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By : CrisNoWait
  • From serenagold on November 01, 2008
    Wooo!!! So many awesome things!! Although I must comment on the most recent assassination attempt on Iruka and Kakashi!! Holy crap! That would have been a devastating blow. I'm glad Neji was there to help.

    Also, Shino's flashback (god, how many chapters back was that?) to Kune-te's "innocent" questions was such a revelation. The man certainly does plan ahead. Anything thats done for the greater good, so to speak, always leaves me weary. There's a lot of crazy shit going on right now and sooner or later its all going to come to a head.

    Tomorrow is officially November. Good luck with NaNoWriMo!! =^^= Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on October 31, 2008
    [omg!! I just finished reading chapter 49 and am thrilled with the excitement of Haku making Sasuke into his uke!! ^^ heheheh I did not see that coming but I am soooooo totally for it. I love Sasuke as the uke. He so needs to be put in his place. hehehehhee]

    =^^= (yay!)
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  • From serenagold on October 27, 2008
    holy fuck! I go away for a week and you've updated like 20+ chapters??!! O_O


    You may have to wait a bit for me to catch up, but I look forward to reading all of this! :D
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  • From serenagold on October 27, 2008
    holy fuck! I go away for a week and you've updated like 20+ chapters??!! O_O


    You may have to wait a bit for me to catch up, but I look forward to reading all of this! :D
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  • From serenagold on October 15, 2008
    You know, I've been busy, so its been a while since I got a chance to sit down and read this and catch up with the story. So I'm reading, and as I'm reading I'm thinking about all the things I wanted to comment on... you know, things like Shino's excitement about finding out about Naruto's literary accomplishments, the fact they finally got together, Haku... then I got to the final chapter..

    HOLY SHIT!! Kuni-te totally mutilated Kabuto!!! ((O_O)) Plus - moth egg explosions!!!! Gah! Everything thing about this chapter was out of control!! Total craziness!!! As I said before... HOLY SHIT!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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  • From serenagold on October 11, 2008
    You're right, this is a love story... but didn't Pat Benatar put it best by saying "Love is a battlefield"? >:) hehehe


    Yay for updates! (Sorry for being MIA, I still love this story - I just find it impossible to give it love when I am not in front of a computer; something I'm sure you'll agree is vital when it comes to being able to read updates. lol)
    I like Naruto's attack on Sasuke. Well played indeed ~ I just hope Sasuke realized it was Naruto before he got his lights knocked out. Heh.
    Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From serenagold on October 06, 2008
    HOLY FREAKING CRAP!!! SASUKE'S A DEAD MAN!!!! ((O_O))

    Well, then again, he does bring it upon himself and he did try to sleep with Naruto again under false pretenses. >:D Bwahahahahahaha!!!
    Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From serenagold on October 06, 2008
    LOL.. warnings are for suckers! Keep everything as a surprise and it keeps everything more interesting. ^^

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From serenagold on October 05, 2008
    Heh, you know, I started reading this chapter and was all like "What the hell is going on here???" It was so AU that I couldn't associate its randomness with the world of Naruto itself. Then, I had read your other School of Lust story for the first time earlier today and though for a moment that you were trying to maybe promote your other story that had the character "Bill." I was confused. I had to double check the title to see if I was reading the right story. O_O So then I scroll down further until I see actual Naruto characters so I finally relaxed.

    Ultimately, I tried getting into reading Naruto's story, but all I could picture was my middle aged, short, balding, hairy male gym teacher/coach from highschool and was completely turned off to the whole experience! Gah!! >_
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  • From serenagold on October 05, 2008
    Holy crap! I don't visit the site for two days and look what happens!!! O_O


    Let me tell you my heart was stomped and my mouth slapped right open when Naruto "confessed" to Shino that he was only using him and it was only a relationship of connivence. Oh my god. I was shocked. I realized after the fact that Naruto was only trying to protect him from himself, although I was half hoping he might confess about the fox residing within him to salvage the relationship. (Your decision was much better.) Naruto is getting more and more fox-like in this. (How much is he merging with the fox? o_O) Personally I absolutely love it. ^^

    The whole sequence in the cave was intense too. I wonder what Sasuke makes of Naruto being able to see in the dark. Sasuke's decision to save Shino was interesting too. Now they've made it back to Konoha and we have to wait three years (time-skip time) to find out what happened??? O_O Gah! So many questions. So much speculation!! Shino's being sent away? Sasuke's still around, will he be less of a prick? I'm assuming that now, instead of Naruto going on a three year training mission to be able to gain the strength to get Sasuke back he's instead going to learn to control the fox and stop its chakara from escaping? I have no idea what will happen and that's exciting as hell. I love speculating where stories will go and you always throw me for a loop and keep me guessing. I never am able to figure things out (a feat in and of itself) and reading this story is always a fantastic surprise!

    Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From serenagold on October 03, 2008
    Wait... instant "I win" from Shino? That is not playing fair at all. Although, Shino's also not in the physical position to be fighting Sasuke either.

    Kyuubi's gonna cause trouble. Now both Shino and Neji know that there's atleast a second personality residing within the blonde. Questions are going to be asked? Will Naruto answer them>? Only time will tell. hehehe
    Great chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From serenagold on October 02, 2008
    =^^= Neji & Gaara are so cute.

    The fact that Neji wore Sasuke's "special kimono" has me worried Neji was originally trying to use Gaara to get back at Sasuke. I'm happy to see Neji realized the value in what he now has. :D
    Sasuke's soon gonna have to fact the harsh reality that he's pushing everything he has away. Its gonna cause trouble, but I can't wait to read it.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on October 01, 2008
    OMG! I am totally speechless. You have in awe....with all the twists and turns....it's like a soap opera! I LOVE IT!!! Just so you know my laptop will be on 24/7 waiting for your next update!! NO REST FOR THE WICKED!!*that's me*
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  • From serenagold on October 01, 2008
    Oh shit! Kuni-te is mental AND a traitor AND working with Orochimaru AND gave up Kimimaru!!!! O_O Insane! And I wonder who is on that list? Surely Kakashi, Ibiki, and Sasuke are included, but who else? >:P


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on October 01, 2008
    Oh shit! Kuni-te is mental AND a traitor AND working with Orochimaru AND gave up Kimimaru!!!! O_O Insane! And I wonder who is on that list? Surely Kakashi, Ibiki, and Sasuke are included, but who else? >:P


    Keep up the great work!
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