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Reviews for Genius at Making Love

By : KohakuShadow
  • From Koji on December 10, 2007
    Wow, that was hot...

    I'm HUGE Kiba/Shika fan (check out my profile if you need proof), and I accept it any form at all. Shino...not so much...but he seems to fit here. Like, I can't really see this whole scene happening without him.

    So glad you updated (and with my fave. pairing, minus Shino, though I do love him) so soon. Seriously, these two need more time together...perhaps you can squeeze another little adventure for them before Shika's day is done? It'd make me bake cookies, which I shall force feed you once I hunt you down and chain you to my room, having you write fan-fics for me non-stop...maybe not...I'm not that sadistic, I leave that to my fics...

    Seriously though, great job on the pairing(?)

    I have to sleep...but I shall be having obscene yet splendid dreams tonight thanks to you, darling.

    xxx
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  • From cynaga on December 09, 2007
    Now I want a Sai and Sakura chapter. [whine]
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  • From Sugary on December 09, 2007
    this story is sooo hot....

    I've never really read a Shikamaru centric plot like this, and seeing how he is one of my favorite characters, I'm excited I got to read something like this. My favorite chapter so far was Iruka and Shikamaru. (drools)

    Keep it up!
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  • From llyoung on December 09, 2007
    Love the idea that Shika isn't really lazy he just saves up all his energy for sex.
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  • From Koji on December 09, 2007
    Wow, that was good.

    I can't write Het for shit, not that I ever really want to. But I think you got it great! I can't wait for the Sai twist you've popped up in there. I love the idea of Sakura and Sai being together, even if Sai is a little of a...flaming homo...impression I get anyway. Maybe I'm just shallow.

    Shika's so dirty...I love it! Can't wait for the next part! I wonder who it'll be...makes it exciting!

    xxx
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  • From Koji on December 09, 2007
    Chess sex?! There's crack for you. But what hot crack it was...!

    Loved the third chapter. I simply adore Neji, even more so with Shika! They just seem like they should be competative, but Shika's too lazy and Neji's too...righteous? Whatever, you brought that out with the whole weekly chess game thing, and I loved it.

    Also, who knew Temari was so talented at creating new sex games?! Lucky for Shika though, he's already had sex three times today!

    Now, I'm on to chapter four. I'm a HUGE Sakura fan so I don't mind reading Het if she's involved ^^

    xxx
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  • From charmpit on December 09, 2007
    Remember that the reason we are all reading your smut is because we all enjoy reading smut! I love your story and the fact that Shikamaru is your favorite Naruto character; I happen to think Shikamaru is the sexiest character in the Naruto universe (and that's saying a LOT with characters like Kakashi and Asuma around). You and Word_slave seem to have an enthusiasm for Shikamaru in common, which easily makes you two of my favorite fanfiction writers.

    But I digress. The story is hot and I am loving every word of it. Please do not abandon! ShikaNeji is one of my fave pairings and you have covered it well. Who gets a piece of that next? I can't wait to find out!
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  • From llyoung on December 08, 2007
    Wonderful. I would love to play chess with Shika and/or Neji myself. Love the humor you put into your stories.
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  • From Koji on December 08, 2007
    Woooo!!!! Second chapter!

    I've seen one or two things with Shika/Iruka or vice-versa, but never tended to give the pairing much thought. That, however, may have just converted me. Iruka is awesome everywhere, whatever he's doing. And Shikamaru, well...I don't have to tell YOU how amazing he is...

    I love how nonchalant Shika is afterwards, and how panicky Iruka is at the beginning. Seems all very much in character, as well as amazingly written.

    Can't wait for the next part!!

    xxx
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on December 08, 2007
    ohh, this was even better!!!! I liked the premise!! But I do have a request, could you do a companion fic with those Shika gets together??? Naruto and Iruka?? or have the threesome with Kakashi??? Okay, so now my perv side shows. But then again, since I'm writing a Kakashi/Naruto/Sasuke fic, I suppose this is no surprise!? Lol.
    Your writing is great!!! More soon please?
    And you're so good that if you have a pairing you want to request from me, I'll try to write a story for you if you like!!!
    Slave
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  • From llyoung on December 08, 2007
    Loved Iruka's fantasies and yes they both do make very good whores.
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  • From on December 08, 2007
    Whoah! I just read both chapters and I have to admit... I can't wait for more! XD Hmm... I wonder who's next... *drooling at the possibilities*
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  • From Jien on December 08, 2007
    oh update soon!!!!!!
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  • From cynaga on December 08, 2007
    Oh my, yes. gulp. You do have a way with a lemon. LOVED Shika/Iru. THANKS!

    (I still want my 11 times. :) )
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  • From cynaga on December 07, 2007
    Can't wait for more. I love Shika. And Kiba and Kanky are too yummy too. 11 times!? Ok, where can I sign up? :D
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