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Reviews for Genius at Making Love

By : KohakuShadow
  • From cynaga on December 16, 2007
    Your Temari/Shika banter is as good as ice cream!
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  • From PrplGrl on December 16, 2007
    I love how this scene was focused on the conversastion, not so much the sex.
    And I know what you mean. My muses are refusing to help me finish Going Under, because they're too interested in continuing my "Gentle-Fist Massage" series. It gets really frustrating, especially since I'm not that far from finishing "Going Under!" Damn rebellious muses! Shouldn't they be doing what we ask?
    Anyway, keep up the great work!!
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  • From llyoung on December 15, 2007
    I like the idea of Kankuro and Temari teaching Gaara how to have sex and how sweet I think it was that Gaara wanted experience because he was afraid that Shika would not want him if he didn't know what he was doing. So since Shika has had sex with Temari and Kiba now will we get to see Kankuro and Shika too? I keep thinking of a foursome with Kiba, Kankuro, Gaara and Shika but that might be a bit much plus I know youv'e already got your pairings/chapters planned out. I also think it was nice that Temari knows Shika loves Genma even if Shika does not know/will not admit it to himself yet.


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  • From Hestia on December 15, 2007
    Well, if I recall in the Kage bushin training, Naruto would fall asleep exhausted later, so it's totally IC to have him collapse, and pretty funny. I love Naruto's pick up line--I cleaned my room or something like that. That's so Naruto. Ah, and Shikamaru the genius, stumped over Genma, my little heart flutters with hope!
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  • From Hestia on December 15, 2007
    Ahhh! So romantic!! (Chap. 8) That's the most romantic Genma ever! Wonderful! Dammit, only one more chapter, and I'm caught up!

    Ok, I know you said you have the whole damn thing plotted out, but GENMA AND SHIKA, SHIKA AND GENMA, SHIKA/GENMA/GAARA, GAARA/SHIKA/GENMA, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!

    *weeps brokenly, crying, "Genma, hang on baby, hang on, you only have four or five more chapters of hell, then surely, surely, she will reward you, no one could be so cruel to sweet Genma"*



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  • From Hestia on December 15, 2007
    The threesome--holy shit!! That's got to be one of the fucking hottest threesomes ever! Amazing!
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  • From Hestia on December 15, 2007
    Dear God--all this since Dec. 4--I'm only up to Chapter 4 and thrilled I finally got over here before all 14 chapters are done. First off, you do rimming the best of anyone I've read so far. Gaara counting the times--only penetrative--was so funny. Iruka's fantasies were super hot, and the whole Neji thing smoking too. I didn't really get how Neji went from being busted as unable to act like a whore to acting like an uber-whore, but hey, it's fiction, and all for fun. Sakura's little scene was good, too, especially since Sai is going to give it to Shika--oh my I can't wait for that one!
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  • From Akaatje on December 15, 2007
    I love how many hours a day has *wink*

    More smut please!!!
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  • From llyoung on December 15, 2007
    You were right. This was a very smutty chapter. It was also very enjoyable. Loved the foursome clone sex. Thanks for the wonderful update.
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  • From cynaga on December 15, 2007
    shemale? ~wild (and totally hot) *sigh* I wish my husband could do kage bunshin :D
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  • From on December 15, 2007
    Yes! Thank you sooooo much for the GenmaxShika! And the kagebunshin foursome was great, too! Keep up the awesome work! You rock!
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  • From Koji on December 15, 2007
    LOL!! It's like - 'He's a she, he's a he, and he's a he-she!!'

    Lol, I dunno...but daaaaamn, you're explicit, girl!! I loves it though.

    Shika's having the best day of his troublesome little life, doncha think? I'm seriously in love with this fic right now; it's such a good idea and stuff and....KYAAA!! I'm just fangirling, ignore me...squee!!

    Glad Naruto got his two cents, and he made one hell of a debut in this story. *Sigh...* Naruto's awesome...

    And so is Shika...I wonder how much else he can take!!

    xxx
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  • From PrplGrl on December 14, 2007
    ...You must be draining your muses dry! I know I have!
    Keep up the great work! I very eagerly await the next hour!
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  • From Koji on December 14, 2007
    Aww! This was so sweet, I love it!

    I soooooo want Shika and Genma to be lovers! They seemed like they went together so well there! Even if there were doubts and stuff, things still went smoothly enough, ne? Arg...I loves me Genma. You've got him really well too; most of the time you read about him being all crazy, like a sex fiend and stuff, but I like your Genma. He's still mourning Hayate, and that seems about right.

    Also - LOVED the constant subconcious comparison to Gaara the whole way through. Shikamaru knows he wants to let Genma in, but he just doesn't think he does XD

    This chapter was really great, truly. I know what you mean about it being more sweet than smutty, but that's a good thing. After all, you can't expect Shika to go through a whole day of whoring and not have someone's emotions get involved.

    xxx
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  • From cynaga on December 14, 2007
    {{{Genma}}}
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