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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From Dorkchic on October 08, 2011
    It begins with a small group of (mostly) lonely and damaged individuals and ends with a large, functional, damaged (but healing) family. As it should be. You know there will be hurts in the future. Like when Shika finds out about Klenn, when the kits pass long before the rest of the children, when Ran finds someone and Konohamaru has to stand by and watch, and when everyone loses Naruto. But there will also be triumphs like when they finally snag Orochimaru, when Konan starts really living again, or when any of the children finds permanant partners (I am amused by the idea of Haru and Sumiko.

    Looking foward to anything you decide to post.
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  • From missbri88 on October 06, 2011
    This story always has me so emotional. This will be a favorite that will stay with me for a long time. The writing is beautiful and you express the characters' thoughts and emotions so well that you can't help but to get attached. I seriously believe that you could get a book published and I would totally buy it and put it up on my blog.
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  • From roro237 on October 05, 2011
    Tears falling... I'll look forward to Sasturday ^_^
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  • From ANON - toosweet05 on October 05, 2011
    I am sorry to hear that this is coming to an end. You have entertained me with your stories and I hope that you will have the time to write another one soon. I thank you for Iteration and Tales of Terrasade they really were enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on October 05, 2011
    *A* DUN DUN DUN LAST CHAPTER DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN.


    ....Bawwwwwwww last chapter. -sobsobsobsobsob-
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 05, 2011
    Please, say that it's not the end. There will be continuation, right? has to be! please! You can't leave us without that fix of a good story right before the cold and sad winter..... Your story warms my heart! And I thank you so VERY very much for sharing this with us for so long, but please don't end it yet...
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  • From ANON - liby318 on October 05, 2011
    So sad to see this story end, but all stories do. Thank you for a great story and all the hard work.
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  • From silentnight on October 05, 2011
    i have thoroughly enjoyed every single word written by you. this story is the only one that i anxiously await an update. i am sad to see it end. do you plan to have a continuation?
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on October 03, 2011
    I loved all the family stuff in this chapter. I loved how Ran is getting along with Kakashi & Iruka. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From roro237 on October 02, 2011
    I don't like to say I have a favorite chapter because I love them all! But this one just makes me smile the hold time reading it:) I love it!! I was here again and wanted to drop you a few lines before I left:)
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  • From ANON - v on October 02, 2011
    Just got caught up on all the chapters I had missed, as always the new chapters were marvelous :) I'm so happy that they were able to defend their home against EVIL. So many things to be excited about...Naruto's healing, Ran and his relationships that are growing (although I do wonder if him and kakashi will have a significant moment or if it will stay a gradual bonding), the former prisoners slowly finding their place in Uchicha, and of course getting to know the children as they grow older is always a plus :) I'm glad that Shika gave his family such a wonderful present...after everything thats happened they needed a wonderful day :)
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  • From bloodshound on October 02, 2011
    Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Naru's back in business... on all fronts... ehem. Sas just isn't right without him. makes me worry about how Sas will cope when he passes.
    Anyway, the interactions between the characters in the next chappie are totally adorable. *sighs happily. is so GOOD to have things approaching Uchiah normal once more.
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  • From Dorkchic on October 02, 2011
    I feel so bad for Konohamaru. I want to say that maybe if the Ranmaru print is successful in retaining his memories they could be together again someday. But that would mean that he could not be with Sasori anymore and I think that Sasori needs him more- he is more human because of Ranmaru. I just hope that he somehow manages to get out from underneath that overwhelming sadness.


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  • From GreenEyedCat on October 02, 2011
    I wonder if Konohamaru has to wait for one if the children to grow up until he can be happy again and I love to see Naruto running :-)
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  • From ANON - KL on October 01, 2011
    hopefully this one doesnt get cut off.
    OMG, Konohamaru finally heard Ran laugh!!! >.
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