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By : mannahpierce
  • From Dorkchic on September 28, 2011
    Woot! There is still a long road ahead, but it is a very positive start! Dancing with To-chan FTW!!!
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  • From ANON - richon on September 28, 2011
    yes naru is save and he will be able to play sasu again !!!hope the crew have ear plug because it will have lots of growl and howl !! see you soon, this story is so awesome
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  • From GreenEyedCat on September 28, 2011
    yay I see growling in the future :-) hurray for Naruto
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on September 28, 2011
    Sorry I haven't reviewd for a while but I have been reading each chapter as they are put up. I loved this chapter. Sasuke & Naruto are so perfect for each other. Sasuke was so cute in this chapter. I giggled & cried at the way you ended the chapter. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS!!!!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 28, 2011
    YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!
    No more waiting!

    But man... I'm sick to the bone! I was touched because someone had an erection! What does it say about me? Damn... I almost cried. I's so... so happy that Naruto's back! Full force!

    I have one question. I tried to fin it but somehow I can't. Tsuneo is a full version of human Naruto. But what about Teruko and Takara? They are Naruto and Sasuke 50%-50 or what???? Please, help.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 27, 2011
    Oh GODS I missed this ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    Gaara was cute. He tries so hard. I feel kid of bad for him because those were just ordinary children's questions. What will he do when Haru starts to ask his own????? ^_^
    The whole Klenn thing still scares me...and makes me sad. Especially when it reminds me of an inevitable future of poor Naruto.
    Moegi was creepy... Like some pedophile seducing a child...*shudders*

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  • From Cognizant on September 26, 2011
    chapter 116. i'm greatly anticipating Darrent and Shika's get together. and i'm now i'm want a one-shot challenge with Darrent and Shika getting down n dirty between the sheets before Neji's arrival and without anyone else in Uchiha knowing. woooo now i want to know how that will all play out. thanks for the update and i hope to read more from you soon! appreciate you and your beta's hard work putting the story together.
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  • From bloodshound on September 26, 2011
    snickers. poor Gaara... poor Udon to. Still, Udon's getting the better deal. wow, level C's coming along in leaps and bounds huh?
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  • From blugirlami21 on September 25, 2011
    This was a nice filler chapter. I am happy to see Gaara and Lee again. I think Gaara's thoughts are pretty funny and oh so deadpan all the time. It was interesting to see Moegi's progress with Udon, I'm glad that she is determined to make this relationship work and jump through whatever hoops she has to. I will say that Klenneth's thoughts about Shika and Sasuke ever being together gave me pause. It is true that Shika and Naru have a very close bond, I'm not sure that Sasuke will ever have that with Shika. Sasuke often has to be nudged himself in the right direction by Naruto much like Shika by Neji, so I can't see them being successful together in a romantic relationship. I do like that Neji keeps Klenneth in check now by making Shika late to their appointments, that's such a Neji thing to do. Good job, I can't to read more.
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  • From ANON - richon on September 25, 2011
    yes you back, poor gaara, the children will not stop asking questions !! you right it will be long, love this story !! see you soon
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on September 24, 2011
    This chapter had many bits but I really particularly liked Moeigi and Udon (cuddle with no clothes on, AWWWW X3)
    Klennethon :( though he was right about Shika and Sasuke...
    Poor Gaara with the children yes that was probably a loooong day.
    Great chapter as always Mannah-san! Can not wait for the next update! :D
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on September 24, 2011
    For some reason I found the chapter sad. It had tears running down my face. It felt foreboding. Probabably all that talk about getting all and all the short life span of our beloved hybrids. Naruto sounds like his appearance is in a very sad shape. I hope he gets better soon. I don't like hearing he is not well.
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  • From Dorkchic on September 24, 2011
    I feel bad for Garner- Klenn has been his life for a very long time and I expect him to be very lost when he loses Klenn. Still hoping that they find a way to help Klenn. Also, seeing Gaara so uncomfortable is kind of funny.
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on September 24, 2011
    Oh god poor Gaara. XD;

    Also poor Darret. ono;
    I'm still not sure I like him, but I don't want him to die. >n>;
    And

    Mogei/Udon.
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  • From Prism0467 on September 24, 2011
    Gaara and Lee are back! Hooray!

    I love Gaara's brotherly affection toward Kiba.
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