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Reviews for Taking Advantage

By : DarkRainFiend
  • From Georginna on March 28, 2009
    Great job! I really love this story. I can't wait to see the final chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Sunsparked on November 01, 2008
    oh my gosh! more please!
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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on November 01, 2008
    This story is so beautifully written and it truly shows the heartache of being betrayed by the one you loved so dearly. It's extremely realistic and really reflects the pain that comes with trying to move on and the insecurities of a man longing to be loved but scared because of the way he's grown up.
    Letting the reader see into the eyes of the characters and showing how those around Naruto are affected by his despair was great. Giving Shino the loving and understanding demeanor though he is inexperienced except for his longtime love of the blonde was a nice touch. Also showing Sasuke's feelings and remorse, how it is tearing him apart on the inside and out over making such a terrible mistake and hurting his precious person.
    I would like to see inside of Sakura's head, even though I don't really like her. I think it would kind of bring the whole story together to see the point of view from the girl that made Sasuke lose it all. I think you should also put Iruka's thoughts in there seeing that he's the closest thing to family Naruto has ever had besides the fox. Kakashi's take on things seems like a must to write because all of this is going on within the old Team 7. For Sakura not to be able to get pregnant and for Naruto to come back swollen with Shino's child would be good to show Sasuke what he could've had but never will.
    I'd love to read any version of those scenarios in the following chapters. Yes, CHAPTERS. This story is too good to stop with just three. It has so much potential! Please e-mail me when you update! hikaru_miraegofblaze@yahoo.com or if you have a fanfiction.net account, PM me under mangatemptresshikaru. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, I look forward to much much more!
    Love,
    mangatemptresshikaru
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  • From KatrinaCarter on August 23, 2008
    OMG!!! You so rock! I hope you can get more of this one out soon!

    *eyes gleam* I bet that Sakura has been aborting the baby that Sasuke wants......*cackles*
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  • From Katheirne on August 03, 2008
    Hey...................I really love this story...........please continue it!!!!!!!!!! I want to see what happens next!!!!
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  • From serenagold on August 01, 2008
    Bwaahahahahahahahhaahhahaah!! =^^=

    Ha ha ha... I was just reading all the other reviews and came across the one I left for your first chapter A WHOLE YEAR AGO and am laughing my ass off. Either I called a lot of what was going to happen, or you decided to make me one happy vixen. Either way, chapter 2 was beyond excellent and I was simply thrilled in reading it. :D Its been quite a while since the first one and I read both chapters in one shot and enjoyed every minute of it. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the conclusion come 2009 (although hopefully you won't make us wait this long next time. hehe.)
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  • From serenagold on August 01, 2008
    Excellent!!
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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on July 31, 2008
    Yay for ShinoNaru! Good job with this. Nice grammar and spelling. I look forward to part three.
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  • From ANON - masako on July 31, 2008
    i like this story...i'm actually kind of glad this isn't going to be a naru/sasu fic. the pairing is fun and i love your writing style. good luck with the rest and happy writing.
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  • From LadyLaran on July 30, 2008
    *jumps into a pool of cold water*

    WOW...HOT! I am so glad to see you continue this. I love your stories and have been hoping you would carry this one on.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 30, 2008
    This story is great!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2008
    Ummm, that was so sweet and loving. I can't wait until you update again cough*in a year*cough. good luck with the next chapter, hopefully they will be back in the village for some drama.
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  • From Soulcaster on July 03, 2008

    i say make it a two shot but make it longer than the first the story is heart wrenching

    but so sweet the plot is amazing and i loce seeing shino with naruto their is not enough stories of them out their and i gotta say your one oof the best writers io have the pleasure of reading from Good LUCK and hope
    u update soon

    Cha
    If u do update i beg YOu to E-mail me at jersey_girl1789@hotmail.com
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    I beggggggggggggggggggggg YOU

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  • From ANON - rach on March 24, 2008
    i think you should make it a three shot with the after side of things. long chapters would be awsome too.
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  • From Mort on February 01, 2008
    This a wonderful story-
    It was a pleasure to read-
    I hope that you do, do a continuation-
    I would love to see it-


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