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By : Trollmia
  • From kibgarlove on March 09, 2007
    Awesome story! Very unique!
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  • From Silent Pluto on March 05, 2007
    wow I can see a long hard wait for our poor sasuke! ^_^
    Great story, you must go on, it's fun, and new.
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  • From ANON - Angel on March 05, 2007
    I love the story plz continue....
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  • From ANON - Marstic666 on March 03, 2007
    OMG! I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE 4 THE LOVE OF GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From roseying on February 28, 2007
    stupid moment of downtime, just when I was about to click "review" that stupid webpage shows up. Anyway, so HAPPY you updated! Poor Hinata is distressed! I appreciate you adding in more detail to describe Sasuke as an incubus. When you mentioned large wings earlier, I was imagining the form Sasuke transformed into in his battle against Naruto at the Valley of the End (yeah--that's not a very attractive image). Anyway, your version suits this story much better so I'm very happy about that. Also happy to see that Naruto and Gaara have made an appearance. Are they still demon vessels in this fic or are they just normal cops? I guess I'll find out as the story progresses. Looking forward to your next update and keep the work.
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  • From ANON - ezri-candy on February 26, 2007
    Oohh...naru and Gaara as firefighters...thats just a beautiful image! You did a great job on this...i kinda feel bad for both Hina-chan and Sasuke kun. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

    Ezri
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  • From inuyoukai8 on February 26, 2007
    I still love it!!!! I would shower you with gifts of Pocky I love it so much!
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  • From ANON - b on February 26, 2007
    I like this alot!Please continue.
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  • From roseying on February 26, 2007
    Hehe, Hinata is also funny in this fic: "'Is it ok if I faint?' she whispered hoarsely.'Faint?' But he didn’t get any answer from the pale eyed woman because her eyes rolled back and she went limp underneath him.
    She had fainted." This story is so original and I love how you can put a little humor in such an awkward first meeting! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Legilmyth on February 21, 2007
    Wow, talk about an original idea, I think its great. Keep up the good work!

    Legilmyth
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  • From inuyoukai8 on February 19, 2007
    Woo! an update! I am so excited about this story... I love it!
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  • From ANON - ezri-candy on February 14, 2007
    Oh that was mean!! What an evil place to leave it...but thats okay! I know I'll eventually get more. I love the glimpse into Hinata's past. It makes me want to know if she had seen Sasuke before or if it was other demons like he thought.

    Wonderful job as usual! I'll be eagerly awaiting more!

    Ezzy
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on February 14, 2007
    I'm not above begging for more with tears.

    TT__TT Pwease continue... *Puppy-dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - JaneDoe01 on February 14, 2007
    How does incubus-sasuke looks like? Is it the form when he activates his cursed seal? You should draw a picture! Anyway, I LIKE UR STORY!!
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  • From inuyoukai8 on February 14, 2007
    cry for more? Hell Yeah! I'm cryin I'm cryin! This awesome!
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