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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 23, 2013
    There were shivers down my spine when Sasuke decided to fight for the hybrids in the Warren. This is amazing.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 23, 2013
    I am so jealous for Ranmaru. I don't want it to be booby trapped and I don't want Akatsuki to find out a way around any possible fixes. It doesn't help that he's not listed in your age list... I really hope he's okay. I'll find out next chapter.

    Also, I chuckled when Naruto stated that his nest wasn't a sleeping nest.
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  • From Cognizant on October 13, 2011
    chapter 117-119. woot! grats on the completion of Iteration! i've thoroughly enjoyed reading Iteration in all of its entirety and i hope to read the sequel to it when it is ready. considering how difficult it is at times to decide how to end a story, the way Iteration concluded was very homey and kept to how the whole of the story centered around the us as Uchiha and not me the leader Uchiha.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on October 12, 2011
    I am happy for the very happy ending. I will miss the updates. I love all the characters so much. I eagerly await the next story. I can't wait to see where you will take things. As there is still some stuff unresolved. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on October 10, 2011
    It would be a terrible ending but it is a nice stop until the last part. The children have to grow up, Kono has to find new love, Orochimaru has to die and we need a way to keep Naruto alive (please). I can hardly breath until it continues but I think I will have to try ;-)
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  • From bloodshound on October 08, 2011
    I will probably be 1 among many but I'll say it anyway. Thankyou for this. It has been a thoroughly, sometimes scary ride, but it was worth all the drama in the end. You are a brilliant story weaver. Enjoy your rest and I'll keep an eye out for and look forward too, anything more you should choose to post.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 08, 2011
    So it happened.... This is the end of Iteration. But as long you say that there is going to be a third part I have something to look forward to....

    Gods... I don't know what to say (write...)

    This story is amazing. It was there for s long! I wasn't there from the start but once I started to read it I just couldn't stop. I ignored 'In the cold of space...' many times because the summary somehow didn't get my attention. But then one day I just give it a chance and since then.....

    Later I showed it to my friend and she started to read it at work and getting into some minor trouble because of that! This story just pulls people in.

    You created something really amazing and I'm not sure if you know it. You probably think that it's just another fanfic but it's more than that. Just look at the number of reviews and ratings. I think it's number one on AFF! The plot is build with such a care. Everything makes sense... It's perfect!

    I cried when Ran thew himself into Kakashi's arms. I gasped when Sasuke reminded Iruka that the NEW Uchiha is not just him, but all of them, the family. I can't put into words how amazed I am by this story. How hey all matured and evolved... (It's kind of discouraging because it shows me how pitiful is my writing but it is also my... how should I put it... "Perfection is our goal, excellence will be tolerated." I hope to be tolerated one day AND enjoy the perfection for as long as YOU let us. )

    I wanted to thank you specifically for ending with 'growling possessive Naruto' instead of the fluffy! I'm not sure why but I needed that. It was a perfect closure (TEMPORARY closure! NOT FINAL!) because that was how it had all started. And you actually even mentioned their first time. It was just too much! I remember reading this for the first time and I kind of wish I never read it before so I could start now and read it 'for the first time'... again.... (I still hope that maybe, some day, you could fill the spots about the beginnings of NarutoxSasuke's relationship as the 'Stories from the Silver Leaf'...)

    But let's look into future now. The past is gone and the future is what's left.
    The NEW Uchiha's future is up to you! Take responsibility! Give them a future! You created them! You're their mother! Sorry... I got carried away.

    Once again - THANK YOU!
    Thank you for writing and sharing. Thank you for doing it on such a level.
    You'll never know how great it was for us - readers. Please, keep writing.
    THANK YOU!

    - YamanashiOchinashiIminashi (melissen)

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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on October 08, 2011
    I don't know what to say. I am so conflicted! I don't know whether to cry or laugh and smile. The whole chapter was so bittersweet that it had me crying. I still feel very sensitive. Everything was beautiful. Ran finally healing, Itachi with Haku, Asuma and his children, and especially, Naruto, Sasuke, and their litter. It was amazing. The closing scene perfect.

    Thank you for sharing this amazing saga with us and I really look forward to getting an email from you telling me you have posted something new or just to continue existing works.

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - Tati on October 08, 2011
    Thank you for another wonderful story. As always you have left me amazed and content.
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  • From ANON - richon on October 08, 2011
    hoho it's finished !! but i happy to know you want xrite a sequel thi story is awesome ans i want to know more about new uchiha and what will happen to naru and sasu !! you did a wonderful job !! this story is so great I like to read it again somtetime even if I know the story !! THANK YOU I had a great time
    See you soon with the new story, you really decerve a break !!!
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  • From ANON - Lixx on October 08, 2011
    I do not know what to say so I will simply say 'Thank You'. I look forward to more of your writings!
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  • From ANON - v on October 08, 2011
    I can't believe its over..for now :) Well, for over a year you've made me smile, laugh,
    cry, yell in disbelief, and shout in anger..its been wonderful. I can hardly wait for your
    next posting whatever it will be. Thank you very much for sharing your universe
    with all of us, its the best gift ever! Sincerely your devoted fan, v

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  • From Prism0467 on October 08, 2011
    I hope you've got a couple of mainstream fics out there for me to purchase. I would love to add your work to my collection!

    This was a wonderful story that truly took me to a new and different place. I have enjoyed each and every moment, even the sad ones. I look forward to your future efforts! You are beyond prolific.
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  • From roro237 on October 08, 2011
    I'm choked up right now:) It was such a warm wonder ending to series two. I'm very happy there will be another installment...Yea Baby! I knew but it didn't register that it has been a year wOw! You are an amazing person to me! I mean this from the bottom of my heart Thank you for all your hard work. It has been such a pleasure to enjoy your story weekly. It has been the ultimate get away for me:) I'm going to get on the list ^_^
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  • From cynaga on October 08, 2011
    [ch 119] Thank the Lady there will be more Mannah stories to come! And what a perfectly lovely ending to the second book in the trilogy!!! Thank you very much for all your hard work, Mannah-san!
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