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By : CrisNoWait
  • From serenagold on September 21, 2008
    Whoa!!! Neji's bottoming for Sasuke?? o_O!! Totally unexpected!!! :D


    I must have missed the last update but damn, thems was some awesome-ass chapters!! ^^ hehehe I wonder what demands Naruto or Shino will ask for (I hope its kisses!! eee!!) Its was also cool to see how well Neji can read Sasuke and how they are using each other. Sometimes I forget that before the Chunin exams Neji was a total prick with a hatred for his cousin. ha!


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on September 20, 2008
    Who indeed? ;)
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  • From serenagold on September 12, 2008
    !!!! Bastard Sasuke!!!


    Evil evil evil evil. Now Naruto's going to return and wonder why Shino's so cold. :(
    We need to plot revenge!!!!

    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From serenagold on September 10, 2008
    I put some links in your thread. ^^



    Kiba giving sex advice?? Ha! Although I wonder if Shino will run into his blonde in the town with the hotsprings? Maybe he'll feel the explosive chakara and investigate? 0:) hehehe

    Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From serenagold on September 10, 2008
    Nah, I just check to see. I was actually home all weekend with nothing to do but work on my comic and some other photoshop projects, so I ended up checking this site several times throughout the day. Honestly, I'm surprised you don't have more comments than you do for this story. =^^=


    Anyway, about the update.. Chapter 10 was freaking awesome. I loved the way Naruto went all fox on the Uchiha. Kimimaru was great and the bathroom scene was incredible. Sasuke just doesn't learn, does he?
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  • From serenagold on September 08, 2008
    Woo hoo! A nice little post-work surprise. ^^ Awesome chapter. Keep up the great work!

    (I'm not looking forward to the next chapter to see how Naruto reacts in the presence of Sasuke. How much will Kakashi and Iruka know is off about the two of them? I'm sure Sasuke will be smug as hell and probably want to forcefully dominate the blond again. Naruto better bare his teeth instead of hiding behind his smile if he wants to put Sasuke in his place. hehehe.)
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  • From serenagold on September 07, 2008
    Wow. This was a hell of a chapter!! O_O

    The Naruto masturbation/rape scene was really intense. I think this marks the end of Naruto's devoted trust of Sasuke. I can't wait to see how this changes his personality.
    The Kakashi/Iruka part was a huge contrast to the harsh Sasuke/Naruto pairing. I love the way it balanced it out. And no, I don't think it was too long. I think it was enough. Sex scenes only need to be as long as the event. You did a great job.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - tad on September 07, 2008
    love the story however you seemed to make naruto a bit freindless - and even more naive than normal - but the shino stalking i love - look forward to the next part
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  • From serenagold on September 07, 2008
    W00t! I'm being stalked! >¤_¤<

    Although I hope Shino sends lightning bugs after me instead of Kikai. Those creepy crawly friends of his are rather pinchy! (And while I know that fire flies aren't very stealthy, they sure are pretty! ^^)

    Thanks for the shout out. Keep up the good work!
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  • From solitare1 on September 06, 2008
    Applause.....I love this story! I am reading more stories with different pairs than the usual Sasuke/Naruto, and I must say, I am very pleased with some of them. This one especially!
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  • From serenagold on September 06, 2008
    Wow. I wasn't expecting Naruto to get into the middle of a fight against his, well, not "friends." Meh. This was an excellent chapter, btw. Keep up the great work


    (Sasuke is such an ass.)
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  • From serenagold on September 06, 2008
    Great chapter. Its so cute the way you have Shino plotting a million difference scenarios in his head about how he will get Naruto to notice him, only to have Naruto do it for him.. =^^=

    Keep up the good work. :D
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  • From MasterofPie on September 05, 2008
    oooooooohhhh~
    I like the Shino/Naruto pairing, but so damn hard to find
    hope you writing this fic ^__^
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  • From serenagold on September 04, 2008
    This story is impressively good. I love that you started in in child hood and added so many unique elements the story. A Naruto/Sasuke rival prior to the Uchiha massacre. A Shino/Sasuke rivalry. Naruto's erratic childhood with sparse school attendance. Inner clan workings with interesting original characters. Plus a tie for Shino to have a loss along with Sasuke from the same massacre! That was crazy brilliant.

    I absolutely loved this story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From NekoIzumi on September 03, 2008
    Hi there.

    Since your email is hidden, this was the only way for me to come in contact with you. I checked aarinfantasy.net... and found myself slightly confused when a crappy searchengine popped up. And I've been out on aarinfantasy.com before... sure, that site is about anime but uhm... fanfics? I'd love to post my stuff on more sites, especially since I've had a few problems with plagiarists but I'm not sure about this.
    Either way... thanks for a great review.

    ~Neko Izumi
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