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By : DarkRainFiend

From ANON - nicole on January 22, 2017
I am in love with this story, please, please release the next chapter. Shino x Naruto forever!
P.S.: fuck Sasuke and pink dumb slut :)

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From yukina15 on July 12, 2016
Beautifully done it showed passion and overwhelming love for each other. Please finish this!

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From ANON - silverblaise on March 01, 2012
But why did you never write and post the third part?? WHY??!?!? I mean the second chapter can serve as an ending, it's pretty easy to guess that either Sakura's infertile or she's done something to herself to stop her conceiving as some kind of twisted ploy to keep Sasuke with her, but it still would have been nice to have the last part to wind everything up and see Sasuke get the comeuppance he so richly deserves. :-P
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From ANON - Aots on August 10, 2011
So... you must finish this because I'm under the impression that I will be seeing a pregnant Naruto in the last(?) chapter!
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From AvidYasha on July 05, 2011
i cant wait to read the third chapter please continue !!!!!!
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From ANON - Demoninmysoul on January 25, 2011
UWAA! Again! I really want to see the end of this story!!! The way you picture the characters is waaay too realistic! It fits them perfectly! And to top it off the bedscene in the second chapter was incredible! Now I just want to see how things develope and settle...And preferably a huge slap in the face for the Uchiha-bastard!!!
If you don1t want to post, or just e-mailing is easier, I'd be more than glad to recieve it!
My adress is demoninmysoul@gmail.com
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From yaoihentai69 on December 27, 2010
ah~ So sweet! -kicks Sasuke- Can't say I've ever liked the teme. I'm so happy Shino was there for him. ^o^ The though of another part has me all excited; I do hope there will still be one. I've really enjoyed this story thus far.
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From Metriclove on April 30, 2010
wow that was incredible O.O

i wish you would write a multi-chapter story (more than 2 ch)

i feel like that one chapter could pass for at least 3 chs though lol.. i hope ch 2 is just as long or longer =P
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From ANON - stephanie on December 08, 2009
if i give the puppy dog eyes will u update soon please this is an amazing story an im jumping up an down awaiting eagarly your next chapter or better yet some more shino naruto fics yay
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From Xenosangel on August 28, 2009
Ummm....Wow. Just wow. I am so emotionally and physically drained after reading this. With yet one more chapter to come! You are just SO amazing. Your lemon was fantastic. The story is riveting and I'm at a complete loss. Your awesome. End of story. Thank you so much
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From CrisNoWait on August 23, 2009
CHAPTER 2
YEAH, FOR SEARCH FUNCTIONS!!! I been here awhile, but never learned all the forum functions, I'm so glad I checked the Naruto Fandom, by hitting *latest from a Naruto profile page: it gave me the Naruto newest updates. But then on the left you hit the 1st option "Naruto" from there Yaoi, and then THIS GREAT PAIRING!!!

I thought I should share that for others seeking great stories, it is how I found you and this wonderful read. Oh I'll check your profile everyday to see when this or something else you wrote updates. ^^ the best way w/o email notice or subscription options on aff - is to save the author's profile under our browser "favorites" LOL! Now I'll know just when you update :3

Now this chapter GAHHHHH!!! Nosebleed Central!! So ROMANTIC, AND SEXY, AND ADORABLE!!! A hot BUG NINJA screaming XDDDDDDDDD!! The emotional content alone is awesome! Now Naru wants to move forward and Kyuubi is all for it, this is the best possible resolution for both the lonely lovers. Not lonely anymore, thanks to YOU! I'm feeling sorry for Sasuke, too even though he is a real bastard in this fiction. He should have opened up to Naruto when he had the chance. Judging by the way Naruto was so wrapped up in him; I'm certain that Naruto given the chance: would have agreed to allow Sasuke to fuck who ever he needed to "continue his clan."

Shame Naruto would have said it was ok if only Sasuke had been honest "thank gods for Kyuubi not letting Naruto get knocked up by Sasuke." Well the fox wouldn't have given Sasuke a kid from Naruto anyway, so the situation wouldn't have changed much other than Naruto telling Sasuke he can fuck some chick for that purpose.

That dummy. He's gonna feel more stupid when he discovers Naruto has moved on, and I suspect Shino's not going to allow Sasuke the chance to confess his "hidden love for Naruto." Although I hope he doesn't just kill him outright for how deeply he hurt Naruto. Well Shino has a lot of self control I just hope he doesn't think that once Sasuke ask forgiveness that it will change anything between him and Naruto.

O_o That would be dangerous, for Sasuke, a heartbroken Shino after the two of them came so far....Well I love the way you've developed Naru and Shino even Sasuke, I don't hate him I just like Shino more. lol! And although twisted, Sasuke has his reasons for what he did. Now he's the one getting used, by Sakura I wonder how he's going to react...I hope the pink hair ninja will survive his wrath once she confesses why she is not prego yet...

That's divine justice, but so cruel: Dose Sasuke deserve that? Yeah more than likely he does, but it's sad all the same.

Thanks for the great read looking forward to more. =3
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From CrisNoWait on August 23, 2009
CHPATER 1
Well I just need to say, EXCELLENT JOB!!! The angst is balanced out by the reassurance of something better. The way your Naruto character expresses the depths of his turmoil and how you've developed him to still reach for the possibility that he can and someone does love him: is wonderful. He's never resentful even in his own despair he doesn't judge Sasuke for what he wants..to continue his clan.. he just excepts that. Along with some measure of blame. But still it isn't until later that Naru admits Sasuke is not good for him, then he calls the raven what he is..a bastard!

Then you did a great job developing Shino; I love his patience with Naruto, biding his time. And just when he knew his time had been cut short: by Naruto's decision to perhaps leave the village. You had the bug guy take the leap of faith.

This is a feel good fic I like those that show the ninja going through turmoil and then coming to the realization that there is hope...still. I'm going to read the next chapter I expect it to be as great as the first.
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From NarutoVixin on August 22, 2009
i will be waiting for updates on this tale its hot and sweet just what my mind needs to go to sleep now good luck and keep up the hard work and thanks for sharing
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From ANON - kc on June 16, 2009
I just located your story today and I have enjoyed the first two chapters. I am SO HAPPY that you had no plans to have Naruto end up with Sasuke again. I personally hate when authors allow Sasuke to treat Naruto like shit (ie sleep around with others)and break his heart, then they have Naruto "forgive" Sasuke and they stay together or get back together in the end. Personally I prefer the story's that have Naruto find happiness without Sasuke. I also like the Naruto/Shino pairing. Looking forward to the third chapter when you get it posted. :)
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From becca330 on June 16, 2009
Wow. What a beautifully written story. Your pacing is excellent and I particularly like the way you are able to convey so much in thoughts, emotions, and actions with few, well-chosen words. You keep them all in-character, making their thoughts and actions such believe parts of who they are. Well done. Thank you. While I try not to badger authors about continuing their stories, I admit I'm hoping you will do so here. The 'I hate Sasuke' part of me is dying to to see his reactions and face-plant when Naruto and Shino return. And I'm wondering whether or not Sakura's lack of 'productivity' is intentional, unknown, or a quickly fading secret. I would also love to know the reactions/thoughts of other close characters like Iruka and Kakashi. I would especially like to know what the hell Sakura is thinking.

I'm a big fan of Naruto/Shino (and Naruto/Shikamaru), and sadly there are not enough of them; particularly not enough written so well as yours. I have NEVER been a fan of Naruto/Sasuke pairing as I think Sasuke is a total ass and undeserving of Naruto's affections. So yeah, I also have a fondness for stories where that little shit gets what's coming to him.

Anyway, I know I'll be keeping an eye out to see if you continue this story. Regardless of the choice you make in that regard, thank you again for a wonderful story.
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