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Reviews for Penance

By : Trollmia
  • From EzriCandy on December 18, 2009
    Oh hell yes! I loved Hisashi's punishment! It was perfect. Poor Hinata-chan...that was so evil of him to do to her.

    I think my favorite parts of this story were Orochimaru's pervy-ness towards half nakie Sasuke and Sasuke going to take a flying leap out of the window only to have Jiraiya stop him.

    I can't wait to see Tenten's reaction to Hina-chan's incubus :-D

    Great job and I'm so glad you're back to writing! Keep going!!
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 16, 2009
    not bad a pair you dont normal see together i kinda liked it
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  • From ANON - yourdearestwish on December 15, 2009
    Great story. I like hina/sasu as a pair and him as a sexy demon is too good. Kudos, Dearest
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  • From EzriCandy on December 06, 2009
    OMG I couldn't believe when I saw that you had updated! Its been so long its just good to see you writing again.

    I enjoyed the new chapters immensely! I decided to read the entire story over again and I just love it! I love how Sasuke took care of his sick Hinata. It was just so sweet and I loved Gaara's reaction the the 'self writing-pencil.'

    Also, yours is the only story where I've seen Gaara and Tenten together and you've made them very cute together! Great job on that.

    This story is just wonderful and I can't wait for more! Update when you can and of course, my high praise of this piece of SasuHina goodness will follow shortly!

    Ezzie

    *Off to read the other updated story*
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on October 28, 2008
    I'm So In Love With This Story.Tantalizing.And Well-Written,As Well. =)
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  • From ANON - dragonslayer on September 14, 2008
    oh my god this story is still great I wish it would be updated soon!
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  • From ANON - rylolynn on August 09, 2007
    Just like I said before, love it! That was a great use of Sai.

    So who was right? Sasuke or Hinata? Was Sasuke over reacting or Hinata too Naïve?
    Can't wait to read more. *stares at computer waiting for another update*
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  • From Chrono22 on August 03, 2007
    As I think I said before, I have never gave the Sasuke/Hinata pairing a thought but wow. I hope there will be more chapters to this yummy story in the future.

    Tainted InuShemeeko
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  • From Chrono22 on August 03, 2007
    I loved chapter 11 and I plan on reading more as soon as I get a chance.

    Tainted InuShemeeko
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  • From Chrono22 on August 01, 2007
    Wow I have read the first four chapters of this story and I find them very interesting. I am looking forward to getting chance to read more. A Sasuke/ Hinata pairing I never thought of that before.

    Tainted InuShemeeko
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  • From crazycheryl on July 13, 2007
    I loved it and can't wait for more. I was great. I love the change in Saskae. It flows so well. Please MORE!!
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  • From ANON - rylolynn on July 06, 2007
    ahhh... so beautiful. I really liked this story it is very interesting and can't wait to read more. *stares at computer waiting for an update* (Then sneeks off to Hinata's room to steal her painting of smexy incubus Sasuke.)
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  • From ANON - Legilmyth on June 01, 2007
    I love this story more and more every time I read another chapter. Good work, I can't wait to see where you go with it.
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  • From ANON - KIMMIE J on May 29, 2007
    I've just started to like this pairing, so this story is a nice find. So...please hurry with the sex!! Lol.
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  • From ANON - ezzy on May 25, 2007
    Wow, its been a while since I've had a chance to review, but gods above, this chapter and the last were just wonderful! I never really had a connection to Tenten, but this is making me love her. Such wonderful writing and amazing ideas..you always keep my attention with your fics. I so cant wait to see how their relationship progresses. Amazing job!!!

    Ezzy
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