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Reviews for Genius at Making Love

By : KohakuShadow
  • From angelsdelight on December 18, 2007
    Not a monster, a very sexually frustrated authoress that has a fic to finish by the 23rd and no loving since 2 weeks ago with hormones all messed up!I have just thought out Neji and Kiba's styles too well! call it sexual boredom.
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  • From Koji on December 18, 2007
    Aww, this was really sweet! I love this story so much!! You've written it and planned it so well!!

    I'm happy that Shika's willing to let Genma into his life *yayz for Genma*

    I'm sensing a little angsting coming over Shika's feelings for him...hmm, perhaps I'm wrong but whatever...

    Before, you said chapter 12 was difficult to write. That's exactly what I was thinking!! I could never see those two in a mutual relationship, basically because Shika's too lazy, and a little too proud at times, and Sai is dead inside : D But you wrote it well - you got the aggrivation that's just so obvious in there well, and it was good, very, very good!!

    Hmm...I wonder how many times Shika's showered today... He must be squeaky fucking clean in all the places that don't matter, huh?

    Aniwayz, loved this chapter...I'm scared though...the day's almost done!! Ooh, I wonder what'll happen next!! Who's gonna kiss Shika goodnight?!

    ...wait...Gaara hasn't left Konoha yet...oooooooooh, I just got a GREAT idea for your finale...but I guess it's kinda obvious...

    Update soon!!

    xxx
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  • From llyoung on December 18, 2007
    They are very sweet together (and oh no only 4 more chapters - I hope you already have some more story ideas because I really love the way you write.)
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  • From cynaga on December 18, 2007
    Poor Sai. I guess he has to wait for Sakura to tell him how he feels about her! And Shika caught in the middle - I knew he wouldn't fill Sai in; not his place. Then Genma to the emotional rescue - nice ending to the chapter.

    Thanks sooo much for your time and talent! =)
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  • From PrplGrl on December 18, 2007
    How many times must I say it? Nice job once again!
    Although, I'm not sure if I'm supposed to be aroused or disgusted. I mean tentacles are hot, for sure, but rape is not. So, I'm kinda stuck in the middle, confused and dazed. Do I like it or don't I?
    Anyway, keep up the excellent work!!
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  • From angelsdelight on December 18, 2007
    MRRRREEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!! Motto, kudasai! I need it! Finish the sexy goodness!
    Shika just doesn't realize that he wants Genma that bad. I wonder how a round 2 of Kiba x Shika x Neji would work out... that could be orgasmic bliss. Kiba with his amazing sense of smell and he has had enough of Nara cumless torture. Neji because he can use byakugan mixed with his gentle fist taijutsu to see what touch causes extreme pleasure and what can happen when you add chakra to a hotspot... DEFINITE ORGASM causer!
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  • From Blckthorn on December 17, 2007
    Wow...That was so hot it re-heated me coffee. I have to say that I love your lemons. You write them so well and with a great amount of creativity too. I have to say that I love Shika, just in general, but you made him so much hotter. What wonderful citris-y goodness!

    ~ =^.*=
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  • From Koji on December 17, 2007
    Oooh...this was interesting!

    Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!

    I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.

    THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!

    Looking forward to the next update!!

    xxx
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  • From Koji on December 17, 2007
    Oooh...this was interesting!

    Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!

    I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.

    THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!

    Looking forward to the next update!!

    xxx
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  • From Koji on December 17, 2007
    Oooh...this was interesting!

    Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!

    I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.

    THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!

    Looking forward to the next update!!

    xxx
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  • From llyoung on December 17, 2007
    Hopefully Sai got his "revenge" out of his system. Enjoyed the last part with Genma. Thanks for the update.
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  • From cynaga on December 17, 2007
    {{{chouji}}}

    You are sooo good. I think this is the first fiction I've read involving Chouji where he was treated with respect (in a sexual situation) for who he is. I LOVE InoxChouji too.

    Every chapter of this is as good as the last and brings something new to the story (and it is a story, not just smex) - how do you do it?

    Characterization is great.
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  • From PrplGrl on December 17, 2007
    Once again, great job! I'm not even into Shika/Chou, I mean there's gotta be 'some' people out there who are just good friends and nothing more, but you did very well on it!
    Thanks for reading my stuff! I hope your muses will give you a break soon, at least to finish reading the series.
    Also, love the intro! You're just a sweet gooy, love-dovey person at heart, aren't you?
    Keep up your excellent work!!
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  • From llyoung on December 16, 2007
    I like Shika trying to help Choji and Ino get together. I also like the way they ended up having sex with Choji in Ino and Shika in Choji.
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  • From angelsdelight on December 16, 2007
    Dear Heavens above! I need sex too now!
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