I know how this is gonna go cuz of your prologue. BUT, the light at the end of the tunnel is that I'm sure Sasuke and Naruto getting captured is not the end of this story.

    Anyway, loved the chapter like always, and even more cuz this one had some great action. I love Gaara. He was awesome. Also, I LOVE agent!Naruto, so I can't wait to see him grabbing a gun and kicking ass at some point. It doesn't matter that he'll eventually get caught; as long as he protects Sasuke, and takes some baddies down with him, I'm happy. More than happy, I'll be an ecstatic little fangirl the whole time, pumping my fists, going "GO Naruto, GO Naruto!!"
    Report Review

  • From smint45 on July 19, 2011
    Oh now the real action starts!!!! I really hope that you will update soon!!!! And that you will not keep us hanging at this point!!!! So in the next chappie it will finally be the scene fro the prologe!!!! I really hope that Naru and Sasu will be ok!!! Hope Kyuubi and the other will come in time to help them!!! And I really hope Sasuke takes the truth not so bad!!!! But given the circumstancers he probably won't have time to take it the wrong way!!!! I hope to see you really soon!!!!
    Report Review

  • From moodysavage on July 19, 2011
    I love that now Itachi is going to find out just how SPECIAL his boyfriend is. No hiding now! :)
    Report Review

  • From missbri88 on July 19, 2011
    Wow! I was sitting on the edge of my seat this chapter! I have complete faith that you'll bring an awesome end to this story and I'm open for anything you can throw at us. I look forward to seeing you again soon. And are you still unwell?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Alex on July 19, 2011
    It warmed my heart & soul to finally see the chapter 28 update :) As always your work is AMAZING, this is my favorite story FF EVER! I don't know what I'm going to do when it's over! (bug you for a new Naruto x Sasuke most likely since I've read everything else you've done) I hope you keep your promise to keep things coming quickly because like every time i finish a chapter I can't wait for the next!eyajeces dun
    Report Review

  • From ANON - carousel on July 18, 2011
    I love this story so much and I'm glad you updated. This was a great chapter and I can't wait to see more. I hope there is a happy ending.

    Update soon!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!