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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    chapter 82 I liked the beginning of this chapter. It's a classic setup. However, I have to wonder if they want to create a servant that would never be able to bead anyways then why allow them to reach puberty and if that couldn't be stopped at all why not just have them be sterile as inactive? I mean sex could be a real distraction to a soldier. The last part of the chapter was amusing. Actually this whole chapter had a bit more levity to it than usual which was nice.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2010
    my favorite things

    1. the brother hug...thank you for that. i love your sasu he is so forgiving and he still loves his aniki..loved it.
    2. the fact that inari is realising he wants konohamaru for a friend much more than a lover...this happens in real life too....we experiment with friends, we try a relationship it doesn't work, we move on....and the idea of kono-kun with one of the kits in the future...wooot gets me all excited.
    3. the private bathroom....sasuke gets to keep his fluffy soft naruto all for himself no one else should see fluffy soft naruto, just like no one else should see sasuke's face in ecstasy. i loved this gift for them.

    so yeah i've said LOVED IT like 700 times or whatever...but I LOVED IT....so yeah!
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  • From ANON - blu kat on June 06, 2010
    I knew I was going to like this. It's not what I thought it was going to be but better. Spelling and grammar are good. Thanks for the read.
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 81 Sasuke's realization that he had been spending too much time behind his desk is significant. The fact that he recognizes the leader must wear many hats is not always an easy realization. As for the meeting at the end I quite liked it. I wonder how Naruto would deal with the fact that some people will view such as an employer and not the head of the family.
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  • From cynaga on June 06, 2010
    Can't wait for the kits to get here. =)
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 80 your mature seen was pretty good. Also I like the conversation at the end where everyone was encouraging Kiba to explore his human side.
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 79 it would be interesting to see more of Konohamaru/Inari relationship. Not necessarily for the plot itself, but simply your views on certain matters that were commented on. Anyway I do like the subtle way revenge is being served. It's almost slightly more sadistic than simply killing him. Not quite what I've come to expect which is a pleasant surprise.
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 78 happy endings all around? Probably a little late to point that out since I've pretty much been assuming that for a while now. The downside to such a thing is that it adds predictability. Predictability eliminates dramatic tension, but on the flip side it makes some readers happy.
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 77 this review will be interesting to write. Throughout the story you use the F. word to describe sex and while you apparently had a discussion on this earlier I missed out on that. Still, in this chapter you had Itachi draw a line between the F-word and sex. I wonder if your intention was to comment on other characters actions through him or was this simply meant to state his opinion.
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  • From RyuEarth on June 05, 2010
    I liked Choza in this chapter! =)
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  • From roro237 on June 05, 2010
    Ok wOw you have out did youself again! Back to back chapter with so much happening!! That was alot of people and emotions going on!!! Queen spacer you are the best:) From intense to amazing. I couldn't have imagined what the feeder would be like. But that vest is perfect:) Haku is just full of surprises?! I love it, his help with the babies will be envalueable:) All the gifts were wonderful. Especially the bath. You know I have to say it 'Yea Baby':)
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  • From Prism0467 on June 05, 2010
    SQUEE!!!

    BABY SHOWER!!!!!
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  • From roro237 on June 04, 2010
    OMG! I simply loved it:) You covered alot!! That why you're the cats meow:) The therapist was a dick. By Sasukes standards I cracked up at that. Well they called it that Klennethon Darrent would tell the old school Hyuga about Neji. Thank goodness that all worked out. The birth anniversary day is such a cute idea:) Of course the best for me was Sasuke idea of the 'mama feeder' and he can sew it together! That was brilliant and sweet and loving and I love how those two love each other! I got the fluffy-soft Naruto with that plan:) I didn't realize the desk was so scary?! But good it's put away:) I want Itachi to feel welcome in the family:) Ok I'm loving Sasuke even more when he says I have eight sons and a daughter:) You blew me away with this chapter! Awesome ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 04, 2010
    wonderful chapter once again.

    i loved the way hinata promised to help protect neji, and that we got to hear a bit more back story about neji's past. that bastard kd just can't keep from being meddlesome and trying to break up neji and shika. as if shika would ever leave uchiha to be with him!!!

    i have to admit i thought you were going to use shadow clones for feeding the babies, but picturing sasuke using some type of teat contraption is so much funnier.

    i can't wait to hear about babies climbing all over kisame and some how i don't think uncle itachi is going to be left out of the play time. i think kisame will rope him into playing with the kids especially his little niece that will look so much like sasuke's mother....that could be his redemption.
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  • From cynaga on June 04, 2010
    Hinata was wonderful and it was fun to read her. I like how your bring the characters original Kishimoto personality traits to the different universe.
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