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Reviews for Taking Advantage

By : DarkRainFiend
  • From MellyLa on May 04, 2007
    I would definitely like to see this fic finished in a multiparter. It is such a great fic now. It's different not only because of the pairing butthe story line has a different twist to it.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 01, 2007
    More!!! Much more. You have the beginnings of an epic tale here, run with it.

    There can never be enough lemon. 'Nuff said.
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  • From Narutolovr on May 01, 2007
    I say multi-chapter! It would be easier for you to do than a very long one-shot to the two-shot.
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on May 01, 2007
    Hmm I think multiple chapter would be better. And as for a lemon, of course it would be nice but I think you should concentrate on the way you want the relationship between Naruto and Shino to turn out and don't try to force a lemon in there. I'm so happy that you'll add at least one more chapter to this because I so wanted to read more.
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  • From katsuyo on May 01, 2007
    You handle the pairing well and you managed to still keep them in character.... that's a big deal for a crack pairing. SO, huge kudos to you for pulling it off.. :D
    It would be great if you could continue this story as a small multichapter, so we can get a better sense of the relationship developing between Shino and Naruto.
    Right now, it's just a tease... but already you get a sense that it would be a very loving relationship.
    I really do love the whole idea of Naruto carrying Shino's child and best of all - it's never been done.
    In regards to the lemon, I would rather see you just concentrate on the story and let the plot develop in its own way. If you're actively having to plan a lemon - there's pressure to deliver... which could prove disasterous.
    If some citrus content comes into play... that's cool but I would definitely be more interested in seeing where you take this story.
    Good luck!

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  • From xenawp532 on May 01, 2007
    I would like a longer story 5 plus chapters would be great,
    i'm looking forward to all of the smut between Shino & Naruto.
    And i want to know how Sausake is going to react to Naruto being mpreg.
    Love the story so far.

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  • From DirewolfLilith on May 01, 2007
    okay, since this is such a great story and I am in love with long single-chapters, thats how my vote swings on that one... as for lemons, i will shamelessly beg for some shinonaru goodness!!! pleaaaase!!!
    -direwolflilith
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  • From Genderless on May 01, 2007
    I would be very happy with a multichapter fic; I definitely couldn't stand it, if it stayed as a one-shot. I'll read as much as you want to write - I prefer longer fics on the whole.
    As for the lemon, I think it should be vague allusions to, with warm tones, sorta like rose-tinted memories.
    Please keep writing; I love this fic and have been waiting for more since you posted it.

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  • From MikiyuSado on May 01, 2007
    damn, and here I thought you updated. =D

    I'm not sure which I want more. You did exceptionally well with just the one chapter (I thorougly enjoyed reading it) and I think that one more really long chapter would be wonderful. But I can't help thinking that just two chapters isn't a long enough story =/ would the story itself turn out longer with the 5 chapters instead of 2, or would it be the same length with just more chapters? If it's the same length then I say two chapters (because I'm impatient and don't like waiting around for updates =C) However, if the 5 chapter story is longer then I want that =D

    While smut's almost always a good thing, I prefer plot over smut. If you think a lemon would ruin the flow of the story, then I vote leave it out.

    Sorry, ^-^;; I hope I made what I want clear. It kind of seems like I'm a little indecisive >.>
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  • From Platter on May 01, 2007
    methinks you should do a multi chapter, since it seems like a REALLY good story; at least, I like it a lot so far ^_^
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on April 30, 2007
    either a two shot or a short multi-chaptered fic would be nice. personally, i rather get the two shot but if its eaiser on you to write the multi-chapters, go for it. i just like long reads. (^__^) now the thought on the lemon: true, this fic isn't about a physical relationship between shino and naru but more about a personal/intimate relationship between the two and us seeing the changes as they occur. but shinoxnaru lemons are so rare, that it would be a real treat to see an exceptionally well written one with loads of emotions attached to it. one that would inspire and hopefully influence other authors to this pairing. i say: go for the lemon! but either way, i'm looking foward to whatever you choose!!!

    ~Devious
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  • From mscs3 on April 30, 2007
    I really enjoy long chapters. I personally think that there are not enough Shino/Naru fics out there and yours was especially well written. As for Lemons, well I'm a yaoi pervert so of course I would vote for one, but really this is your story and if you don't think that you could do it then thats fine as well. Hoping for a new chapter. Me
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  • From xunerasablesinx on April 23, 2007
    OMFG~! This was awesome! Continue please! Make Sasuke suffer for his idiocy and make Sakura suffer when she realizes she's just being used as a baby maker! Mwahaha!

    Can't wait until the next chapter!

    Ja ne
    ~Sin
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  • From Lisajane on April 09, 2007
    Hey, that was a fantastic chapter, so much. I was sad for Naruto catching Sasuke bedding mega-forehead. The touching scene in the hokage's office with Tsunade and Shino made me cry, it was very emotional. The insight on why Sasuke did what he did, made me understand, but he's still a bastard for hurting Naruto.

    Oh and the ending with Naruto and Shino was just so cute, I love it how you have portrayed Shino. I haven't actually found many good Shino/Naruto pairing stories, and was very happy to find yours. So, hope to see chapter 2 soon. And you said that it was only going to be a two-shot. So, I hope in the next chapter, Naruto actually gets pregnant by Shino, and it's all good to rub it in Sasuke's face.

    Anyway, please update soon, I really wanna know what happens next.

    Ja and take care.
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  • From Kare on March 13, 2007
    Yes!! Yes!! Please write more on this, i wish you would make it a multi-chapter but i'll take what i can get. I really like this story!!! I love how you developed Shino, cause he doesn't get a backstory like most other people in Naruto but he is so very pimp. Yeah, i thought he was definately a different person to be paired up with Naruto, but you did it convincingly(sp?). Besides that, as much as I like SasuNaru, i do like fics like this too where Sasuke gets it for being such an ass and Naruto pairs up with someone else that loves him and has been glaring at Sasuke from behind corners. Anyways, great story!! Please update, i'll give you e-cookies!!!
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