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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - wikedsinn on September 15, 2015
    Chapter 77 Oh the delightful evil that is revenge! and Garnar Parrad asking for the camera! so gleefully unrepentant I enjoyed this immensely oh and the plushie plant for clinging effect was made of win
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  • From ANON - wikedsinn on September 15, 2015
    " I never though of explaining that!" priceless just priceless ;P
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  • From ANON - Mulle - if you remember on June 15, 2015
    From so long ago. I was reviewing like crazy back when you were posting these, and then I got too busy and couldn't keep up with the reading. I am more than impressed that you kept up with the writing.
    I suddenly remembered when I checked an old email-account and there was an email notification about the last chapter being posted and finished and I had to read more, I had to finish reading this story that I began reading 5 years ago.
    I have not read on from the end of Iteration, but I will. If you read this; thank you. I want to sincerely thank you for writing this amazing story, almost a saga.
    I was being empotional, I was rushing through paragraphs, I was flipping my shit; I was feeling all the things that this entire story demands from its reader. When Haru was kidnapped and we weren't sure if Neji would be shot and Shikamaru was being kidnapped I almost began channeling my inner Naruto, pacing up and down the room.

    I will now read on. Thank you for writing all of this. Thank you. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Onion girl on September 01, 2014
    Ch. 58
    I could 100% see Sasuke touching Naruto's foot the wrong way and suddenly flying through the air across the room.
    And does Pein not realize giving Shikamaru access to a computer is like giving a bank robber access codes to a bank vault and conveniently leaving the back door open while the elderly security guard is busy in the toilet?
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  • From ANON - Onion Girl on August 30, 2014
    Ch. 42
    Hyuuuuu~
    I thought after so many chapters, I might get bored and stop reading.
    But really, I just keep getting sucked in. And I really love it.

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  • From ANON - OnionGirl on August 29, 2014
    Ch. 29
    Awwwwwwwww sheeeeeeiiiiiiittt!!!
    Hearkining back to the ORIGINAL FUCKING STORY!!
    YES
    YES
    Y
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    S
    YES
    WHOO
    I LOVE THIS STORY
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 26, 2013
    Just finished! Thank you so much for sharing this. It's great.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 26, 2013
    I let out a sigh of relief when they repelled Orochimaru's attack. I'm glad everyone was safe this time. This story is _so good_.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 26, 2013
    I really really really really really really really hope Naruto gets better. I have faith in Shika et al.

    Thank god he's back though. Uchiha needs him.
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  • From ANON - rebelghost85 on April 26, 2013
    I can just see how that crystal array of Haru's is going to be troublesome. I'm worried that everyone is still spread way too thin. You're hitting us over the head with the foreshadowing.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 25, 2013
    Your character development is excellent. Ran's trust was slow, deliberate and believable. I'm glad that he's finally made his connection to Iruka.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 24, 2013
    I'm looking forward to Pein's sob story later on. It's going to have to be a doozy for me to care about him like I did for canon Pein.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 24, 2013
    I hoped that they would fail in their kidnapping somehow. I sucks that Akatsuki succeeded somehow.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 24, 2013
    I'm about to cry. I still can't believe they killed him. Luckily Shikamaru knows that they're out there now. Fuck Akatsuki.
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  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on April 24, 2013
    I'm hoping that you don't have Naruto forgive Pein this time around. Everyone in Akatsuki needs to die. Horribly.
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