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By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Rainshi on May 24, 2007
    weeeeeeeeeeeee I love this story!!!!!! It's Me Rainshi from Y!Gallery!!! I love this story just as much as I love your Yaoi story you're just great all around I hope you contiune all of your stories soon!
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  • From roseying on May 23, 2007
    YEAH!!!! Finally got some action going on right toward the end there!!! And it was set up so nicely too. Anyway, I like the name you gave the chapter, "Yeah, he can play fetch too." That just gave me the chuckles. Thanks for this and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
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  • From roseying on May 22, 2007
    Oh wow...what a close call, I totally freaked out over a possible terminal illness that she may have had over nothing. That's what I get for forgetting that she faints a lot--it just goes to show that there's so many directions this fic could be taken in. By the way, how did Sasuke "sense" there was something wrong with Hinata? Did they somehow form a link of some sort? I also can't wait to find out what happens next. thanks for the update.
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  • From roseying on May 08, 2007
    Wow...this chapter came quick. Cool, now I know how Gaara plays into this. I think it's so cute that Sasuke is so worried about Hinata. Was her fainting spell what made him panicked? Or, is he just a worrywart? I wonder how Hinata's going to explain Akamaru's sudden appearance. And what a cliffhanger! I hope she is alright, and that her fainting spell is just due to her being her normal self. Hehe, thanks for this and I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - I like Angst on May 06, 2007
    That was wow. You really are a great writer of sensual prose. I reallyl ike this story, and I'm so happy you updated. I look forward to all the tasty bits coming up!
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  • From roseying on May 05, 2007
    YES!! The long awaited chapter is out! Yea! Anyway, now that I've calmed down you'd probably want my thoughts? I'm wondering how Hinata is going to bring up the topic of arousal to Tenten w/o also telling her who is causing her arousal. It's probably going to be very awkward. I'm also wondering if Gaara and Naruto are going to play a bigger part to this story. I also just realized that because Sasuke can touch others even if they can't sense him, therefore, if anyone does accuse Hinata of being crazy, he can just touch them! But in getting Hinata out of the psyche ward, he'll probably have to fend off demon slayers, exorcists, scientists or what not instead. Anyway, enough of my random thoughts--I like how Sasuke is now devoting himself to Hinata, even at the expense of hunger. Hopefully, he can hang in there. I thought the ending to chapter 8 was so cute! Can't wait to see what happens next! I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Blah on April 02, 2007
    Graet story!
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - the_amber_dragonfly on March 27, 2007
    LOVE IT! Not sure when the last time you updated was, but please continue this! It's not often I find such a good read. Keep it up!
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  • From roseying on March 20, 2007
    Hehe...this is getting too funny. If I were in Hinata's shoes, I would kill Sasuke for that. Or, maybe lock him up or tie him down next time someone visits. I definitely wouldn't be happy if my freedom was on the line for all those stunts he pulls. Then again, he can't be blamed for all of it; no one likes to be ignored. Anyway, thanks for explaining how he can manipulate objects w/o anyone noticing. It seems if he wanted to, with Hinata's help, he is able to prove his existence. I wonder if Hinata actually knows he's an incubus (I mean she knows he's a demon but not what kind, right?) Hmm...well, thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to the next update. (btw, can't thank you enough for keeping the updates frequent...it's nice to get a little cuteness from this couple)
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  • From ANON - blisblop on March 13, 2007
    Those wings, soo sexy, this is well done and so unusual, I love it.
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  • From inuyoukai8 on March 13, 2007
    you are evil to leave it there! But I love the update! Good job as always!
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  • From roseying on March 13, 2007
    awww...this is SO CUTE!!! They're bonding. And Hinata's got the sixth sense. That's terrific. I'm so excited to see what direction you're going to take this. I cannot wait for the next update. Is she really going to be able to try flying? And how are they going to deal with public situations? Can Sasuke prove his presence to others if he really wants to? Like for example, could he lift some object up and everyone who is not Hinata would only be able to see a floating object? Can people see the sheet he's wearing? Or do things just look like they disappear when he touches them? You don't really have to answer questions--I think I just got a little overexcited. Anyway, keep it up and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - b on March 10, 2007
    What an unusual idea.I can't wait untillshe believes him
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  • From inuyoukai8 on March 09, 2007
    I LOVE YOU!!!! This is so awesome!
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  • From roseying on March 09, 2007
    Hmmm...I have to admit I was surprised she was willing to give consent to this kind of arrangement so quickly. I mean, it was just a moment ago when she felt like she had lost it. I was totally expecting Sasuke to go through a bunch of trials just to convince her that he is not a figment of her imagination. Now, they actually seem to be on friendly terms, so this fic is moving a lot faster than I expected. Then again, maybe she's not completely convinced and just thought it didn't matter whether or not he was a figment of her imagination--he seems to be harmless, therefore, it was probably easier to just comply. Oh well, whatever the case, I guess I'll find out soon. I can't wait to see where you're going to go with this. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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