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By : CrisNoWait
  • From serenagold on September 30, 2008
    lol... why would you think I was disappointed? I was only curious as to where this story stood in regards to timeline. Obviously its not following the canon, but to what degree? ^^



    Great chapter. (As always.) Neji finally backed off from Sasuke! Yikes! Although the new Neji/Gaara development is interesting. hehehe Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on September 29, 2008
    Eeee! Hooray for the sand siblings!! ^^ I've always loved Gaara and Temari. ^^

    Just one quick question. This story takes place before the chuunin exams. I've only just realized that Tsunande is the Hokage in this. She doesn't appear until after the chuunin exams. :P I have no problem over looking that. I just thought about it and wanted to point it out. Actually, I'm kinda looking forward to Gaara and Naruto's reactions of each other now. It was always such a great moment in the manga/anime when Naruto first realizes the look in Gaara's eyes is a reflection of his own, prior to gaining friends and being accepted by acquaintances. I'd like to see a similar moment happen here in this story too. It will definitely be interesting. Gaara's already making notices of Shino's behaviors that are similar to his own. I wonder if he's going to try to steal Naruto from our favorite bug ninja too. (You know, as sort of a "I want to feel how the blonde's making him feel" kind of remedy. lol)

    Keep up the great work! Excellent job on the chapter (as always.) ^^
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  • From serenagold on September 28, 2008
    Whoa.. two chapters!!!


    First off: another Ibiki/Kimi pairing... is this, like, totally turning into the sexiest crack pairing ever?? holy crap!~

    Secondly: The mission fight was pretty freaking awesome. The rubber headed ninja was a pretty wicked idea. At first I thought with the wind that maybe it was Temari, but no! Where the hell did Neji come from, though? Can't wait for your next chapter.

    =^^= Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on September 27, 2008
    I wish i had Ibiki in my bed! wow what a man! i wonder how sasuke is going to react when he finds out that naruto has had some good lovin' with shino? i can't wait to find out!!!
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  • From serenagold on September 27, 2008
    KimimaruXIbiki x_X oh my!!! (hehehehe)


    Great chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Stacy on September 27, 2008
    Oh my gosh! what a pair! i would not have thought that in a million years! Good call! Ohhhhhhhh so good!
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  • From serenagold on September 27, 2008
    Woo-hoo! Glad you got some reviews. ^^ (Well deserved, mind you.)


    Yay for Naruto playing the hero again! I hope this does not make an enemy out of Kuni-te for him. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on September 26, 2008
    as we all know this story is awesome! I have one comment to make....a lot of writers will update quickly with not so great 'chapters'. you on the other hand, are updating super fast with well written 'chapters' that are so jam packed with details it's amazing. your characters are well portrayed with your story line and my personal opinion....you are one excellent writer! thanks so much!
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  • From solitare1 on September 26, 2008
    I Love this story and I rate EVERYTIME I read a chapter. I review less because my vision is getting really bad and seeing the keyboard is tricky, but just know, I am still waiting for every update.
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  • From DiablosAngel on September 26, 2008
    I like it, confused me in the begining. I am eager to see where it goes. Any chance of an Mpreg? Please!!
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  • From serenagold on September 26, 2008
    Lol, well with over 1000 hits, I think its safe to say I'm not the only one reading this. :P


    Anyway, I'm glad everything worked out between Shino and Naruto. Shit, I need to learn lessons from Naruto's example and not hide things that happen that were never my fault to begin with. Hmm... Though I suppose thats not really relevant for a comment review. Bleh! Back to the subject at hand: Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on September 25, 2008
    Gah!! Sasuke is so evil!!!! >_< Then again.. so is Neji!!

    Kakashi is aware now so thats one more person against the hateful Uchiha. (hehehe) I hope Shino can get over hearing Naruto's "confession." He sounded like he wanted to hate Naruto now, as well! O_O
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on September 23, 2008
    FIrst of all -- Holy crap! You updated back to back! I read one, reveiwed, then there was a second one waiting for me, almost like magic! Holy freaking crap!


    Secondly, he's going to be paired with both Sasuke and Naruto, isn't he? >:) bwhahahahaha. I stick by my accusations of evilness from you, but now limit that appraisal only to your characters. hehehe Thanks for the quick update. Keep up the great work!~
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  • From serenagold on September 23, 2008
    Gaaahhhh!!! Wha- NO!!! YOU CAN'T END THE CHAPTER THERE!!! EVIL!!! OMG! I'm going to have to wait until tomorrow night now to find out what happens??? ((o_o)) Holy crap~!~~!!


    This... you.. .gah!

    Thats it. Damn you. I need this next update like an addict needs crack! Friggen evil, man. You're going to force me to draw you fan art now, you realize this? Evil.
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  • From serenagold on September 21, 2008
    I don't know if you intended it as a pun or not, but in Japanese "Shi" can mean death. So while "Shi" would be a shortened form of Shino, it could also indicate something darker, which would make for a nice ironic nick name since Naruto is now Tenshi. ;) "Angel and Death." Cute. Though I doubt you might have ment it like that. Doesn't quite sound like a charming pet name.

    Anyway, great chapter! Shino and Naruto finally getting together was pretty freaking hot. =^^= Naruto may have staved off Sasuke's death sentence for now, but I'm sure that temporary pardon will be wavered once Shino discovers Sasuke's rape of his beloved. Keep up the great work!



    (Although I must say I find it odd that I seem to be the only one reviewing this story. Its too good for there to be this much of a lack of response. My only suggestion to you to gain greater readership would be to alter the story summary just a tad. The currently summary is just slightly too vague and I'm sure if you listed it with, I dunno, a few Shino/Naru, Sasu/Naru, Kaka/Iru, Sasu/Neji tags you might bump the readership. Just a suggestion. I've read pure crap on this site that had more hits than you and its totally unjustified. Consider it. :P)
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