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Reviews for Taking Advantage

By : DarkRainFiend
  • From ANON - tenshiumiko on October 17, 2007
    Make it a two-shot with Naruto (and Shino) coming back to Konoha pregnant with Shino's baby!!! I wanna see the look on his face! Mwa hahahahahahahhahaha!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Abbi on October 16, 2007
    PLEASE are you gonna update any time soon??? I want to know what's gonna happen next. This is one of those times when I feel desperate to know what's going to come next.
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  • From ANON - Sandie on October 16, 2007
    Please, please, please continue with this story. There's so much more I want to know. I want to read Sasuke's reaction when he sees Naruto with Shino and if Naruto gets pregnant, that is so much the better. I honestly think your story should have at least another chapter, just to clear everything up. I vote for you to add another chapter. Please let it be soon, I'm so desperate, I love this fic. PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE (Gets down on knees and cries)

    Anyway, sorry about that.
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  • From ANON - Nekoenchantment on October 05, 2007
    I would really like to see another chapter for this story^^
    I usually don't go for this ship but you pulled it off so perfectly. You left me wanting to know more.
    I hope you decide to write another chapter
    'bow'
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  • From Shedbloodytears on September 05, 2007
    TWO SHOT! TWO SHOT!

    *sniffles* That was beautiful... My soul cries out for another chapter, or even two. I need to know what happens next. What happens when Shino and Naruto go back to Konoha? Does Sasuke confess and get shot-down horribly, preferably with a death-threat from Shino, and kills himself with a spork? Does Sakura get lynched by a mob of Naruto's friends? How does Shino's family react? Does Shino pick a fight with Sasuke to get revenge for Naruto? Do they have a happily ever after?

    *puppy eyes*
    PWEEEEASEE do another?!
    If you do, my email is h_oneybunz@hotmail.com ^_^!

    Ougon
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  • From Kagenoshi on August 23, 2007
    Please, Please, Please, make this a multi-chaptered story!! I like Shino and Naruto together it's so sweet and I need my daily dose of Mpreg!! If you are gonna update email me at kagenoshiseisai@aol.com. Hope to see another chapter to this...this story is really good and I looooooooooove the angst!
    ~Kami~
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  • From LadyLaran on August 22, 2007
    This has an incomplete feel. Yeah, it makes a great one shot but at the same time, it needs more. I think you need to complete the plot and make it a two shot!
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  • From ANON - rage on August 07, 2007
    please add more to dis story, its so good. and for da lemon just do what ya think fits with da chap. it dont matter what ya do, dis is a good story already.
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  • From ANON - YaoiFanGirl13 on July 30, 2007
    Hey please send me the updates to Taking Advantage please i love this story i look for it when ever i come onto here so please if you can send it to me at DStarStarlight@aol.com.
    Thank you.Ja Ne.
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  • From KodaijinYurei on July 25, 2007
    O.O This has to be one of the most emotion invoking fics that I have ever read and I love it to pieces. I've never really had an interest in Shino/Naruto but you have converted me over. The language you use between the two is beautiful; and Naruto isn't so emotional that you wish to bash his head in with a stick. Which makes your story that much more awesome.

    But you must continue with this fic, in either another really long chapter or separating it doesn't matter. And I must say I would like to read a nice descriptive lemon, make it fluffy and gentle to keep with the tone of the story but I would like to know the details. I am addicted to smut ^.^
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  • From ANON - Chibi on July 24, 2007
    Well maybe you should do a two-shot and have a short yet passionate lemon showing how much Shino really does love Naruto, show about Shino's family in their reaction about Shino and Naruto. I'd say in the end, Shino's family would help them get ready for marriage and Naruto should get preg and the family is helping him get through the preg and your desicion about gender should be yours. But yeah, I'm kinda random at times so, hopefully this makes sense. Have fun! X3 I still enjoy this story!
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  • From avila7989 on July 24, 2007
    i want to see this fic be a tow-shot!! i caint wait this is a awseom fic!!
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  • From KitsuneNoMari on July 24, 2007
    Please oh please update! This is such a well written story! With so much emotions, just brimming out in every paragraph!

    Hmmm... It doesn't matter to me if it would be a two-shot fic or mulit chater one as long as the story continues. And yes, the LEMON!!! There must be a lemon! A smoldering hot lemon ending up with a little bundle of joy in Shino and Naru-chan's arms. That would be sweet! And don't forget to RUB it in the UCHIHA-teme's face so he could wallow on his own guilt. I would love to see him suffer (not that I hate the guy, but he hurts Naruto far too many times for my own liking...)and SUFFER he will, ne?

    Please, plese oh please update... Naru-chan deserves a lot of happiness for all the suffering he has gone through...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2007
    ou really have to keep gong with this story i want to see naruto have a happy ending and maybe have shino be worthy enough
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  • From ANON - tortilla lady on July 15, 2007
    lemon please!! and longer too, this story got me hooked on shino/naruto.
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