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Reviews for Genius at Making Love

By : KohakuShadow
  • From PrplGrl on December 14, 2007
    Very nice and sweet!
    I have to read it in one sitting!! I just have to remember to breathe every time I stand.
    Keep up the great work, I love the direction this is going in!
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  • From llyoung on December 13, 2007
    That was very sweet. I wouldn't mind at all if Shika and Genma end up together at the end of the story. Shika should have someone in Konoha who cares for him like Gaara does and doesn't just want him for a "fuck". I wonder what the three of them together would be like?
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  • From Jien on December 13, 2007
    Not gonna bother counting..But I wonder if a JiraiyaXShika pairing is gpoing to be out soon?
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  • From angelsdelight on December 13, 2007
    I wish I was Shikamaru...all of the sexy men he happily fucked/got fucked by in one general location. I say he had 14 orgasms between 7am and 1pm. God I wish my bf could fuck like Shikamaru!
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  • From on December 12, 2007
    Darn it. Why is it that when I came back here you've already updated two times? And I couldn't agree more, smut is the way! ^o^ Sometimes I hate myself for not being able to just write smut without any plot or some lame reason (my friends call it OCD) XD and I thoroughly enjoy the smut goodness of your fic -- ESPECIALLY since it has Shikamaru in the middle of it all (he's just so damn sexy!).

    I have to admit, the cigarette thing was kind of scary for me because I'm a smoker and have suffered the cigarette-crackling-making-a-speck-of-burning-something-falling-to-my-skin many times XD, but I still found the scene very hot (both Asuma and Shikamaru were so cool in there!). And that last one with Kakashi... whoa... and the prospect of a threesome with Kakashi and Iruka! Oh God... the mental image... *fanning herself with one hand*

    Oh, hell. I'm rambling. Anyway, good job! And if in the end Shikamaru really ends up with Genma, I'll love you forever! Hmm... would there be a Shikamaru-Gaara-Genma threesome? One could only hope...
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  • From Koji on December 12, 2007
    Wow...Kakashi doesn't waste any time, does he? Well...I never really expected that he would anyway so it'd cool.

    The...'stretching' freaked me out a little, but it worked so well! Kaka really is a complete dominatrix, we all know that, and he's just proved it very well. Shikamaru, in my filthy minds eye, seemed right on the mark with his responses in every way. He knows how to respond to teases and things, so that's just great!!

    I also *adore* how nonchalant Shika's being at having had so much sex in half a day. It's almost as if he's thinking 'yeah, sure...I guess I could get used to this...hmm...'

    This cookie system of yours...sounds like too much fun to be having at half 4 in the morning as it is right now. Plus I'm sick so...yeah...

    I'm spazzing in anticipation of the next lot, seriously. Can't wait to see who it is!!

    xxx
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  • From PrplGrl on December 12, 2007
    It just keeps getting hotter and hotter in here!
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  • From llyoung on December 12, 2007
    Wonderful chapter. I absolutely love toys and bondage.
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  • From PrplGrl on December 12, 2007
    ... wow.... I'm going to need to take a cold shower for a week, now.
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  • From Koji on December 10, 2007
    You minx...

    I'm not as into the whole Asuma/Shika thing as I know I probably should be. Nevertheless, I have payed attention to quite a few things concerning them, and this, my dear, was great!

    Asuma's teasing was right on the mark, and Shikamaru's irritation and casualness were perfect also. The cigarette, I'll admit, made me freak a little, but I couldn't help but be dragged along with Shika's feelings of it too. And the image of Asuma simply reading over him as it was happening ignited my artists inspiration, and I may just have to go draw it right now.

    I'm SO enjoying this fic; it really is just getting better and better!

    p.s. - Kudos on bringing Genma in. He needs love, period.

    xxx
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  • From llyoung on December 10, 2007
    Very enjoyable chapter. I do like Asuma alot. Enjoyed the cigarette play and the interaction between Shika and Asuma. I love it when a story has both sex and humor and does it well (which you do). Thanks for another chapter.
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  • From Vikuta on December 10, 2007
    omg... this is like. i don't know... i've been reading fanfiction for so long, and you... i can say, that i've never been so painfuly turned on like now. i'm so wet that i don't know now what to do :D well i know, but i'm gonna torture myself for an ocasion.
    YOU and just you! are amazing. my god..
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  • From llyoung on December 10, 2007
    Wonderful threesome. Hope you plan on doing more. Sorry for the lousy review - I'm a little incoherent right now from your wonderful writing. Thanks for another great chapter.
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  • From cynaga on December 10, 2007
    YOU are of the best pron writers on AFF - ESPECIALLY the threesome. WoW~! I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this. I feel like I'm there with the characters and it's so smooth, nothing ever seems awkward.

    Thanks for sharing your time and your TALENT and I can't wait for more! :D
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  • From on December 10, 2007
    Ahaha! Reading this really feels like watching porn! I love it!
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